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Hello and welcome back to mystery thread. The first one didn't count, but this one is my own and is a easy mystery,hard ones coming next month. Please follow rules.

1.Please have fun and read carefully,Use your minds, right my own mystery heh.

2.Please read before answering so no one puts the same answer.

3.You can earn Viz if answered correctly,Even more Viz if you explain your answer. 100 Viz if right, 250 Viz if right and explained.be first to answer to win

4.This is for fun I love mystery's,riddles,and poems.I just want to show my passion, can we all just get alone?

5. My name is Darius Harris(yes it rhymes don't know why,asks my mom.)I'm 19 years old,and live in Alabama,just want you to know me.

6. You can agree with a person and I will give 10Viz if you agreed with the right one,But up to 10 people can agree and wont count unless you explain,No short answer unless first to answer.

7.This mystery thread will be on each month,Not every day or week.

8.If you have a problem please just send a private message I count every person equal.

9.I make my own mysteries and if you got one send it to me, you get full credit and get 100Viz if it good,the answer is good,well explained,and makes sense.

10.I love you all,Really I do,I don't have or show hate,Not even in my life so please no flaming.

11.You can comment on the answer,story,and thread.(no spamming)

Here is the story made by devontaxt



As Detective Jemison
pulled up to the carve and exits his car ,he could almost smell the
foul,dreaded smell in the area,As he thought to himself of how long
the body been there ,he looked around the house yard and notice that
it was clean and nice,the 2 story house looked nice with 3 windows in
the front, 2 on each of the sides and 2 on the back,on the front
there was one attic window at the top.As they walked into the
living room everything changed,the house looked liked a fight broke
out,the floor had dried blood everywhere,the lamps and tables that
hold the lamps was knock down and broken ,the walls was bashed with
something hard, the TV was smashed,and the furniture looked liked it
was cut up.“Wow this place is a mess!”Sheriff Coleman said
covering his nose. “What you think happen?”Jemison went to check
the rest of the house ignoring Coleman's comment, It looked liked
nothing happen,the house had 4 bedroom,2bathrooms,a living room,dining
room,laundry room,kitchen(which he skipped),and attic. “For a house
like this you would have seen a basement.”Jemison said as he enter
the attic.Inside the attic was a dusty floor with a whole pile of
burnt toys on the floor and a bunch of dolls lined up against the
wall, “What are these toys and dolls doing here?”Jemison said as
he head towards the door he entered to get up the attic,as he was
about to exit he notice a cat statue the size of a normal cat with
dark red feet beside the window in the attic,as soon as he walk
towards it he heard Coleman calling him down,“Why wont he leave and
let me do my job?” Jemison said as he exits the attic.Jemison meet
Coleman in the living room before Coleman start talking.“I already
check the kitchen,I think we are done here the smell is coming from
all over the house, It's best to start tomorrow,I'm not going because
I have to wait for my deputy to come and find clues on
Ms.Green.”Jemison ignored him once again and went into the
kitchen.Jemison looked around the kitchen to find that there was
blood around the sink,he also noticed a bunch of flies flying around
a uncooked turkey that was beside the fridge. “This turkey doesn't
smell.”Jemison went close to the fridge. “What's that smell coming
from?”Jemison went back to Coleman. “I want blood samples from
the sink and also tell me how long mm.”Jemison trying to remember.
“Mr.Green is this dead man's name. He was hit in the back of the
head with a brute object.” Coleman said as he stared at Jemison
awkwardly. “Wait wheres Ms.Green?”Jemison asked confused. “We
don't know she's been missing.” Coleman said with a grin on his
face. “I'm definitely ruling her as are number one suspect.” “Not
yet, I'm going next door to get some questions from the one who
reported noises coming from the house last night.I can't believe they
reported him dead for five days it's smells in here.”Jemison said
curious.Before Coleman could ask another comment Jemison went next
door to see the Ms.Kate who called the police.








As he knock he could
hear Kate yelling at her son. “Billy just put our food supplies in
the basement and close the door!”Kate said angry. “No mom it's
dark down there and three's rats eating up the food,You do it!”Billy
said as he slammed his room door.Jemison knocked harder,Ms.Kate
opened the door, “Yes!” “Hi Ms.Kate I'm Detective Jemison and I
would like to ask you a few questions .” Jemison said nicely.
“Questions about the Greens murder I assume!”Ms.Kate said. “Yes
I was wondering if you saw anything unusual that night you call.”
Jemison said. “No not anything unusual,Lewis would come every two
week to visit Ms.Green while Mr.Green is out,and three's a hobo who
walks pass our house to go up the road to town.”Kate said. “So he
comes from the down that road and into town?”Jemison said as he
stared down the street where three's nothing but woods. “I don't know
every time I look out the window I see him walking to town,so I
assume!”Kate said looking behind her. “Are we done I have a mouth
to feed!” Kate said angry. “Yes thank you for your time Ms.Kate
Ill see you soon.”Jemison said as Ms.Kate slammed the door in his
face.As he walked to his car he had a thought, “A homeless person
in the country?Who is this Lewis and how do he know Ms.Green?”
Jemison said as he got in the car to look for the hobo around town.








Soon enough he got
answers to where he stayed.He drove to an old barn out in the
field.There was no animals or crops around the barn,nothing but a
stump.The barn itself was a hazard, it could burn any second if given
a small spark,it was a old,grayish looking barn with cracks and
lumber hanging off the top with grass growing wild at the bottom.He
went inside and realize it looked empty and dark,the only light was
the sun coming though the cracks on the wall from the lumber hanging
and the door he opened to come inside. He notice a sound of breathing
and knew he wasn't alone. “Um,Mister Hobo.” Jemison said trying
not to offend him. “I'm here to ask you questions about the murder
of Mr.Green.” “How you know it's murder!” The hobo said coming
slowly out the shadows. “Maybe he fell!” “So you know something
about the murder then?” Jemison said curious. “Do you have
something to tell me?” The hobo looked at him for a while and for a
sec he looked behind him and walk close to the detective and said.
“You know I had a son,we would play in the field outside and eat
apples around the tree where the stump is now.” The hobo kept
talking while looking at his feet. “Then one day he went missing, I
search everywhere for him,I was worried and scared that he left
me,that he finally got tried of being poor living in the barn and
begging around town,that he decided to leave and find a new home.He
was only 9 years old,but I could see he didn't want to be like
this.”The hobo got quiet. “ Finally I checked the woods ,Ive
searched high and low,of course the woods is too big to cover
everywhere ,so I was going to give up when I heard his screams.” the
hobo started crying. “ive tried to follow his voice,but it was too
far and I was too deep,I could hear his voice from where I came from
the front of the woods I entered,he was calling my name, screaming to
let him go.”The hobo got back quiet. “And then I couldn't hear
his voice no more,it disappeared.I just drop and cried, yelling at my
self cause I wasn't quick enough.”The hobo stopped talking, he
looked at the detective and turned around again to see behind him.
“What you looking at?” Jemison said curious.“Oh,nothing just
going crazy I guess.” The hobo said quickly.The detective studied
the hobo he looked and acted like he was hiding something just like
Ms.Kate. “Have you told the sheriff about your son?” Jemison said
.“Well of course,I guess he was too busy with the other cases to
help.” The hobo eyes widen when he realize what he said. “What
cases?” Jemison moved closer. “There was other murders?” “More
then that his wife died by hit and run a while ago and he said it was
murder.” The hobo said frowning. “ What made him think it was
murder?”Jemison said puzzled. “Well in a way it is,she was
founded at the edge of town where you have to enter from to get to
the woods I walk,and plus they never fought the car that hit her.”
the hobo said. “To make it stranger she call and told Coleman to
arrest....” The hobo became silent. “You know when she died my
son was heartbreak,I would always see the two talking, when she
died I felt kind of happy,cause now my son could talk to me again,but
now my son is gone.”The hobo said as he slowly went into the dark
shadow,While Jemison was thinking. “Wait who she wanted him to
arrest!” Jemison said as he stared into the lifeless darkness.As
Jemison walked outside he realize that it was getting dark. “Well I
can't go to a hotel now, I'll just go see Lewis.”Jemison said as he
got in his car.he got his location from the phone book,and drove to
the place Lewis live.It was a small house towards the edge of town
right beside the road that has the sign that's says “WELCOME TO LILY BAY”. He exits his car and looked at Lewis house.It was a
small place compared to the greens house, it had a red painting done
on the front and the sides was pink.As he walk towards the door he
notice a car pass that was heading towards the town on the road
heading to the area where the woods are.Forgetting about it he knocks
on Lewis door,No answer,He knocks again,still no answer so he says,
“Lewis I need a word with you.”Jemison said still getting no
answer. “Come on I know you're in there because your car is out
here!”Jemison said still not getting no answer.As Jemison waited
there he started to get hungry. “Man I wish I had some of turkey.”
Jemison said as he realize that the turkey looked fresh.


A person was standing in
front of the Green's House at 2:50am. A person gets out in go though
the “DO NOT ENTER”signs to enter the house. A person enters the
kitchen and pulls out the fridge revealing a hole. In the hole was a
room filled with bones of dead body’s. In the room Ms. Green was on
the floor dead from being stabbed five times. As the person walked
forward a small child’s voice was heard “hey welcome back,I
missed you.”The person walked towards the child and pets the
child’s on the head, then walked outside and headed into the
woods. The child went into the living-room and grab the knife from
under furniture, then headed into the attic to get the cat statue.
The child then headed outside. Before the child went next door and
climb down the basement the child mumbled “They wont be missed.”

So who did it?

Hello and welcome back to mystery thread. The first one didn't count, but this one is my own and is a easy mystery,hard ones coming next month. Please follow rules.

1.Please have fun and read carefully,Use your minds, right my own mystery heh.

2.Please read before answering so no one puts the same answer.

3.You can earn Viz if answered correctly,Even more Viz if you explain your answer. 100 Viz if right, 250 Viz if right and explained.be first to answer to win

4.This is for fun I love mystery's,riddles,and poems.I just want to show my passion, can we all just get alone?

5. My name is Darius Harris(yes it rhymes don't know why,asks my mom.)I'm 19 years old,and live in Alabama,just want you to know me.

6. You can agree with a person and I will give 10Viz if you agreed with the right one,But up to 10 people can agree and wont count unless you explain,No short answer unless first to answer.

7.This mystery thread will be on each month,Not every day or week.

8.If you have a problem please just send a private message I count every person equal.

9.I make my own mysteries and if you got one send it to me, you get full credit and get 100Viz if it good,the answer is good,well explained,and makes sense.

10.I love you all,Really I do,I don't have or show hate,Not even in my life so please no flaming.

11.You can comment on the answer,story,and thread.(no spamming)

Here is the story made by devontaxt



As Detective Jemison
pulled up to the carve and exits his car ,he could almost smell the
foul,dreaded smell in the area,As he thought to himself of how long
the body been there ,he looked around the house yard and notice that
it was clean and nice,the 2 story house looked nice with 3 windows in
the front, 2 on each of the sides and 2 on the back,on the front
there was one attic window at the top.As they walked into the
living room everything changed,the house looked liked a fight broke
out,the floor had dried blood everywhere,the lamps and tables that
hold the lamps was knock down and broken ,the walls was bashed with
something hard, the TV was smashed,and the furniture looked liked it
was cut up.“Wow this place is a mess!”Sheriff Coleman said
covering his nose. “What you think happen?”Jemison went to check
the rest of the house ignoring Coleman's comment, It looked liked
nothing happen,the house had 4 bedroom,2bathrooms,a living room,dining
room,laundry room,kitchen(which he skipped),and attic. “For a house
like this you would have seen a basement.”Jemison said as he enter
the attic.Inside the attic was a dusty floor with a whole pile of
burnt toys on the floor and a bunch of dolls lined up against the
wall, “What are these toys and dolls doing here?”Jemison said as
he head towards the door he entered to get up the attic,as he was
about to exit he notice a cat statue the size of a normal cat with
dark red feet beside the window in the attic,as soon as he walk
towards it he heard Coleman calling him down,“Why wont he leave and
let me do my job?” Jemison said as he exits the attic.Jemison meet
Coleman in the living room before Coleman start talking.“I already
check the kitchen,I think we are done here the smell is coming from
all over the house, It's best to start tomorrow,I'm not going because
I have to wait for my deputy to come and find clues on
Ms.Green.”Jemison ignored him once again and went into the
kitchen.Jemison looked around the kitchen to find that there was
blood around the sink,he also noticed a bunch of flies flying around
a uncooked turkey that was beside the fridge. “This turkey doesn't
smell.”Jemison went close to the fridge. “What's that smell coming
from?”Jemison went back to Coleman. “I want blood samples from
the sink and also tell me how long mm.”Jemison trying to remember.
“Mr.Green is this dead man's name. He was hit in the back of the
head with a brute object.” Coleman said as he stared at Jemison
awkwardly. “Wait wheres Ms.Green?”Jemison asked confused. “We
don't know she's been missing.” Coleman said with a grin on his
face. “I'm definitely ruling her as are number one suspect.” “Not
yet, I'm going next door to get some questions from the one who
reported noises coming from the house last night.I can't believe they
reported him dead for five days it's smells in here.”Jemison said
curious.Before Coleman could ask another comment Jemison went next
door to see the Ms.Kate who called the police.








As he knock he could
hear Kate yelling at her son. “Billy just put our food supplies in
the basement and close the door!”Kate said angry. “No mom it's
dark down there and three's rats eating up the food,You do it!”Billy
said as he slammed his room door.Jemison knocked harder,Ms.Kate
opened the door, “Yes!” “Hi Ms.Kate I'm Detective Jemison and I
would like to ask you a few questions .” Jemison said nicely.
“Questions about the Greens murder I assume!”Ms.Kate said. “Yes
I was wondering if you saw anything unusual that night you call.”
Jemison said. “No not anything unusual,Lewis would come every two
week to visit Ms.Green while Mr.Green is out,and three's a hobo who
walks pass our house to go up the road to town.”Kate said. “So he
comes from the down that road and into town?”Jemison said as he
stared down the street where three's nothing but woods. “I don't know
every time I look out the window I see him walking to town,so I
assume!”Kate said looking behind her. “Are we done I have a mouth
to feed!” Kate said angry. “Yes thank you for your time Ms.Kate
Ill see you soon.”Jemison said as Ms.Kate slammed the door in his
face.As he walked to his car he had a thought, “A homeless person
in the country?Who is this Lewis and how do he know Ms.Green?”
Jemison said as he got in the car to look for the hobo around town.








Soon enough he got
answers to where he stayed.He drove to an old barn out in the
field.There was no animals or crops around the barn,nothing but a
stump.The barn itself was a hazard, it could burn any second if given
a small spark,it was a old,grayish looking barn with cracks and
lumber hanging off the top with grass growing wild at the bottom.He
went inside and realize it looked empty and dark,the only light was
the sun coming though the cracks on the wall from the lumber hanging
and the door he opened to come inside. He notice a sound of breathing
and knew he wasn't alone. “Um,Mister Hobo.” Jemison said trying
not to offend him. “I'm here to ask you questions about the murder
of Mr.Green.” “How you know it's murder!” The hobo said coming
slowly out the shadows. “Maybe he fell!” “So you know something
about the murder then?” Jemison said curious. “Do you have
something to tell me?” The hobo looked at him for a while and for a
sec he looked behind him and walk close to the detective and said.
“You know I had a son,we would play in the field outside and eat
apples around the tree where the stump is now.” The hobo kept
talking while looking at his feet. “Then one day he went missing, I
search everywhere for him,I was worried and scared that he left
me,that he finally got tried of being poor living in the barn and
begging around town,that he decided to leave and find a new home.He
was only 9 years old,but I could see he didn't want to be like
this.”The hobo got quiet. “ Finally I checked the woods ,Ive
searched high and low,of course the woods is too big to cover
everywhere ,so I was going to give up when I heard his screams.” the
hobo started crying. “ive tried to follow his voice,but it was too
far and I was too deep,I could hear his voice from where I came from
the front of the woods I entered,he was calling my name, screaming to
let him go.”The hobo got back quiet. “And then I couldn't hear
his voice no more,it disappeared.I just drop and cried, yelling at my
self cause I wasn't quick enough.”The hobo stopped talking, he
looked at the detective and turned around again to see behind him.
“What you looking at?” Jemison said curious.“Oh,nothing just
going crazy I guess.” The hobo said quickly.The detective studied
the hobo he looked and acted like he was hiding something just like
Ms.Kate. “Have you told the sheriff about your son?” Jemison said
.“Well of course,I guess he was too busy with the other cases to
help.” The hobo eyes widen when he realize what he said. “What
cases?” Jemison moved closer. “There was other murders?” “More
then that his wife died by hit and run a while ago and he said it was
murder.” The hobo said frowning. “ What made him think it was
murder?”Jemison said puzzled. “Well in a way it is,she was
founded at the edge of town where you have to enter from to get to
the woods I walk,and plus they never fought the car that hit her.”
the hobo said. “To make it stranger she call and told Coleman to
arrest....” The hobo became silent. “You know when she died my
son was heartbreak,I would always see the two talking, when she
died I felt kind of happy,cause now my son could talk to me again,but
now my son is gone.”The hobo said as he slowly went into the dark
shadow,While Jemison was thinking. “Wait who she wanted him to
arrest!” Jemison said as he stared into the lifeless darkness.As
Jemison walked outside he realize that it was getting dark. “Well I
can't go to a hotel now, I'll just go see Lewis.”Jemison said as he
got in his car.he got his location from the phone book,and drove to
the place Lewis live.It was a small house towards the edge of town
right beside the road that has the sign that's says “WELCOME TO LILY BAY”. He exits his car and looked at Lewis house.It was a
small place compared to the greens house, it had a red painting done
on the front and the sides was pink.As he walk towards the door he
notice a car pass that was heading towards the town on the road
heading to the area where the woods are.Forgetting about it he knocks
on Lewis door,No answer,He knocks again,still no answer so he says,
“Lewis I need a word with you.”Jemison said still getting no
answer. “Come on I know you're in there because your car is out
here!”Jemison said still not getting no answer.As Jemison waited
there he started to get hungry. “Man I wish I had some of turkey.”
Jemison said as he realize that the turkey looked fresh.


A person was standing in
front of the Green's House at 2:50am. A person gets out in go though
the “DO NOT ENTER”signs to enter the house. A person enters the
kitchen and pulls out the fridge revealing a hole. In the hole was a
room filled with bones of dead body’s. In the room Ms. Green was on
the floor dead from being stabbed five times. As the person walked
forward a small child’s voice was heard “hey welcome back,I
missed you.”The person walked towards the child and pets the
child’s on the head, then walked outside and headed into the
woods. The child went into the living-room and grab the knife from
under furniture, then headed into the attic to get the cat statue.
The child then headed outside. Before the child went next door and
climb down the basement the child mumbled “They wont be missed.”

So who did it?

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