mjabcd1234 : sounds good. i'd love too!






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Mother3fan5 : Alright then. I'll post some later today-tommorow. Look back here often!

mjabcd1234 : Ok. ready to hear them.






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Mother3fan5 : Ready?

Chapter one:The beginning of Team Fate

(This is the classic beginning of PKMNMD but the rest of the story is really different)

One afternoon in the land of pokemon, a young Riolu Named Rio was talking a walk on a beach next to his town, Treasure town. Everrything was normal. The sun was setting, csting a orange glow onto the surface of the water.
"Wow. This is amazing." He said. He noticed many krabby apearing and blowing bubbles. "This is breath takeing." He said. He sighed and tought about his life. He recently wanted to go join the Explorers Guild, be he was too scared. He desided to toughen up and try to enter the guild.
He passed through Treasure Town. Being nervous as he was, he didn't notice the other pokemon giving him
 kind "Hello"s and "How are you?"s. He had made the short trip to the guild. The entrance was the head of a Wigglytuff. Below lied an old rusty metalic grate. He wlaked towards the entrance, ingnoreing the grate.  he steppe onto the gate. the door suddenly locked.
"Pokemon's footprint!!! Pokemon's Footprint!!!"
"Who's footprint? Who's Footprint?"
Rio jumped on the grate and ran back to the beach.
"Great. Me being a coward yet again prevents me from becomeing a explorer." He sighed and watched the sun set. Night had fallen and rio was still on the beach.
"Better get home." He said. He got up and started walking. Out of no where, he heard a large groan.
"Who's there?" he asked.
"Agh......Ergh..." said the voice
"Where are you?" He asked. He saw some sort of shape. He made out a shape of a pokemon.
"Wha...? Are you ok?!?" He said with panic in his voice. He shook the Pokemon sereval times. He Started to stir and rio released his grip with a sigh of relif.
"What? Where....Where am i?" The pokemon said.
"Your on the beach near treasure town." Said rio
"Where?"
"Treasure Town." The pokemon looked confused. Rio realized what pokemon he was. He was a charmander. He looked pretty beat up.
"Are you ok?: He asked
"Yeah. I'm fine. But i can't seem to remember anything except my name."
"What is it?"
"Char. Orginal huh?"He said. Rio laughed.
"So you don't have any memorey? That's sad" Said rio. He needed to help Char in some way.
"Do you know a place i could stay for a couple days at?" Char asked.  Rio thought for a couple minutes.There was no where in Treasure Town. He looked too beat up to go anywhere farther. Suddenly, an idea poped up in his head.
"I know. You could stay with me." he said. Char smiled brighter then the sun.
"Thank you." he said
"No problom. " Rio said. He felt....Safe to let char live ith hm for a few days. After all, it couldn't hurt. He walked them back to his house on the outskirts of town.
"Well." He said. "This is where i live. Nice little home on the outside of town." He said. He watched as char alked around his home. Rio opened his closet and pulled out a couple pillows and blankets. He gave them to char and showed him his guest room. Char layed down on the bed and instantly fell asleep.Rio closed the door and walked to his room. He flopped on the bed. He usally had trouble falling asleep, but he fell asleep..almost....effortlessly

The next morning, Rio woke up and went into char's room. He was just wakeing up.
"Hey char...Can i ask you something?"
"Yeah. What is it?" He said
"Well...I feel braver aroubnd you. I'm not really scared of anything when i'm with you...and sicne you lost your memorey.....Would you like to form a Exploration team with me at the guild?"
"What's an exploration team?" He asked
"It's a team of Pokemon that explore mystery dungeons whitch are dungeojns that are always changeing. There is treasure in some. People also need help in mystery dungeons. So....What do you say?" he said. Char sat on th bed for a minute. It seemed he was conflicted.
"Alright. I'm in." He said. Rio lit up with joy.
And thus....The Beginning of team fate began...

(End of chapter one)
So...How did you like? If you want more post back here. Thanks!

mjabcd1234 : I'll check back tommarow. story seems good so far...  I think this is Explorers of Time version for the DS?  I've never played it before. i'd love to here more tommarow.






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Mother3fan5 : Your right. I couldn't find the other game so i posted it here xD So here is the second chapter.


After agreed to become an exploration team, the two ran off to the guild. The door was still barred from Rio's Earilier attempt. Rio carefully moved towards the plate. Char walked as slow as Rio, wondering if the grate was some sort of trap. The two set their feet on the grate lightly

"WHOS FOOTPRINT? WHO'S FOOTPRINT?"
"IT'S...Uh..."
"WHAT'S GOING ON SENTRET DIGGLET?"
"The foot print is..... a Riolu's! It's a Riolu!"
"RIOLU, MOVE OFF THE GATE". Rio jumped off the grate

"WHOS FOOTPRINT? WHO'S FOOTPRINT?"
"IT'S...Uh...MAYBE A CHARMANDER..."
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN MAYBE?"
"THOSE POKEMON AREN'T COMMON AROUND HERE."
"YOU DON'T SEEM BAD...."
"LOUDRED, LET THEM IN. I CONFIRMED IT'S A CHARMANDER."
"VISITORS.YOU MAY ENTER THE GUILD."
The barred gate above the door disappeared and Rio and char looked at each other.
"Ready?" Rio asked. Char nodded confidently. The two walked towards the door and opened it.
Inside the tent the door lead to was a small ladder and a hole leading downwards. The guild(Ignore the Pokémon)
"Ready?"Asked char. Rio didn't know. He was really nervous. What would the guild be like? And the guild master? He couldn't. But he wanted too all his life.
"Ready." He said. The two climbed down the ladder to the grassy ground below. A chatot walked towards them.
"We do not but anything, mail goes outside in the mailbox, and the guild master will not be interviewed. Thank you and goodbye." He said. He started to walk away muttering something. Rio and Char stood there, Stunned with his rudeness. Was he like this all the time?
"Uh...We want to form an exploration team." Said char. The chatot froze in his tracks. He started muttering something again and char could hear him this time
"They want to join this guild? All the work to sign them up...Can they even take the responsibility? It's a really tough job. So much training..."
. The chatot stopped muttering and turned around. "What? Well you would like to become an exploration team then? Alright. Follow me." he said. The two followed Chatot to a small room.
"Guild master."Said chatot.
"Come in" Said a cherry voice. Rio and char felt slightly relived. He could still be terrible, but he was more likely to be a nice guild master.
"Guild master. We have 2 Pokémon wanting to be an exploration team. Guild master. Guild master?" Said chatot. A wigglytuff fell from the ceiling and knocked over all 3 of them.
"Opssies. Sorry!" He said. Char and Rio slowly got up to see a wigglytuff standing on chatot.
"Uh....sir. Your still on chatot." Char said. The Wigglytuff looked down and jumped off chatot. Chatot got up and brushed his wings off.
"Sorry.Hiya. I'm the guild master Wigglytuff" He said.
"These two wish to become an exploration team." Chatot repeated
"OkeyDokey. Names?"
"Char and Rio" Said Rio
"Team name?" Rio didn't know he had to name the team.
"What do you think Char?"
"Hm....Team...Fate. Team Fate!" He said. Rio nodded and wigglytuff wrote their names and team name down. He wrapped up the paper and shoved it into and envelope.He turned around and picked up a chest.
"Open it." He said. Rio walked up to the chest and opened it. He found a map, a backpack, and some badges
"Is this our explorers kit?"
"Yup. Chatot, Take this letter to the post office, will you?" Chatot grabbed the letter and ran out of the room. Wiggglytuff showed them around the guild. He showed them the Bedrooms, Team Fate's room, the cafeteria, and the job room. By the time chatot got back, all the guild members had arrived at the guild and Rio and char had fell asleep.

End of chapter 2.

mjabcd1234 : Chapter 2 was good....  I'll be ready for chapter 3 in a few days because i'm busy this week.






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i am sorta new here but real good so far! =)

mjabcd1234 : Not boring at all. I'm satisfied.  PM me when chapter 4 is ready. (you can take your sweet time.)






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i agree with mother3fan5 it was not boring at all! it is very hard to find a good book or story i like and you sir have kept me reading. =) i cant wait to here more about how char and rio are doing and glad you added Riolu he is my third fav pokemon loucario is my fav on that subject are you planning to make Riolu evolve? cant wait to here more!

mjabcd1234 :  I was thinking of buying the Mystery dungeon explorer games, but that would spoil your story. if i listen to your story, i'll have the games spoiled. i dunno what to do. ( send me a message when chapter 4 is ready. i'll be waiting with a smile






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i cant wait for the next post me and mother3fan5 are going to keeep waiting tell the next chapter oh and im geting the 3ds and kingdom hears for my birth day!!!!!!

Wow, srsly dude very nice. I'm only one chapter 1 but still, very nice^^ I wish i could write storys like you :<

PokemonFan707 : DISIS AMAZING KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK(F.Y.I: i hav pokemon mystery dugueon explorers of time so sorry

mjabcd1234 : I noticed you have a lot of spelling errors just in the title of this thread. You may want to edit this. Doing so might attract more people do want to read your work.

Also, you wrote something over 700 words when you were 3 years old? I kinda doubt that since most people can barely write their own name.

supershad : Please do not revive threads that are inactive for almost a year. That is generally frowned upon.

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