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"Thank you barney"Jude said as he walked out of his house. He bought some healing items when all of a sudden a dark portal emerged in front of him."What the"He said as a  Jester walked out. "WHO ARE YOU?!"Jude said as he drew his Sword. "My Im Dimentio Master of demtoins and iv came to take over this one" Dimentio said with a twisted smile. "NOT IF I HAVE ANNYTHING TO SAY ABOUT THIS!"and with that Jude Attempted to cut Diminetio but to no avail. "Now I cast you out like a bug out of a picnic" "Wha-?"Jude was interpreted mid sentence. And thrown into the portal"  "Ugh"He said as he was on a brick "Were am I?" END OF CHAPTER 2!  Please help me with Criticism and ideas please.ALSO this is my first fan fic.
"Thank you barney"Jude said as he walked out of his house. He bought some healing items when all of a sudden a dark portal emerged in front of him."What the"He said as a  Jester walked out. "WHO ARE YOU?!"Jude said as he drew his Sword. "My Im Dimentio Master of demtoins and iv came to take over this one" Dimentio said with a twisted smile. "NOT IF I HAVE ANNYTHING TO SAY ABOUT THIS!"and with that Jude Attempted to cut Diminetio but to no avail. "Now I cast you out like a bug out of a picnic" "Wha-?"Jude was interpreted mid sentence. And thrown into the portal"  "Ugh"He said as he was on a brick "Were am I?" END OF CHAPTER 2!  Please help me with Criticism and ideas please.ALSO this is my first fan fic.
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