Fire Emblem is a very awesome game and theirs so much to go over about it, Lets start with the graphics. For the gba it was really good. Usually the gba has not so good graphics not overall bad and I'm not saying it sucks because for the gba what do u except from games back in 2003 but still for a the graphics for a gba game it was really awesome. Sound all I can say is that it has a very good sound track. Fire Emblem is a very addictive game. The rating for the game speaks for itself. A 8.4 is a really good score. I could play it over and over again non stop and would still enjoy it. The story behind the game was a great story I thought. The story is about a saceae chief girl who wants to see her grandfather before he dies. The depth behind the game is huge. When u beat the main game theirs still more to do. I cant tell u because it might give away the ending of the main story. As for the time it takes to beat the game. It took me about 4 hours and 30 mins but it might take some people longer or shorter. Last but not least is the diffuctly. It all depends how good are you at strategy games. If you are really good at strategy games then it might not be to hard but if you are not good at it then it might be a little hard. Overall FireEmblem is a great game.

Not bad, I think you need to elaborate on your details and break this review into categories and score them accordingly. You have the right idea but you just need to make your review more detailed. I would also space it out after breaking it down into categories so it can be easier to read. Put some of your positive thoughts into each part of the review and explain the components of what made it such a good game to play and what is so good about it. If there is a part of the game that you thought wasn't that great or could use improvement, then be honest about your scoring and give reasoning behind it. Remember to keep your reviews long as in 500-1000 words to make it a good review, keep it interesting and include details, and also be sure to grab the reader's attention. I thought that this was a good start, but I think you can do more with your reviews. So work hard and be sure to try to make more!

Razor-987 : Thank u for rating my review. I will categorize the review more next time and explain deeper into the details next time. Thank u for the tips and the next game I review will be better. Thanks again.