Pokémon Light Platinum, well this is weird. Well anyways. This game is a really fun, hack of Pokémon Ruby. If I had to say, the moment I started my Pokémon adventure, I knew there was something special about this game. Well it came to me in a shock, but it was really fascinating, and enjoyable. It also was quite the handful of a game. What I mean is seeing all these rivals. Anyways I commend this game for keeping me entertained day in, and day out. I love this game, and I am long before I finally fully complete it. I am at the Lauren region have the time of my life . Anyways let me get started on my review for this wonderful, and cherishable hack :3.

Graphics: 10
Well I could not complain much on the graphics especially since it had all new, tiles to it. I would settle to say that it had, some Pokémon HearthGold tiles on here. The quality of he game is amazing, which looks nothing like the original Game Boy Advance graphics. That is what I love about this game. It is a nice generic looking, game, and it couldn't improve on it anymore. The only thing they can change is bugs. The game has quite a few of those in it.

Sound: 10
I don't see any problem with the sound on this game. I know this though it sounds like the original version of Pokémon Ruby. In fact I honestly like the songs on that game. I quite enjoy it very much, and I did notice, that the music did not bug me at all. I played this game with joy, and had my fill of fun doing it. I didn't see why the gym leaders, and elite 4  had regular Pokémon trainer battle music though. I didn't care though, the game was awesome .

Addictiveness: 8
It was simple enough for you all to know that this game was truly addictive to me. I had tons of fun, and I still have much to do on it. That just makes this game evan more fun on my behalf because, I still have to beat the Lauren, and catch all the legends, and catch all the Pokémon. Still though, other than that, I found all the after events I have been through pretty interesting, and addictive. Fun times, and bad times. I had more fun times though. The creator WESLEY FG really developed, a hack which is hack of the year :3.

Story: 8
The story line of this game was truly remarkable, and I don't think any type of words could explain it. This was simply amazing going through 2 regions, and both are kind of difficult. If I could say it better than this it is a miracle. This game had me on my toes for the next part in the game. I was simply ready to continue on, and on until it was over. Sadly I got snagged at some parts, and needed some sort of guidance. Still though I exceeded, and to me that is all that matters.

Depth: 7
Well I would certainly say, if it wasn't to hard, and too long it would be, to bad of a game. It was not though. It was long, and the road to victory wasn't easy. We had to make certain sacrifices, and you had to always be on guard for the next thing. Most parts were not hard if you trained properly, and most parts were really easy if you trained properly. This was really great, and it was a great way to sharpen your skills for the next game you played. This game could give you a run for your money, and in any case, you would be n for a big surprise when you got started. Either way, words will not help you, you have to join the game, and discover for yourself. That is a no joke game. Interesting, yet have you coming back for more. WARNING YOU MAY DIE FROM COMPLETE AWESOMENESS. 

Difficulty: 5
As you all know this game was some what hard, and it isn't to bad either. The thing that was really upsetting is that when you get out of a cave or a mountain which had your Pokémon demolished, a rival will come to challenge you. It was so unexpected, and it never fails to happen. It seems like that whenever you have good luck the bad luck always take over. They send you back , and you have to restart your revamp again. That is what I hated. Another thing is on the elite 4 of Zhery, you should really have some suitable Pokémon ready for it. To me all my Pokémon were either level 50-53. I demolished the elite 4, but struggled against the champion. So I warn you now be [prepared to face a true Pokémon challenge.

Overall: 9.8
I know I talked about how awesome this game is a lot, but here is where the fun finally begins. I couldn't really for the matter say it, but this was the best part on the game. I quite enjoyed it, and I was really at the tip of the ice berg on it. It was nice fun, and was really wonderful. I enjoyed, having the opportunity to adventure the whole Zhery Region.  That is a made up region, with Pokémon of all 4 generations in it. It was really nice, to be able to play with all those Pokémon, and I really loved the gesture of it. It was nice, and I also enjoy the Lauren region. I can't forget that one. However, to me that isn't quite the longer region. The Zhery region, was the root of it all. It had nice, and mostly compatible opponents. It was very nice to see who I lost to, and who I won to. When I loss a match I understand why, when I win I match I understand why. We all have our personal reasons for things, and always have a proper way of solving them .

linkmaster99 : Great review here.You had very nice and descriptive words to relavate the game so the users will know what the game will have when they play it for thmselves.First off, you had quite a few spelling errors in your review.When you are done with your reviews, make sure that you did not make any Capitalization errors, Spelling errors, Grammar errors, or any other errors in your reviews.People do not want to read reviews that have words that are not spelled correctly in it, they will not want to waste their time trying to figure out what you are trying to say, they will just move on to other game reviews, and you do not want that to happen, ever.Your spacing was good, which is what you want, if your reviews are all crammed up and not organized, people will not want to waste their time trying to figure out if your saying a big, long word.They may even think it is spam, and report the reviewer.You need to always, and I mean always make sure that your reviews are not crammed up and not legible.I also noticed that you put "YOU MAY DIE FROM COMPLETE AWESOMENESS." in the "depth" category of your review.That is a good thing to do, because when people see that, they will think,"Man this guy/girl is saying that this game is awesome, I'm going to tell him that and try the game right away!".That is also good when put things like that in your review.

dennyjr22 : That is impossible for me to have spelling errors because the spell check shows everything that I mispelled, and it ask me to change them so that is impossible for any type of errors with spelling or grammar.

Ah yes, if it isn't another good review by linkmaster99. I am glad you reviewed this awesome game. There is a lot of good stuff in your review. It is very detailed, well broken down and explained in depth and your review is also nice and lengthy as well which is always good. This review is impressive and you are getting so great at making them. You really are doing an excellent job with them. Keep up the great work and keep making more awesome game reviews, you are really good at it and they are so clear, detailed and easy to read and enjoy. Keep up the nice work dude!

linkmaster99 : Hello & How are you? I'm great ..

First off, I would like to say thank you for making this review, it gave me something to read. I've read your reviews in the past and they were good, so I thought I'd give this review a read.

There were a lot of descriptions in this review, a lot of detail all together and there was plenty of evidence in some cases. I would just say to work on your punctuation and grammar, although the Vizzed Spellchecker fixes spelling errors, it does not fix grammar errors, it doesn't detect them. It's up to your own knowledge of grammar to check for those errors. It would be very useful to go over your reviews before posting a few times. Personally, I read over my reviews a good FIVE times before posting it; this ensures that there are minimal spelling and grammatical errors. 

I think you pointed out irrelevant things in the game. I don't think a gamer is going to come along and say: "WOW! Look at those amazing tiles. I'm completely blown away by them!" No. It's brilliant that you went into such detail, but it's quite microscopic. I have done that in the past in my reviews and was told it was irrelevant, so I'm just passing that message onto you.

I'm glad to see that you referred to other Pokémon games in your response - ruby, heartgold. You gave us knowledge that this game was a hack of Pokémon Ruby; this can be very helpful towards others who don't know this game particularly well - i.e Me.

You actually give a lot of valid points in your review, and this is great. However, you just didn't develop them as much. If I were to get this review, I could edit it and almost triple the amount of detail. This is because your points were brilliant and if you added more detail they would become more lengthy points.

Overall, very good review. Work on what I have said, you will improve if you do so.

Summary:

- Work on spelling and grammar, it will benefit you as well as us, the readers.

- Work on development. Develop your answers more, support them with further evidence. You will make a greater impact on your audience if you do so!

- More detail in each sections. You put a lot of detail into OVERALL, and that could have been put into graphics, sound etc.

GOOD LUCK! I can't wait for your next review.