I wont take this lying down,
Seeing as your ass is the only one hitting the ground,
You got one cheap shot but that wasn't for free,
From that point you invoked diplomacy,
Four on one would of been the situation,
But unlucky for you I have the patience,
Payback is sweet and revenge is best served cold,
And i have a little secret to be told,
You had a chance to leave it and let it be fine,
But you struck and vengeance shall be mine,
And it feels good knowing your life's on the line,
Its only just a matter of time,
Weather it be the blade or the shell,
I'm taking your ass straight to hell,
One way or another,
I'm gonna work my way threw every single brother,
Then the hubby and the father,
And that's just for the starter,
I will pick you apart piece by piece,
Slowly moving on to your nephew and niece,
You took things too far so I'mma take it further,
Pushed me to depression so i follow threw to murder,
Enjoy your days cause there all you have left,
Cause each time you breathe your closer to your last breath.

mrexclusivej2p :  Good one, but you should probably take out the bad words and replace them with something else. Swearing on anything is not tolerated on vizzed. Just saying.

The only controversial words used are ass and hell to my knowledge...
and these are mild swear words... which have been aired on music videos on TV as well
so could you list any others that you find as swearing?

mrexclusivej2p : Nice rap Mr. E.  It Is well written and rhymes nicely. For me personally I don't have a problem with the cuss words but , just the subject of murdering a whole family lol. I mean whatever would make someone want to do this must be pretty bad...

BtotheH : thanks man, oh believe me when certain lines are crossed anyone will take it that far, like i said there mild swearwords often heard in PG rated films or TV series along with music videos on MTV so i don't think its a big deal... Its not like i F bombed anywhere