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An untitled story by my friend and me

 

11-17-12 11:41 AM
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My friend and I wrote a story last night, and I showed it to one of my other friends and he told me it was disturbing, so I want to see what other people think of it. 
We wrote it by taking turns writing a little bit each and sending our parts to each other on facebook. 
I uploaded it to deviantArt because I didn't want to run up my word count by posting it straight to vizzed, so you can read it here: http://fishygrl888.deviantart.com/art/Untitled-Horror-Collab-Story-thingy-338136745
Before you click it I should probably warn you it has quite a bit of gore, so if you're squeamish or younger that like 13ish I wouldn't recommend  reading it. 
Any and all feedback is appreciated, I really want to know what people think of it. 
My friend and I wrote a story last night, and I showed it to one of my other friends and he told me it was disturbing, so I want to see what other people think of it. 
We wrote it by taking turns writing a little bit each and sending our parts to each other on facebook. 
I uploaded it to deviantArt because I didn't want to run up my word count by posting it straight to vizzed, so you can read it here: http://fishygrl888.deviantart.com/art/Untitled-Horror-Collab-Story-thingy-338136745
Before you click it I should probably warn you it has quite a bit of gore, so if you're squeamish or younger that like 13ish I wouldn't recommend  reading it. 
Any and all feedback is appreciated, I really want to know what people think of it. 
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