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10-09-12 01:00 PM
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I flow true and real, like the invention of the wheel
Mix the old with the new just to express how I feel
The wind blows hard, so I fight hard against it
They say no skills 'cause I'm white, but I only contest it
They only wish they had what it takes to be real when they fake
I got mad rhymes, that's the deal when I'm asleep or awake
You better run for cover when you hear my voice rumble
Try to save your weak foundation, as the walls around you crumble
I drop the bomb, make the whole world shake
Split the ground with my sound like a massive earthquake
You learn to walk before you crawl, so I see you stumble
You try to keep up as I spit, but all you do is mumble
Like an alien wise to the universe I've been since birth
I'll take you for a ride through the west side as my spacecraft leaves Earth
Bullets bounce off me, 'cause I'm a full-metal jacket
They hearts cold and black, so like a disease I attack it
See I be all about love, so I give it up
But hate from the masses is flowin' over the cup
Like a glock ready to bust, I shoot off at they asses
I shine brighter than a solar flare so wear your sunglasses
My tongue like a whip, lick your wounds from my lashes
Like a phoenix up in flames I rise strong from the ashes
But I digress, there's not much left that I can say
They all only gonna' hear what they wanna' hear anyway
So keep livin' in misery, and that's the way it gonna' stay
But me, yea I'ma live to fight another day.

I flow true and real, like the invention of the wheel
Mix the old with the new just to express how I feel
The wind blows hard, so I fight hard against it
They say no skills 'cause I'm white, but I only contest it
They only wish they had what it takes to be real when they fake
I got mad rhymes, that's the deal when I'm asleep or awake
You better run for cover when you hear my voice rumble
Try to save your weak foundation, as the walls around you crumble
I drop the bomb, make the whole world shake
Split the ground with my sound like a massive earthquake
You learn to walk before you crawl, so I see you stumble
You try to keep up as I spit, but all you do is mumble
Like an alien wise to the universe I've been since birth
I'll take you for a ride through the west side as my spacecraft leaves Earth
Bullets bounce off me, 'cause I'm a full-metal jacket
They hearts cold and black, so like a disease I attack it
See I be all about love, so I give it up
But hate from the masses is flowin' over the cup
Like a glock ready to bust, I shoot off at they asses
I shine brighter than a solar flare so wear your sunglasses
My tongue like a whip, lick your wounds from my lashes
Like a phoenix up in flames I rise strong from the ashes
But I digress, there's not much left that I can say
They all only gonna' hear what they wanna' hear anyway
So keep livin' in misery, and that's the way it gonna' stay
But me, yea I'ma live to fight another day.

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10-12-12 11:03 PM
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I have to say that the rhythm of this poem (rap?) is really great.  Personally, I'm not a huge fan of rap, but I've also got to say that I'm terribly jealous of your rhyming ability.  I can write rhyming poems very easily, but rarely do my rhymes have such uniqueness to them.  There were a few rhymes in there that just make me go "Whooooaaaa, awesome!!!!"  LOL

Great job, and I look forward to seeing more of your poetry.   I personally have hundreds of poems, but I don't think I will post them any time soon.
I have to say that the rhythm of this poem (rap?) is really great.  Personally, I'm not a huge fan of rap, but I've also got to say that I'm terribly jealous of your rhyming ability.  I can write rhyming poems very easily, but rarely do my rhymes have such uniqueness to them.  There were a few rhymes in there that just make me go "Whooooaaaa, awesome!!!!"  LOL

Great job, and I look forward to seeing more of your poetry.   I personally have hundreds of poems, but I don't think I will post them any time soon.
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10-13-12 12:36 AM
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Singelli : Yeah, I have hundreds too, it's just that most of them are all on paper from many years of being bored in class and not on the interwebs :/

Singelli : Yeah, I have hundreds too, it's just that most of them are all on paper from many years of being bored in class and not on the interwebs :/
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