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The Seven Verses

 

11-08-12 02:59 PM
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legacyme3
Lord Leggy - King of IT
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POST EXP: 2003421
LVL EXP: 317023483
CP: 42531.1
VIZ: 2982476

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Note - I took time today to bug 7 random people on steam with 4 lines each. I didn't write them in order, and they had no idea it was part of a project.

The below is a result of rearranging the lines I wrote to them. So let's see what comes up.

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A miserable pile of secrets. Left behind by those who came before.
There is no way to clean up, nor a way to level it out.
All you are left is a bumpy road
And a feeling of dissatisfaction.

Left alone to your own devices, you struggle to shine in a sea of darkness
A light at the edge of your horizons drives you
But no matter how hard you try, you can never get closer
You are alone in a sea of your own solitude.

Misunderstood, troubled, shallow, and pedantric.
The misery of having those sins cast upon thee by a mortal word
The pain and the anger flow, leaving you consumed
The chains have been set free, you are able to do whatever.

You bid goodbye to your once proud self.
You have passed the point of no return.
You sold your soul to the heat of the fire
And now all you are left with is rage.

You are free. The shackles are since long corroded.
An angel of the night, an agent of despise
The shining light draws forever closer
But once you arrive, will you be saved?

Your life is forfeit
Because you've never lived.
You've lost the meaning, you cannot grasp it
Life and time, have passed you by.

The light is yours. You have finally attained that which you seeked
But you lost everything and everyone to get it
In the end, you have to ask yourself one question
Was it worth it?
Note - I took time today to bug 7 random people on steam with 4 lines each. I didn't write them in order, and they had no idea it was part of a project.

The below is a result of rearranging the lines I wrote to them. So let's see what comes up.

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A miserable pile of secrets. Left behind by those who came before.
There is no way to clean up, nor a way to level it out.
All you are left is a bumpy road
And a feeling of dissatisfaction.

Left alone to your own devices, you struggle to shine in a sea of darkness
A light at the edge of your horizons drives you
But no matter how hard you try, you can never get closer
You are alone in a sea of your own solitude.

Misunderstood, troubled, shallow, and pedantric.
The misery of having those sins cast upon thee by a mortal word
The pain and the anger flow, leaving you consumed
The chains have been set free, you are able to do whatever.

You bid goodbye to your once proud self.
You have passed the point of no return.
You sold your soul to the heat of the fire
And now all you are left with is rage.

You are free. The shackles are since long corroded.
An angel of the night, an agent of despise
The shining light draws forever closer
But once you arrive, will you be saved?

Your life is forfeit
Because you've never lived.
You've lost the meaning, you cannot grasp it
Life and time, have passed you by.

The light is yours. You have finally attained that which you seeked
But you lost everything and everyone to get it
In the end, you have to ask yourself one question
Was it worth it?
Vizzed Elite
6-Time VCS Winner

One Leggy.
One Love.
One Dream.


Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'

Registered: 09-14-10
Location: https://discord.gg/YCuUJz9
Last Post: 1313 days
Last Active: 1313 days

11-08-12 03:04 PM
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| ID: 685928 | 77 Words

RavusRat
sonicmcmuffin
Level: 138


POSTS: 1787/5773
POST EXP: 478748
LVL EXP: 31529489
CP: 20509.4
VIZ: 1106635

Likes: 0  Dislikes: 0
Wow a free iphone 5 ....  (for some reason the word "question" was hyperlinked it's gone now so i'm not being a random idiot)

I'm really tired at the moment but it kind of seems to fit in with the fact you are a global moderator... Probably not your intention if there is one..

Either way man tis a cool poem ..... If you got the death note please refrain from writing my name in it thanks...
Wow a free iphone 5 ....  (for some reason the word "question" was hyperlinked it's gone now so i'm not being a random idiot)

I'm really tired at the moment but it kind of seems to fit in with the fact you are a global moderator... Probably not your intention if there is one..

Either way man tis a cool poem ..... If you got the death note please refrain from writing my name in it thanks...
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Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'

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(edited by sonicmcmuffin on 11-08-12 03:09 PM)    

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