This game is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's why I gave it 10 stars. It was only my first time and I love it.  The places look nice. The gym leaders for me are not that high leveled all low leveled koga and Sabrina in the old Pokémon games where way over leveled for me. I would also like to say a huge thank you to David Auchampach the person that made vizzed.com before I continue it brings back the memories of when I played Pokémon crystal. Anyway my 10 stars go to the overall rating go to this game YAY.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           This game has is one of the games where the graphics are good but they could be better. I like the pikachu battle picture the best. I started playing it last week.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              That's all for now play the game yourself to find out more 

sdddf :  

Hey!

This was a decent review, I enjoyed reading it, as I do all reviews. You talked about how 'awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!' the game was, which was good because the game is very awesome!

It was your first time playing it? Woah. Have you played Pokémon Emerald or Shiny Gold? They're pretty awesome games too! I'd really recommend you try them out, if you haven't already!

In your review, you should develop your points a lot more: 'The places look nice' Well, what about the places look nice? Was it the whole concept of the buildings, their structures? The colouring used in the game? - Saturation, Contrast, Brightness.

I felt that the gym leaders were pretty low leveled too, which made it very easy to conquer their gyms and earn the badges. 100% correct with Koga and Sabrina, they were high leveled in the old games. 

In your review of the this game, you should have mentioned the necessary sections ; Graphics, Depth, Difficulty, Story etc. This would have made your review more interesting to read and I would have given you great ratings. I understand that you give a sentence or two on graphics, which is good, just develop your points.

What about the Pikachu picture did you like? Was it the great shades of yellow and gold used?

Use what I use, P.E.E, I can't stress this enough. Point. Evidence. Explain. Give your point, back it up with evidence from the game, and then explain the point further. This is what is going to improve your reviews.

I hope you take on board what I said, it sure did take me a while to write this, and of course, this will help you structure your reviews in the future! Good Luck! And, Well Done, if this was your first review, it's pretty good!

This may help you in writing a brilliant review:
 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=58382

sdddf : I'm sorry this isn't really a "Review" It's more of you just saying that you really enjoyed it and that you appreciate the fact that you can play it on Vizzed.com

Here's a thread on advice on how to write a detailed review: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=58382

Since it doesn't really read like a review, I'm moving it to the game discussion forum. You are more than welcome to edit it though. If you do edit it to more of a review format, feel free to PM me and I will move it back to the review forum.

Keep trying!

Jordanv78 : I was thinking about making a review on this game, but I wasn't sure how much detail I needed to produce within the review. Thanks for posting that link to a help thread, on how to make a great review. 

I also give some advice to 'sddf' on how he can improve his reviews above

it is a wonderful game