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06-05-09 03:34 PM
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Ok if you didnt get this from the title this will be a story. i would like it if you read it and gave me feedback of any kind good or bad i dont care, but remember this is only a rough draft and its in play script format so it might be hard to read ohh and if you want to suggest a title go ahead and do it.

???: Tsuyoshy get up or we'll be late for school!

Tsuyoshy: Five more minutes.

???: If we are late our teacher will kill us!

Tsuyoshy: fine i'll get up!

So Tsuyoshy got out of bed, got dressed, and went down stairs.

Miharu: Finaly Saka and i have been waiting for a half an hour!

Saka: It's tru Tsuyoshy we have been waiting i even made brekfast.

Tsuyoshy: Sorry you waited all this time for me.

saka: it's alright you can have yours for lu....

Miharu: we need to get going!

Saka grabed the rest of the breakfast for Tsuyoshy and they all leave to go to school.

Tsuyoshy: Made it with seconds to spare.

Saka: Glad we did i dont want detention the first day of school.

Miharu: I agree.

Teacher: Ok everyone sit down and shut up we have a new student today ill let him introduce himself.

???: Hi my name is...

Teacher: Speak up

???: Hi my name is Rei kashino and i moved here from Motsumoto.

Teacher: Thank you you may go sit down now.

Rei Kashino: Thank you.

Teacher: Go sit down with thoes three ummmm what were your names again?

Tsuyoshy: Tsuyoshy.

Saka: Saka.

Miharu: Miharu.

Teacher: ok go sit down with them.

Tsuyoshy: Weel help him with every thing he needs.

Teacher: Ok well looks like you have new friends now have fun.

Tsuyoshy,Rei kashino,Saka, and Miharu all sat down and did their work until it was time for lunch.

Rei Kashino: Thank you for showing me around the school.

Tsuyoshy: Anytime.

Rei kashino: What were your last names?

Saka: Mine is Fukushima.
Miharu: Mine is Nagasaki.
Tsuyoshy: Mine is Okinawa.











































Ok if you didnt get this from the title this will be a story. i would like it if you read it and gave me feedback of any kind good or bad i dont care, but remember this is only a rough draft and its in play script format so it might be hard to read ohh and if you want to suggest a title go ahead and do it.

???: Tsuyoshy get up or we'll be late for school!

Tsuyoshy: Five more minutes.

???: If we are late our teacher will kill us!

Tsuyoshy: fine i'll get up!

So Tsuyoshy got out of bed, got dressed, and went down stairs.

Miharu: Finaly Saka and i have been waiting for a half an hour!

Saka: It's tru Tsuyoshy we have been waiting i even made brekfast.

Tsuyoshy: Sorry you waited all this time for me.

saka: it's alright you can have yours for lu....

Miharu: we need to get going!

Saka grabed the rest of the breakfast for Tsuyoshy and they all leave to go to school.

Tsuyoshy: Made it with seconds to spare.

Saka: Glad we did i dont want detention the first day of school.

Miharu: I agree.

Teacher: Ok everyone sit down and shut up we have a new student today ill let him introduce himself.

???: Hi my name is...

Teacher: Speak up

???: Hi my name is Rei kashino and i moved here from Motsumoto.

Teacher: Thank you you may go sit down now.

Rei Kashino: Thank you.

Teacher: Go sit down with thoes three ummmm what were your names again?

Tsuyoshy: Tsuyoshy.

Saka: Saka.

Miharu: Miharu.

Teacher: ok go sit down with them.

Tsuyoshy: Weel help him with every thing he needs.

Teacher: Ok well looks like you have new friends now have fun.

Tsuyoshy,Rei kashino,Saka, and Miharu all sat down and did their work until it was time for lunch.

Rei Kashino: Thank you for showing me around the school.

Tsuyoshy: Anytime.

Rei kashino: What were your last names?

Saka: Mine is Fukushima.
Miharu: Mine is Nagasaki.
Tsuyoshy: Mine is Okinawa.











































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