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hello again some people liked the first story I did so I have another 
treat another story I did in secondary school it wasn't published but 
it was done I hope you like it because this may be my best story I did out of the others

Once upon a time there was this monster who lived near me. If you are wondering who is telling this story it  is me! Hi my name is cassy I am a girl, and I do a lot of things. I don't think you want to hear about me. Anyway about this monster she lives next to my house. And she has a family as well they came from outer space and they said they want to stay here forever! Don't they like their home or something? It started like this.

one day mother wanted us to welcome them but I did not like the idea I thought my mum went crazy at first but she was serious. And I said " you got to be kidding me." I did not want to go but my mum wanted me to. My mother said " come on cassy I bet you will be friends with them." friends? Friends with them! How disgusting! We all got dressed and started being on our way to the newcomers house. When we were nearby there o saw the house and the sight of it was not good. It looked terrible and disgusting I started walking back slowly so my mum wouldn't notice me. When she saw me she said "cassy! Come back here this instance!" then I said " but mum...." I got angry and as I came forward I kicked a stone. When we came to the house I felt like I was going to be sick my mum knocked o the door. " who is it?" my mum said " we are your neighbours" and the monster said "hold on." the little monster opened the door and called for his mum and his dad. The parents from the little child came and they said "who are you?" then my mum said "since you are new in the neighbour hood we offer to give to you this lovely present to you. And I almost forgot to tell you  that we are your new neighbours if you want us come to our house which is a couple of blocks away and the number of the house is 76. Goodbye and have a lovely day" I thought I was going to get eaten by them or even kill me! I ran home leaving them behind.

Monday came and I had to go to school I have a friend called Jerry. I knew him since first grade " I heard there were these new people and some of the class said that they are aliens from outer space and some say they are not" said Jerry then I said " they are aliens from outer space and guess what? My mum forced me to come and welcome them how stupid is that!" then Jerry standed still and then laughter came out from his mouth! I said to him " its not funny you know!" " it is!" he said I felt devastated. When we arrived school I shivered a lot and I did not know what to do "whats wrong?" Jerry said as soon as he finished laughing. " l..O..O..K   o..V.E..R   t..H.E..R..E" as I said it. Jerry saw the monster he did not know what to do. When I saw the monster I felt like wetting myself that is how much I was scared. Time I went to different lessons the monster was always there in the same classroom as me.

then it came to home time I grabbed Jerry and ran out of the school! When I arrived home the biggest mistake was there I can't believe what my mum did!! She invited the monster mother for tea in my house! I said to my mum "what the heck are you thinking mum! You invited a monster to tea in our house!" then my mum said " don't you ever talk to me like that again! I invited her because I wanted to! That's it you are not having dinner tonight!" then I got so angry I almost broke the stairs and my bedroom door. Then it came to dinner time my dad called me but I didn't want to listen to him. I put a notice on my door saying " no mums aloud and aliens"

my dad knocked on the door but I said " go away mum!" and dad said "its me your dad" "come in dad" I said. I told him what was the problem and how much I hated mum and he said " now now don't be like that she is the only mother you have" and I said " but what she did when the monster mother was here she shouted at me and oh by they way I am not having dinner when I finished reading my book I'm going straight to bed" and dad said " ok then see you in the morning and goodnight" and I  said"goodnight dad"

then morning came I did not want to go to school because of the monster. I still wasn't talking to my mum. Jerry was waiting for me outside my house "oh hello Jerry" I said as I came out of the door "so what happened when you arrived home yesterday?" but I said " I don't want to talk about it!" and he said " ok ok I was just checking did something bad happened?" said Jerry. Although I did not wan to tell  him anything mum is friends with the alien mum and I have a alien in my school!

O great what is going to happen next? When I got to school I completely ignored the alien and went to class. My teacher called Mrs hamp she had a note in her hand she started speaking " two people are moving to another class and won't be coming back anymore." I was kinding  hoping that I wasn't Mrs hamp said "Betty you will be moving on my gosh it can't be! Cassy you are going as well!" NO! NO! This can't be happening! Oh... thank gosh that it was a dream... I slept on my desk!
Mrs hamp said "two people are moving and won't be coming back anymore. Betty you are moving" please don't say me please don't say me "oh my gosh cassy you are moving!" NO! NO! NO!!!! This can't be happening! And Mrs hamp said " well you two will have to go now" I waved goodbye to Jerry.

I did not want to be near Betty as that was her name I came to the class before I opened the door my heart began to thump when I saw them from the window they were all aliens! I could not stand it my heart thumped faster and I did not know what to do I just stood there watching them. When it came to home time I ran out of the school leaving Jerry behind. I arrived home and my mum she was in a good mood "oh hello darling how was school?" said my mum "you know what? I hate school! I had to move to another class I arrived there all of them were aliens and I was the only one who was not!" that's what I told her so she said "yes it worked! Well I have some good news for you"

good news? What good news does she bring me now! I mean hello I am in a bad mood right now! "I phoned the school and asked them to change you to a alien class so you can get along" she said. My mum is the worse parent on the planet! She changes me to a different class I mean hello is she crazy or something?!?!!! I almost ended up dying because of her stupid idea!!!! I was in shock I went upstairs without saying a word I had to phone Jerry I needed his help. So I dialed his number "hello?" he said I said " hey Jerry how are you doing?" "I'm fine" he replied, I replied back saying " uh Jerry listen I have to talk to you about something" and he said "what do you want to talk about?" so I said "you know what? My mum phoned the school and she asked the teachers that if I can move classes! And just which class I went to? I went to the alien class!!! Then she said so I can get along!!!!" Jerry said " I'm so sorry about that cassy I feel so sorry for you" and I also said "guess what? I am the only one in the class that is not an alien! So Jerry please get me out of the class! I am begging you please help me I don't want to be like them!!""

he said "ok Cass I will do whatever it takes! I will get you out from that class!" and I replied back "but hurry!" then dinner came I talked to everyone except my mum because of what she did to me! "cassy why are you not talking to your mother?" said dad " because I don't want to.." I mumbled " I think you need a chat with me it will be after dinner" said dad when dinner was finished my dad followed me to my bedroom "cassy what is the matter?" said dad I replied back saying "I don't like mum a matter of fact I hate her!" he asked "what has she done to make you so mad?" I said "well she phoned the school saying that I should move to another class with the alien girl called Betty so I went found out it was a alien class and mum said so I can get along. It was stupid of here to say that and I will really get mad that she will say that I will have to live with Betty for the summer holidays!!!!!"  that's what I told him so dad had another talk with me and while that was going on my mum was washing the dishes she was listening to every word I say to my dad that was a big mistake. I am in deep, deep, deep trouble

"please talk to your mum cassy" said dad  and I said"ok but if she makes another mistake I am out of the house for good!" I went downstairs to see how she was doing " hi mum " I said she turned around and slapped me really hard put the plates down and ran to her room "ow!" I said "what have you done now?!" said dad and I said " I came to say hello and she turned around and slapped me!" so dad said " see what  you have done you had made her upset!" dad ran after her and tried to calm her down I just stood there  then I moved I went to my room to get my suit case I wanted to run away so badly I had a red mark on my cheek and I was hurting so much. I put everything in my suit case even my best clothes. I peeked outside my door and checked that my mum and dad was still I their room. And yes they was still there I quickly went to the bathroom to get my toothbrush.

and ran out of the door not slamming it. It was a bit cold out side I was thinking of which home to go to. Then I said I will go to Jerry's. Anyways his house is a couple of blocks away I knocked on the door "who is it " said the person "Mrs cream its me cassy" "hello cassy"said Mrs cream as she opened the door "whats the matter" she asked "I don't think I want to talk about it yet. Mrs cream is Jerry in?" and she said "oh yes he is in his room" I also asked her "can I stay here for a week please?" and she said " yes you can there is a spare bedroom upstairs on the left to Jerry's room" knock knock I banged on the door "go away!" hes said I and I said "hey Jerry its me!" and he said "cassy is that you? Come in." I explained what happened "but they will come looking for you!!" said Jerry I said "I don't flipping care!! And anyway I am staying here for a week I don't love them anymore and if that's how they are going to be let them....let them find me even with the police I will tell the police my side of the story and lets see who they believe! Oh please tell you mum that if they phone tell her to tell them that I am not here it makes it easier for me" that's what I said so Jerry went downstairs and told her and Mrs cream said "yes I will tell them that"

meanwhile back at home "come now jessy I am sure she didn't mean it" said dad "she did! Maybe I should had not move her to the alien class" said the mum "ok look let me call her cassy! Cassy!! Cassy!!! Where are you" him that is strange let us go to her room" when they got there her room was empty "where could she be?" said mum "look her cupboard is empty means she has run away!" said dad they phoned that they know but still no sign of her "what are we going to do!" said mum then she started to crying and said  "maybe I should have not slapped her and all of this would had not happened!"
"lets go to the police" said dad

meanwhile back at Jerry's "cassy may I ask you a question?" said Jerry "sure what is it?" I said "what happened to your cheek?" he said "my mum slapped me that's why" I said then Mrs cream came and took my downstairs to fix my cheek. At the police station my mum and dad was there "please help us!" said dad "what is the matter?" said the police man "we have been very bad parents and I slapped my daughter and she has run away!" said jessy  "and we don't know where she is!" said dad "you definitely  been very bad parents don't worry go home we will sort this out" said the police man.

the next day was Saturday that means we can have a lay in it was hot and Mrs cream went out and brought us ice-creams. Meanwhile back at home the police called and said they have found her in Jerry house and they said they will come in case I do something. There was a knock at the door I was kinding hoping it was not my parents. It was my parents I stayed in my new room "the jig is up Rachel I know you have cassy there if you have a problem you can talk with the police who will be arriving  just about now" said mum. The police came and it was about 4 of them I was seeing everything from the window I came downstairs and my mum and dad saw me and said "cassy!" "don't talk to me!" I said

the police came to the house and talked to me I said to them "my mum and dad been horrible to me" and to be honest I was telling them the truth. "what did they do to you which made you so mad darling" said the police woman so I explained and I told them "I tried to make up with my mum but then she turned around and slapped me! I still have the mark" and I showed it to them. And I also showed it to them. And I also told them I want to go to court so they can be in jail for the rest of their lives!

I also told them I wanted another mum and another dad. They said when they heard me say it to them then the police said "so shall it be written so shall it be done! But who will be your witness?" I said "a friend of mine call Jerry he has been my friend since first grade" I said July 30 2003 was the day of the court I was so excited I had dressed up nice
and smart. So does Jerry and his mum I have never in my life have been to court before. I had to go to the stand first then this lady asked some questions said "why did your mum forced you to go? And welcome the aliens?" then I said "  because my mum was nervous and did not want to go alone. I did not want to welcome them and yes she could had gone alone and I didn't want to go myself" she gave me some other questions "the next day of school if I'm right your mum phoned the school to change you to a different class which was the alien's?"


I said "yes" she also said "and you can't get along with them am I right?" "yes" I said (objection!) the judge "shut up and sit down before I change my mind carry on" "you wanted to love your mum again" (objection!)  " shut up you fool! Or else you get arrested! Carry on" said the judge the woman asked again "when you wanted to love your mum again she slapped you am I right?" "yes" I said the woman went to the judge and said "see the parents are horrible to this poor child she deserves to have another mum and dad" "the horrible parents will be in jail until they won't have the child back when they come back cassy will be moved to her class in school I rest my case"

the judged banged on the table I can't believe I won! I won! Take that you losers! I watched them as they went to their cell cages they said "I love you so much ring us ok?" I said "keep walking I'm not your child anymore so I don't know you! I will not ring you and I will not miss you Au roire asta besta baby!" I came out of the court and I had a carriage waiting for me! The person said "good afternoon princess cassy you will be the queens daughter  and if I may say the queen always wanted a daughter like you" I am the princess I am surprised .....anyway I always wanted to be a princess! "and I am sorry I forgot to tell you my name is alfie your  carriage driver so where ever you want to go I will always take you there" I went inside the carriage and said goodbye to everyone "come and visit soon" said Jerry I can't believe I actually did it and I am on my way to my new home. If I would of still lived with those parents I would had sued them I said to myself I can't wait to be home! "here we are your new home " said alfie I couldn't believe how big it was! The sight of it was just beautiful! There were long bridge and tall buildings. My new mother was waiting for me outside the castle doors

"my darling I am so happy to have you as my daughter " said the queen to be honest she did look pretty and she  also said "look at these dreadful clothes when you get inside you will change and look a bit different and you will wear a crown like me but a bit different it will have a bit more style to it and you will wear a pink dress and that's your favorite colour right?" "yes it is " I said. I wonder how those losers are doing in jail I bet they are saying I want my little girl back and crying like babies if they say another word about me I'm gonna put a bomb in their mouth so that they can blow up into pieces and then I can say I don't have to see them anymore because they would had been blown up and then next time I see them I will say ha! Ha!
suckers! And the next thing I will do is get a gun go to their house and I can tell the police that they tried to kill me


or they tried to sweet talk me as well I walked in my new house and man it was big and huge! This is the biggest house ive ever seen! Of course everyone was gathering round because of me "everyone this is my new daughter princess cassy!" said the queen. Everyone cheered how wonderful don't they know how to cheer louder? I mean com on people I am the new princess! And smile as you do it! "maids go and take princess cassy to her new room!"


the phone rang and the butler had to get it "hello who is this" he said "can I speck to cassy please?" said jessy
"and who may I ask whos speaking?" he said "I am her old parent" she said "ok princess cassy! Someone on the phone to speak with you" said the butler. I cam downstairs with my new clothes " hello who is it?" I said "cassy! We miss you so much!" said jessy so I said "what did I tell you? Go away and shut up! And I don't want to hear your voice again!!!" I dropped the phone "what is the matter darling you looked stressed out" said the queen "mother my old parents won't leave me alone and I hate them so much! An please mother if they phone again like if they say they want to speak to me can you tell the butler to drop the phone please?" I said "ok" said the queen and I said " oh thank you mother I love you so much" when I hear them I felt like blowing up and burst myself I mean don't they quit?! They keep phoning every time and I am getting sick of it! Ok it its time to settle it! I asked my mother if we can go to the police station so I can slap my old mum and you know what? Said she will come for fun

I arrived there and went to the cells two police women came with us when they saw me and said "cassy!" I did not say a word to them because they are not my parent's for goodness sake! The two police women got my old mum out she was asking whats going on but I did not answer her they held her steady and slapped her on the cheek. And she started crying then my old dad said " why did you do that for?!!!!" then I said " I wanted to is that a problem?" the two police women put her back her her cage. Then I said " that is for what you did to me before! I am a ruler but my mother here is and I love her so much!" as my old mum was still crying she said " that is not the cassy I knew!" and I said " you are right well I am different as you can see. Mother can we go home please?" "ok" said the queen I started to walk off with my mother I felt a lot better after that and anyway my old mum deserves it.

and I don't think she will be calling for what I did to her. We were out of the police station and went to our carriage  meanwhile back at the cells "why did she hit me!" said jessy "maybe you slapped her so I think she came to do it to you" said dad "that slap I did was soft and she did it twice as hard! I will not give up until I have my little girl back even I will try to kill myself to do it" said jessy "now now honey you know we can't get her back" said dad "but I will someday or someway I will figure it out and never give up!" said jessy meanwhile back at Jerry's "I am missing her mum"  said Jerry " I know it is hard for you" said Mrs cream  and he said "but it is not the same without her." back at the carriage " did it feel a lot better when you did it?" said the queen "thank you mother it felt a lot better doing it"

I can't believe I slapped her! Before I went out I said to my mum carry on I will meet you there. I heard my old mum and dad chatting saying "I want her back I will get my little girl back!" I don't think that is going to happen! I think that you  two should stay in jail for the taking. I'm going from bad to worse and its getting better by the day I think I should give my old dad a wedge  I mean I should have done it in the first place. Next time I come I will do it to him next time he should have not shouted at me. What else should I do that my old mum and dad should do to me let me think. I can say to the police that my old mum and dad tried to rob my house as well.

I just want them out of my life I am a new girl I have changed and I am a princess which means they obey mother and me. Let me tell you this I will never! Never! Never! In my life let them, take me back! I will not aloud that! If they do they will suffer and I really mean it! And the consequences as well! And I will do something horrible like tell the police not to give my old mum and dad their food at least for 3 months! That is how horrible I can be or probably for a year as well. So they can slowly die. We arrived at home and when it came to evening we had our dinner and man the tables looked all posh and the food. They cooked turkey, chicken, pig turkey, and etc for some reason I kept forgetting about Jerry. I can't have him out of my lie I mean it wrong for some reason my side of me is saying I missing my parents so much......they are not worth it! I am in a tangle what should I do?

well that's it for now I wonder what will happen I will post up part 2 soon
hello again some people liked the first story I did so I have another 
treat another story I did in secondary school it wasn't published but 
it was done I hope you like it because this may be my best story I did out of the others

Once upon a time there was this monster who lived near me. If you are wondering who is telling this story it  is me! Hi my name is cassy I am a girl, and I do a lot of things. I don't think you want to hear about me. Anyway about this monster she lives next to my house. And she has a family as well they came from outer space and they said they want to stay here forever! Don't they like their home or something? It started like this.

one day mother wanted us to welcome them but I did not like the idea I thought my mum went crazy at first but she was serious. And I said " you got to be kidding me." I did not want to go but my mum wanted me to. My mother said " come on cassy I bet you will be friends with them." friends? Friends with them! How disgusting! We all got dressed and started being on our way to the newcomers house. When we were nearby there o saw the house and the sight of it was not good. It looked terrible and disgusting I started walking back slowly so my mum wouldn't notice me. When she saw me she said "cassy! Come back here this instance!" then I said " but mum...." I got angry and as I came forward I kicked a stone. When we came to the house I felt like I was going to be sick my mum knocked o the door. " who is it?" my mum said " we are your neighbours" and the monster said "hold on." the little monster opened the door and called for his mum and his dad. The parents from the little child came and they said "who are you?" then my mum said "since you are new in the neighbour hood we offer to give to you this lovely present to you. And I almost forgot to tell you  that we are your new neighbours if you want us come to our house which is a couple of blocks away and the number of the house is 76. Goodbye and have a lovely day" I thought I was going to get eaten by them or even kill me! I ran home leaving them behind.

Monday came and I had to go to school I have a friend called Jerry. I knew him since first grade " I heard there were these new people and some of the class said that they are aliens from outer space and some say they are not" said Jerry then I said " they are aliens from outer space and guess what? My mum forced me to come and welcome them how stupid is that!" then Jerry standed still and then laughter came out from his mouth! I said to him " its not funny you know!" " it is!" he said I felt devastated. When we arrived school I shivered a lot and I did not know what to do "whats wrong?" Jerry said as soon as he finished laughing. " l..O..O..K   o..V.E..R   t..H.E..R..E" as I said it. Jerry saw the monster he did not know what to do. When I saw the monster I felt like wetting myself that is how much I was scared. Time I went to different lessons the monster was always there in the same classroom as me.

then it came to home time I grabbed Jerry and ran out of the school! When I arrived home the biggest mistake was there I can't believe what my mum did!! She invited the monster mother for tea in my house! I said to my mum "what the heck are you thinking mum! You invited a monster to tea in our house!" then my mum said " don't you ever talk to me like that again! I invited her because I wanted to! That's it you are not having dinner tonight!" then I got so angry I almost broke the stairs and my bedroom door. Then it came to dinner time my dad called me but I didn't want to listen to him. I put a notice on my door saying " no mums aloud and aliens"

my dad knocked on the door but I said " go away mum!" and dad said "its me your dad" "come in dad" I said. I told him what was the problem and how much I hated mum and he said " now now don't be like that she is the only mother you have" and I said " but what she did when the monster mother was here she shouted at me and oh by they way I am not having dinner when I finished reading my book I'm going straight to bed" and dad said " ok then see you in the morning and goodnight" and I  said"goodnight dad"

then morning came I did not want to go to school because of the monster. I still wasn't talking to my mum. Jerry was waiting for me outside my house "oh hello Jerry" I said as I came out of the door "so what happened when you arrived home yesterday?" but I said " I don't want to talk about it!" and he said " ok ok I was just checking did something bad happened?" said Jerry. Although I did not wan to tell  him anything mum is friends with the alien mum and I have a alien in my school!

O great what is going to happen next? When I got to school I completely ignored the alien and went to class. My teacher called Mrs hamp she had a note in her hand she started speaking " two people are moving to another class and won't be coming back anymore." I was kinding  hoping that I wasn't Mrs hamp said "Betty you will be moving on my gosh it can't be! Cassy you are going as well!" NO! NO! This can't be happening! Oh... thank gosh that it was a dream... I slept on my desk!
Mrs hamp said "two people are moving and won't be coming back anymore. Betty you are moving" please don't say me please don't say me "oh my gosh cassy you are moving!" NO! NO! NO!!!! This can't be happening! And Mrs hamp said " well you two will have to go now" I waved goodbye to Jerry.

I did not want to be near Betty as that was her name I came to the class before I opened the door my heart began to thump when I saw them from the window they were all aliens! I could not stand it my heart thumped faster and I did not know what to do I just stood there watching them. When it came to home time I ran out of the school leaving Jerry behind. I arrived home and my mum she was in a good mood "oh hello darling how was school?" said my mum "you know what? I hate school! I had to move to another class I arrived there all of them were aliens and I was the only one who was not!" that's what I told her so she said "yes it worked! Well I have some good news for you"

good news? What good news does she bring me now! I mean hello I am in a bad mood right now! "I phoned the school and asked them to change you to a alien class so you can get along" she said. My mum is the worse parent on the planet! She changes me to a different class I mean hello is she crazy or something?!?!!! I almost ended up dying because of her stupid idea!!!! I was in shock I went upstairs without saying a word I had to phone Jerry I needed his help. So I dialed his number "hello?" he said I said " hey Jerry how are you doing?" "I'm fine" he replied, I replied back saying " uh Jerry listen I have to talk to you about something" and he said "what do you want to talk about?" so I said "you know what? My mum phoned the school and she asked the teachers that if I can move classes! And just which class I went to? I went to the alien class!!! Then she said so I can get along!!!!" Jerry said " I'm so sorry about that cassy I feel so sorry for you" and I also said "guess what? I am the only one in the class that is not an alien! So Jerry please get me out of the class! I am begging you please help me I don't want to be like them!!""

he said "ok Cass I will do whatever it takes! I will get you out from that class!" and I replied back "but hurry!" then dinner came I talked to everyone except my mum because of what she did to me! "cassy why are you not talking to your mother?" said dad " because I don't want to.." I mumbled " I think you need a chat with me it will be after dinner" said dad when dinner was finished my dad followed me to my bedroom "cassy what is the matter?" said dad I replied back saying "I don't like mum a matter of fact I hate her!" he asked "what has she done to make you so mad?" I said "well she phoned the school saying that I should move to another class with the alien girl called Betty so I went found out it was a alien class and mum said so I can get along. It was stupid of here to say that and I will really get mad that she will say that I will have to live with Betty for the summer holidays!!!!!"  that's what I told him so dad had another talk with me and while that was going on my mum was washing the dishes she was listening to every word I say to my dad that was a big mistake. I am in deep, deep, deep trouble

"please talk to your mum cassy" said dad  and I said"ok but if she makes another mistake I am out of the house for good!" I went downstairs to see how she was doing " hi mum " I said she turned around and slapped me really hard put the plates down and ran to her room "ow!" I said "what have you done now?!" said dad and I said " I came to say hello and she turned around and slapped me!" so dad said " see what  you have done you had made her upset!" dad ran after her and tried to calm her down I just stood there  then I moved I went to my room to get my suit case I wanted to run away so badly I had a red mark on my cheek and I was hurting so much. I put everything in my suit case even my best clothes. I peeked outside my door and checked that my mum and dad was still I their room. And yes they was still there I quickly went to the bathroom to get my toothbrush.

and ran out of the door not slamming it. It was a bit cold out side I was thinking of which home to go to. Then I said I will go to Jerry's. Anyways his house is a couple of blocks away I knocked on the door "who is it " said the person "Mrs cream its me cassy" "hello cassy"said Mrs cream as she opened the door "whats the matter" she asked "I don't think I want to talk about it yet. Mrs cream is Jerry in?" and she said "oh yes he is in his room" I also asked her "can I stay here for a week please?" and she said " yes you can there is a spare bedroom upstairs on the left to Jerry's room" knock knock I banged on the door "go away!" hes said I and I said "hey Jerry its me!" and he said "cassy is that you? Come in." I explained what happened "but they will come looking for you!!" said Jerry I said "I don't flipping care!! And anyway I am staying here for a week I don't love them anymore and if that's how they are going to be let them....let them find me even with the police I will tell the police my side of the story and lets see who they believe! Oh please tell you mum that if they phone tell her to tell them that I am not here it makes it easier for me" that's what I said so Jerry went downstairs and told her and Mrs cream said "yes I will tell them that"

meanwhile back at home "come now jessy I am sure she didn't mean it" said dad "she did! Maybe I should had not move her to the alien class" said the mum "ok look let me call her cassy! Cassy!! Cassy!!! Where are you" him that is strange let us go to her room" when they got there her room was empty "where could she be?" said mum "look her cupboard is empty means she has run away!" said dad they phoned that they know but still no sign of her "what are we going to do!" said mum then she started to crying and said  "maybe I should have not slapped her and all of this would had not happened!"
"lets go to the police" said dad

meanwhile back at Jerry's "cassy may I ask you a question?" said Jerry "sure what is it?" I said "what happened to your cheek?" he said "my mum slapped me that's why" I said then Mrs cream came and took my downstairs to fix my cheek. At the police station my mum and dad was there "please help us!" said dad "what is the matter?" said the police man "we have been very bad parents and I slapped my daughter and she has run away!" said jessy  "and we don't know where she is!" said dad "you definitely  been very bad parents don't worry go home we will sort this out" said the police man.

the next day was Saturday that means we can have a lay in it was hot and Mrs cream went out and brought us ice-creams. Meanwhile back at home the police called and said they have found her in Jerry house and they said they will come in case I do something. There was a knock at the door I was kinding hoping it was not my parents. It was my parents I stayed in my new room "the jig is up Rachel I know you have cassy there if you have a problem you can talk with the police who will be arriving  just about now" said mum. The police came and it was about 4 of them I was seeing everything from the window I came downstairs and my mum and dad saw me and said "cassy!" "don't talk to me!" I said

the police came to the house and talked to me I said to them "my mum and dad been horrible to me" and to be honest I was telling them the truth. "what did they do to you which made you so mad darling" said the police woman so I explained and I told them "I tried to make up with my mum but then she turned around and slapped me! I still have the mark" and I showed it to them. And I also showed it to them. And I also told them I want to go to court so they can be in jail for the rest of their lives!

I also told them I wanted another mum and another dad. They said when they heard me say it to them then the police said "so shall it be written so shall it be done! But who will be your witness?" I said "a friend of mine call Jerry he has been my friend since first grade" I said July 30 2003 was the day of the court I was so excited I had dressed up nice
and smart. So does Jerry and his mum I have never in my life have been to court before. I had to go to the stand first then this lady asked some questions said "why did your mum forced you to go? And welcome the aliens?" then I said "  because my mum was nervous and did not want to go alone. I did not want to welcome them and yes she could had gone alone and I didn't want to go myself" she gave me some other questions "the next day of school if I'm right your mum phoned the school to change you to a different class which was the alien's?"


I said "yes" she also said "and you can't get along with them am I right?" "yes" I said (objection!) the judge "shut up and sit down before I change my mind carry on" "you wanted to love your mum again" (objection!)  " shut up you fool! Or else you get arrested! Carry on" said the judge the woman asked again "when you wanted to love your mum again she slapped you am I right?" "yes" I said the woman went to the judge and said "see the parents are horrible to this poor child she deserves to have another mum and dad" "the horrible parents will be in jail until they won't have the child back when they come back cassy will be moved to her class in school I rest my case"

the judged banged on the table I can't believe I won! I won! Take that you losers! I watched them as they went to their cell cages they said "I love you so much ring us ok?" I said "keep walking I'm not your child anymore so I don't know you! I will not ring you and I will not miss you Au roire asta besta baby!" I came out of the court and I had a carriage waiting for me! The person said "good afternoon princess cassy you will be the queens daughter  and if I may say the queen always wanted a daughter like you" I am the princess I am surprised .....anyway I always wanted to be a princess! "and I am sorry I forgot to tell you my name is alfie your  carriage driver so where ever you want to go I will always take you there" I went inside the carriage and said goodbye to everyone "come and visit soon" said Jerry I can't believe I actually did it and I am on my way to my new home. If I would of still lived with those parents I would had sued them I said to myself I can't wait to be home! "here we are your new home " said alfie I couldn't believe how big it was! The sight of it was just beautiful! There were long bridge and tall buildings. My new mother was waiting for me outside the castle doors

"my darling I am so happy to have you as my daughter " said the queen to be honest she did look pretty and she  also said "look at these dreadful clothes when you get inside you will change and look a bit different and you will wear a crown like me but a bit different it will have a bit more style to it and you will wear a pink dress and that's your favorite colour right?" "yes it is " I said. I wonder how those losers are doing in jail I bet they are saying I want my little girl back and crying like babies if they say another word about me I'm gonna put a bomb in their mouth so that they can blow up into pieces and then I can say I don't have to see them anymore because they would had been blown up and then next time I see them I will say ha! Ha!
suckers! And the next thing I will do is get a gun go to their house and I can tell the police that they tried to kill me


or they tried to sweet talk me as well I walked in my new house and man it was big and huge! This is the biggest house ive ever seen! Of course everyone was gathering round because of me "everyone this is my new daughter princess cassy!" said the queen. Everyone cheered how wonderful don't they know how to cheer louder? I mean com on people I am the new princess! And smile as you do it! "maids go and take princess cassy to her new room!"


the phone rang and the butler had to get it "hello who is this" he said "can I speck to cassy please?" said jessy
"and who may I ask whos speaking?" he said "I am her old parent" she said "ok princess cassy! Someone on the phone to speak with you" said the butler. I cam downstairs with my new clothes " hello who is it?" I said "cassy! We miss you so much!" said jessy so I said "what did I tell you? Go away and shut up! And I don't want to hear your voice again!!!" I dropped the phone "what is the matter darling you looked stressed out" said the queen "mother my old parents won't leave me alone and I hate them so much! An please mother if they phone again like if they say they want to speak to me can you tell the butler to drop the phone please?" I said "ok" said the queen and I said " oh thank you mother I love you so much" when I hear them I felt like blowing up and burst myself I mean don't they quit?! They keep phoning every time and I am getting sick of it! Ok it its time to settle it! I asked my mother if we can go to the police station so I can slap my old mum and you know what? Said she will come for fun

I arrived there and went to the cells two police women came with us when they saw me and said "cassy!" I did not say a word to them because they are not my parent's for goodness sake! The two police women got my old mum out she was asking whats going on but I did not answer her they held her steady and slapped her on the cheek. And she started crying then my old dad said " why did you do that for?!!!!" then I said " I wanted to is that a problem?" the two police women put her back her her cage. Then I said " that is for what you did to me before! I am a ruler but my mother here is and I love her so much!" as my old mum was still crying she said " that is not the cassy I knew!" and I said " you are right well I am different as you can see. Mother can we go home please?" "ok" said the queen I started to walk off with my mother I felt a lot better after that and anyway my old mum deserves it.

and I don't think she will be calling for what I did to her. We were out of the police station and went to our carriage  meanwhile back at the cells "why did she hit me!" said jessy "maybe you slapped her so I think she came to do it to you" said dad "that slap I did was soft and she did it twice as hard! I will not give up until I have my little girl back even I will try to kill myself to do it" said jessy "now now honey you know we can't get her back" said dad "but I will someday or someway I will figure it out and never give up!" said jessy meanwhile back at Jerry's "I am missing her mum"  said Jerry " I know it is hard for you" said Mrs cream  and he said "but it is not the same without her." back at the carriage " did it feel a lot better when you did it?" said the queen "thank you mother it felt a lot better doing it"

I can't believe I slapped her! Before I went out I said to my mum carry on I will meet you there. I heard my old mum and dad chatting saying "I want her back I will get my little girl back!" I don't think that is going to happen! I think that you  two should stay in jail for the taking. I'm going from bad to worse and its getting better by the day I think I should give my old dad a wedge  I mean I should have done it in the first place. Next time I come I will do it to him next time he should have not shouted at me. What else should I do that my old mum and dad should do to me let me think. I can say to the police that my old mum and dad tried to rob my house as well.

I just want them out of my life I am a new girl I have changed and I am a princess which means they obey mother and me. Let me tell you this I will never! Never! Never! In my life let them, take me back! I will not aloud that! If they do they will suffer and I really mean it! And the consequences as well! And I will do something horrible like tell the police not to give my old mum and dad their food at least for 3 months! That is how horrible I can be or probably for a year as well. So they can slowly die. We arrived at home and when it came to evening we had our dinner and man the tables looked all posh and the food. They cooked turkey, chicken, pig turkey, and etc for some reason I kept forgetting about Jerry. I can't have him out of my lie I mean it wrong for some reason my side of me is saying I missing my parents so much......they are not worth it! I am in a tangle what should I do?

well that's it for now I wonder what will happen I will post up part 2 soon
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Very good Eniitan!
It is very long and detailed and a good time waster if you are bored!
I give it 10/10 also because you took your time and you actually bothered making this!
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Very good Eniitan!
It is very long and detailed and a good time waster if you are bored!
I give it 10/10 also because you took your time and you actually bothered making this!
Congrats to you my friend and have a nice day!
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