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06-08-12 08:29 AM
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Dragon's Teeth and Tiger's Claws, Roars of rage fly through my jaws.
When I see those I love are hurt,You better be ready to kiss the dirt.

Touch them, Insult them, Glare at them too...Be ready, my sword is hungry for you.

Watching my eyes and seeing the dark,Be careful, lest beast leave his own mark.

Seeing the fury of the ages,Fear me now as my body rages.

Fists, Teeth, Legs and Head,I will not stop fighting until they're all dead.
Dragon's Teeth and Tiger's Claws, Roars of rage fly through my jaws.
When I see those I love are hurt,You better be ready to kiss the dirt.

Touch them, Insult them, Glare at them too...Be ready, my sword is hungry for you.

Watching my eyes and seeing the dark,Be careful, lest beast leave his own mark.

Seeing the fury of the ages,Fear me now as my body rages.

Fists, Teeth, Legs and Head,I will not stop fighting until they're all dead.
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(edited by ProtectiveDragon on 06-08-12 08:32 AM)    

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It's interesting for something so simple. If you're bothered, may I ask a few questions?

Was there anything in particular that inspired this?
How long you've been writing?
Planning anything else, literature wise?

Anyway, thanks for sharing this poem.
It's interesting for something so simple. If you're bothered, may I ask a few questions?

Was there anything in particular that inspired this?
How long you've been writing?
Planning anything else, literature wise?

Anyway, thanks for sharing this poem.
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Dude, I actually enjoyed that, and now I my brain is whirling to figure out what I want to write this time. I have a poetry thread. I should probably come up with something, and add it on there...
Dude, I actually enjoyed that, and now I my brain is whirling to figure out what I want to write this time. I have a poetry thread. I should probably come up with something, and add it on there...
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On3On: I have been writing for years, though each piece is inspired by individual aspects of my conscious and subconscious mind each poem is directly linked to my thoughts themselves, this piece was inspired by ferocious need to back up my friends and protect them from anything I can.
my first book was written while I was still in primary school though it was mostly pictures that I had drawn and I still have it hidden somewhere to an American equivalent it would probably be elementary grade schooling to you {assuming that's where you live}
I have darker pieces and I have lighter pieces and I have pieces that are unsuitable for those under 15 years of age.

thing1: it's good that I got your creative juices flowing, I have somewhere around 23 other poems that i will be posting on here as time goes by.
On3On: I have been writing for years, though each piece is inspired by individual aspects of my conscious and subconscious mind each poem is directly linked to my thoughts themselves, this piece was inspired by ferocious need to back up my friends and protect them from anything I can.
my first book was written while I was still in primary school though it was mostly pictures that I had drawn and I still have it hidden somewhere to an American equivalent it would probably be elementary grade schooling to you {assuming that's where you live}
I have darker pieces and I have lighter pieces and I have pieces that are unsuitable for those under 15 years of age.

thing1: it's good that I got your creative juices flowing, I have somewhere around 23 other poems that i will be posting on here as time goes by.
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That's some rather nice poetry you have their

I write poetry from time to time as well, I do have a few poems on here if you care to look but their not particularly any good.

Anyways keep up the good work
That's some rather nice poetry you have their

I write poetry from time to time as well, I do have a few poems on here if you care to look but their not particularly any good.

Anyways keep up the good work
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sonicmcmuffin : I have other poems as well like:



Every day is exactly the same for me

always hiding the darkness within the light

forever caged the beast shallt be

no-one else has seen my plight

but be warned you must

lest the beast break through its chains

my light might yet be dust

and watch as my own blood rains

this is one battle i must fight alone

within the dancing blades i fight

all other noise becomes a drone

until i turn my darkness bright
sonicmcmuffin : I have other poems as well like:



Every day is exactly the same for me

always hiding the darkness within the light

forever caged the beast shallt be

no-one else has seen my plight

but be warned you must

lest the beast break through its chains

my light might yet be dust

and watch as my own blood rains

this is one battle i must fight alone

within the dancing blades i fight

all other noise becomes a drone

until i turn my darkness bright
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"Until I turn my darkness bright" I love that line...
There is allot of room in these poem's for interpretation, perfect for a little inspiration. Thanks again.
"Until I turn my darkness bright" I love that line...
There is allot of room in these poem's for interpretation, perfect for a little inspiration. Thanks again.
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On3On: I still have more then a dozen other poems, I would link you to the site where all of my poetry all sits as well as my stories, not quite sure about the rules about posting personal links, I'm confused as to whether that falls under advertising of another site
On3On: I still have more then a dozen other poems, I would link you to the site where all of my poetry all sits as well as my stories, not quite sure about the rules about posting personal links, I'm confused as to whether that falls under advertising of another site
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ProtectiveDragon : Thanks for the offer, I would like to read a couple more poems.

You can set up links, within reason of course.
So long as you make sure to put up a warning about possible mature content on the sites etc, then it should be alright.

A friend on here posted links to more of his literature, and it was to a mature site, it all worked out fine, so I guess its acceptable.
On a side note, I find "copy and pasting" user-names the better then typing it in, otherwise the summoning fails, and I don't get notified, just letting you know.

ProtectiveDragon : Thanks for the offer, I would like to read a couple more poems.

You can set up links, within reason of course.
So long as you make sure to put up a warning about possible mature content on the sites etc, then it should be alright.

A friend on here posted links to more of his literature, and it was to a mature site, it all worked out fine, so I guess its acceptable.
On a side note, I find "copy and pasting" user-names the better then typing it in, otherwise the summoning fails, and I don't get notified, just letting you know.
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On3On: ah ok that makes sense, I've found that the site has a built in filter to prevent non-members and underage members from content marked with Adult, Erotica, etc etc. Most of my poetry on the other hand is NOT of an adult theme though I will admit that a few are as are a few of my stories.

the site I use is called AllPoetry:
www.allpoetry.com/ProtectiveDragon that is a direct link to my profile and should show you the lists of my work on the right hand side
On3On: ah ok that makes sense, I've found that the site has a built in filter to prevent non-members and underage members from content marked with Adult, Erotica, etc etc. Most of my poetry on the other hand is NOT of an adult theme though I will admit that a few are as are a few of my stories.

the site I use is called AllPoetry:
www.allpoetry.com/ProtectiveDragon that is a direct link to my profile and should show you the lists of my work on the right hand side
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Wow! This is pretty good! So what subjects do you most write poetry about? What usually inspires you?

I give you a lot of credit. You have a nice talent building there. I was never good at creative writing. Especially in poems
Wow! This is pretty good! So what subjects do you most write poetry about? What usually inspires you?

I give you a lot of credit. You have a nice talent building there. I was never good at creative writing. Especially in poems
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Jordanv78 : well I used to write when I was younger, before I got to High School, {high level equivalent of foreign schooling} but I stopped because I was ridiculed for years over it, roughly 2 years ago I stumbled upon the allpoetry site and decided to join, it wasn't until about 6 months later that my first poem was put up and people's comments pushed me to make more poems, I usually wrote whatever was in my heart the strongest at the time, emotions, memories, desires...

after all the hubbub began to die down I slowly started adding more and more, adding stories to my repertoire as well
Jordanv78 : well I used to write when I was younger, before I got to High School, {high level equivalent of foreign schooling} but I stopped because I was ridiculed for years over it, roughly 2 years ago I stumbled upon the allpoetry site and decided to join, it wasn't until about 6 months later that my first poem was put up and people's comments pushed me to make more poems, I usually wrote whatever was in my heart the strongest at the time, emotions, memories, desires...

after all the hubbub began to die down I slowly started adding more and more, adding stories to my repertoire as well
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    Pretty nice Poems.
    Pretty nice Poems.
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docile person : thank you, welcome to the group
when did you join up as a member?
docile person : thank you, welcome to the group
when did you join up as a member?
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Thanks for the link back there, AllPoetry is just working for me in so many ways,
and I am looking forward to a nice evening reading~

So anyway, I eagerly await the next poem...
Thanks for the link back there, AllPoetry is just working for me in so many ways,
and I am looking forward to a nice evening reading~

So anyway, I eagerly await the next poem...
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On3On:

Your tiny little hands,
Grasping at hearts,
Have left a few brands,
like little darts.

I wish I was there,
To see your first breath,
To hold you in our arms,
We wouldn't have left.
In this world, hope you can see,
That always love you, will we.
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Your tiny little hands,
Grasping at hearts,
Have left a few brands,
like little darts.

I wish I was there,
To see your first breath,
To hold you in our arms,
We wouldn't have left.
In this world, hope you can see,
That always love you, will we.
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Lovely poem, just what I like to see in the morning...
Thank you for bringing your literature here, its a nice change of pace.

And thank you for summoning me, but it still didn't work.
I use "Copy" command for summoning most of the time, and I make sure the name doesn't "touch" any text, ie


ProtectiveDragon :
ProtectiveDragon : Works.

Thanks, and have a good one.
Edit : As if to spite me, they both worked. Well nevermind.


Lovely poem, just what I like to see in the morning...
Thank you for bringing your literature here, its a nice change of pace.

And thank you for summoning me, but it still didn't work.
I use "Copy" command for summoning most of the time, and I make sure the name doesn't "touch" any text, ie


ProtectiveDragon :
ProtectiveDragon : Works.

Thanks, and have a good one.
Edit : As if to spite me, they both worked. Well nevermind.

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I don't think it worked
On3on:

I don't think it worked
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I've read into poetry some, I really can't write poetry at all, nor do I understand it all either, but, I do like your poem, I must say, good job, bahaha. (: 
I've read into poetry some, I really can't write poetry at all, nor do I understand it all either, but, I do like your poem, I must say, good job, bahaha. (: 
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mehsk1ll :

Poetry is a way of expressing what you see, feel or think in way of words. Usually in a rhyming fashion, poetry is usually written by people who have what is called a "Silver Tongue", these writers are good with words and join them together in logical patterns whether the reader can see them or not, usually in the form of Limericks and usually lacking in any emotional attachment.
Or you have another type of poet called the, "Inspired", these poets, which include me, write with flashes of inspiration brought on by sudden strong emotions or memories and they write them down as the words they "hear" in their mind, they don't always rhyme but they do tend to hold great power emotionally
mehsk1ll :

Poetry is a way of expressing what you see, feel or think in way of words. Usually in a rhyming fashion, poetry is usually written by people who have what is called a "Silver Tongue", these writers are good with words and join them together in logical patterns whether the reader can see them or not, usually in the form of Limericks and usually lacking in any emotional attachment.
Or you have another type of poet called the, "Inspired", these poets, which include me, write with flashes of inspiration brought on by sudden strong emotions or memories and they write them down as the words they "hear" in their mind, they don't always rhyme but they do tend to hold great power emotionally
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