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08-07-12 12:58 AM
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Goodbye, falling from the clouds
Crashing into the sky and
All seems faint and soft the glow
Of your eyes touching the press against
My heart the drop of fingertips
Tears ran down your face

I am alive.

Broken wings lift me up
Light pouring in like rain
On the edge of the driveway
Breaking the clouds dampens
The sunlight and all is
One and whole falling
Into the gorge of splendid
Laughter of children in the warm summer.

You fill my heart with the grace
Of angels the faith to carry on
When all seems too difficult your face
Pushes me the desert is so cold
This life it propels me forward

And I find my way.

All worlds collide and once again
I am with you in the essence
Of the moon and golden stars

The promise of the night.

Goodbye, falling from the clouds
Crashing into the sky and
All seems faint and soft the glow
Of your eyes touching the press against
My heart the drop of fingertips
Tears ran down your face

I am alive.

Broken wings lift me up
Light pouring in like rain
On the edge of the driveway
Breaking the clouds dampens
The sunlight and all is
One and whole falling
Into the gorge of splendid
Laughter of children in the warm summer.

You fill my heart with the grace
Of angels the faith to carry on
When all seems too difficult your face
Pushes me the desert is so cold
This life it propels me forward

And I find my way.

All worlds collide and once again
I am with you in the essence
Of the moon and golden stars

The promise of the night.
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(edited by GuardianZack on 08-08-12 06:25 PM)    

08-07-12 06:51 AM
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GuardianZack : That was some nice Poetry. I've got one question, Did you make this Poetry or did you copy/paste it?
GuardianZack : That was some nice Poetry. I've got one question, Did you make this Poetry or did you copy/paste it?
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08-07-12 07:00 AM
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All of it is mine. I've been writing since I was very young, and have been published a few times before. I have thousands of them, I just thought that I would post a few to get some opinions and just to share in general. Although this was not written today, mind you- I could write something new with a bit of inspiration, but I have an entire arsenal of poetry that I could post from my archives already lol.
All of it is mine. I've been writing since I was very young, and have been published a few times before. I have thousands of them, I just thought that I would post a few to get some opinions and just to share in general. Although this was not written today, mind you- I could write something new with a bit of inspiration, but I have an entire arsenal of poetry that I could post from my archives already lol.
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(edited by GuardianZack on 09-05-12 05:39 AM)    

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That's a cool poem. You seem to have a lot of natural artistic talent.  I don't really write that much poetry and the stuff i write is pretty lame but meh... It's all about showing yourself in a deeper light of expressing things in a different manner... not quite sure where i'm going with this... So yeah i hope you find the inspiration to write more again soon.
That's a cool poem. You seem to have a lot of natural artistic talent.  I don't really write that much poetry and the stuff i write is pretty lame but meh... It's all about showing yourself in a deeper light of expressing things in a different manner... not quite sure where i'm going with this... So yeah i hope you find the inspiration to write more again soon.
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 My Poem Comment : Your poem is very nice . And I think you made it your self am I correct ? Nice one . I have no more to say sorry if my reply is too short . Me saying good bye Pokemon_101 . =))
 My Poem Comment : Your poem is very nice . And I think you made it your self am I correct ? Nice one . I have no more to say sorry if my reply is too short . Me saying good bye Pokemon_101 . =))
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Yes, all of it is original work.
Yes, all of it is original work.
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