Everyone, I decided to take a step further into my Mario story, The "Mario School Last Day Madness" is finished, check out the link and READ the whole story:
https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=39883&ref=51265
POST there, I will then get the link for this thread from the link I posted here, Check it out!

Ok, then. Onto my sequel of the Mario School story!

"The Mario Enemy Club madness, where the Crazyness is!" By me, Stevie 764.


[Narrator] 7/18/1985, 2:45 PM, Mario Enemy Club...

[Bowser] Ok, everyone, the news is on, so quiet down.
[News] This is just in, Mario is coming to destroy us by jumping on the enemies controlled by the evil "King Koopa", the attacker is a Italian plumber, named "Super Mario". Here is a talk with Mario. Mario, how do you feel about this?
[Mario] I'm so happy that bowser will die, here I come, Bowser, you will be fried in lava tonight!
[Whole Club and News] *gasps*
[Bowser] *shuts off TV* I can't believe this, one minute, I am doing great, next minute, Mario comes and makes my attempts fail always! What could we do to stop him?
[Revived Goomba] Maybe get us some guns?
[Bowser] Nope.
[Red Koopa] We should make some bomb shoes for Mario, the second he puts those shoes on, they go BOOM and Mario dies.
[Bowser] Close, but no.
[Shy Guy] Have clouds drop a ton of bombs?
[Bowser] So close.
[Birdo] Make 10 beehives around Mario's Castle?
[Bowser] Almost.
[Ludwig Von Koopa] Make a nuclear bomb that explodes Mario when he steps on ANY of us?
[Bowser] Perfect! This will be so perfect, it can't possibly fail! First, I have to do a lot of things figuring out what it should have. I will get my plan typed out, and since I don't want to get you bored... *freezes everything except for himself and the computer* Now, to get this typed out. *starts typing*

[Narrator] 4 PM...

[Bowser] There we go, all set! *unfreezes everything*
[Crowd] Why were we frozen?
[Bowser] Look back at what I said before I froze time...
"I will get my plan typed out, and since I don't want to get you bored..."
[Koopas] Now I remember.
[Bowser] Check out what this bomb will have.
[Birdo] Awesome calculation, what is the calculation?
[Bowser] It says, "2>x, bomb=x, boom>2, take down Mario".
[Hammer Brother] How did you think of this?
[Bowser] It popped up inside my mind when I first thought of bombs, you use them to bomb walls in "The Legend Of Zelda".
[Bowser's Thought] Whoops, I trailed off. You know what they say, "Nobody is ever perfect".
[Boomerang Brother] When you thought of that, wait, let's get these copied so that way there, we can get Mario dead.
[Bowser] Now, this copying will take a while. *freezes everything again except for him and the computer* Now, to copy this to all of my members and keep this one for myself. *copies the bomb for a few hours* Whew, just in time. *unfreezes everything* Here are the bombs, just put these over your head and just wait for a stomp and then Mario goes BOOM!
[Clock] *strikes 7:30 PM*
[Bowser] It is closing time, good night everyone!  Boomerang Brother, wait! Nice job for coming up with the idea of using bombs! If it wasn't for that, I would still be thinking about what to put.
[Boomerang Brother] Thanks!

[Narrator] Fast Foward to 9/16/1985, 4 PM after a bunch of boring talk over the months...

[Bowser] Today is the day where Mario plans to attack us to save his princess, but we have a surprise. Bombs! He will attack in a few minutes, everyone! Teleport to world 1-1, everybody.
[Crowd] *In world 1-1*
[Bowser] Now for me to set up the camera. Ok, now I just have to wait. *reply to the members* When you start fighting, tell me.
[Crowd] *reply to Bowser* Ok.

[Game] Get your skills on.

World 1-1   Mario X 3

[Mario] *hums theme song*
[Koopas] Here he comes, Bowser!
[Bowser] Good luck!
[Mario] What was that?
[Goomba] Nothing, we just made weird talk.
[Mario] I shall stomp the goomba!
[Bowser] Here it comes!
[Goomba] *gets stomped*
*bomb detonates*
[Mario] *gasps* My legs, they are gone! MAMA MIA!
[Bowser] Whoops, must have had a miscalculation. *reply to the members* switch to plan B!
[Mario] Move out of the way, I need some coins. *smashes coin block with head, stuck*
[Boomerang Brother] Is he dead or what?
[Bowser] Wait for it, wait for it!
[Mario] *body falls off the head*
[Game] Mario X 0. Dead.

[Bowser] YES! YES! I knew this could happen! *reply to the members* Way to go, my friends, we stopped Mario from taking us down, now we can conquer the mushroom kingdom, capture the princess, and now we can have a lot of fun parties over the years of this club, now we have endless possibilities for this club! Check how much money there is inside Mario's wallet.
[Green Koopa] I found... $137.
[Bowser] Every week, I get  probably $150, so that is a big jump. Oh, I just forgot something, you still know the place where the teleporter to here is?
[Goomba] We put it inside the [?] block so Mario could get killed. All we have to do is crack this block open... It's hammer time! *smacks the block with a lot of hammers*
[Bowser] There it goes, now, to teleport back to world 1-1.

[Narrator] After everyone teleports back to the club...

[Bowser] I now have some news on the TV, check it out! *turns on TV*
[News] Breaking news! According to a camera placed by the King Koopa, we found the footage of Mario dead, here is the footage:
"[Mario] What was that?
[Goomba] Nothing, we just made weird talk.
[Mario] I shall stomp the goomba!
[Bowser] Here it comes!
[Goomba] *gets stomped*
*bomb detonates*
[Mario] *gasps* My legs, they are gone! MAMA MIA!
[Bowser] Whoops, must have had a miscalculation. *reply to the members* switch to plan B!
[Mario] Move out of the way, I need some coins. *smashes coin block with head, stuck*
[Boomerang Brother] Is he dead or what?
[Bowser] Wait for it, wait for it!
[Mario] *body falls off the head*"
[News] His wallet was gone and according to a later footage of it, there was $137 in there. If anyone can replace Mario, please contact us with the Email address or the phone number on the screen.
[Bowser] *shuts off TV* I have a announcement waiting outside the Club, and now it is 7:30 PM, bye everyone!

[Narrator] Outside the club...
[Goomba] A party at the Mushroom Kingdom? A dance!? Awesome! Wait, at 9/17/1985, 9 AM? Won't that cancel the Mario club we have each day, bowser?
[Bowser] It opens at 9 AM - 12:30 PM everyday, so we deserve a treat after that hard work I pulled off myself.


[Narrator] End of part 1...


[Me] Part 2 coming soon!

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Ha! Yes indeed... I enjoyed this. It looks like you've done quite a bit recently too, whats helped with the process/motivation to do it?
Thanks for taking your time to share this, its much appreciated.

ProGamer135 : Aww come on! This is good, really!

(Actually be careful how you put things, you could unintentionally have an negative effect on a person.
Anyway I believe the best way of going about this is to not comment/rate on things that you don't like,
as it just could be down to personal taste's.
Barring, of course, any advice you might have.
And in the time you had spent to comment on this you could have simply looked for something that you did like.
I mean no offence, I hope you take this as advice only, and not an "bash".)

Part 2...

[Narrator] At the Mushroom Kingdom hospital where Mario is in the MKSCU... (Mushroom Kingdom Super Care Unit)

[Hospital Toad] This looked pretty bad, but if we do the correct operation, Mario could be back on his feet in no time.
[Hospital Toad 2] Ok, I will need to get a lot of stitches for Mario.
[Hospital Toad] Here it is!
[Hospital Toad 2] Dont worry, Mario. You will live. Start the operation!

[Narrator] After all the stitching is done and when Mario is out of the MKSCU... (Mushroom Kingdom Super Care Unit)

[Hospital Toad 2] That came out as a great operation.
[Hospital Toad] Dont worry, Mario. After a little while, you can go back to what you were doing.

[Narrator] When Mario is healed and out of the hospital...

[Mario] Yippee! Now I can get revenge on Bowser for what he did on me! Hear that, Bowser? I am coming to take you down!


[Narrator] Back at the Mario Enemy Club...

[Bowser] So how about a few jokes about Mario?
[Goomba] Why did Mario cross th-
[Mario Enemy News] This is just in, Mario was found outside the hospital  all healed and he will now take down bowser,  if bowser dies, Mario will take over the Mushroom Kingdom!
[Bowser] *gasps* I thought Mario died!
[Mario] *kicks door open* Here I am, prepare to die, Bowser!
[Bowser] How did you, find us?
[Mario] I saw the club name, and I knew you were in there!
[Bowser's Thought] I knew this would happen.
[Bowser] Everyone, teleport!
[Mario] You can't stop me!
[Crowd] *dissappears*
[Mario] Time to start in World 1-1! *starts game*

[Game] World 1-1. Mario X OVER 9000!

[Mario] I found a secret warp! I heard that if you go down the first pipe, it takes you to world 8-4's last room. *goes into warp pipe*

[Game] Last room of World 8-4. Mario X OVER 9000!

[Mario] Bowser is just around the corner, hear me, Bowser!?
[Bowser] Uh, oh. Here he comes!
[Mario] Here I am! Rocket Powers, GO! *fires a ton of rockets at bowser*
[Bowser] *laughs* I had a rocket proof vest on.
[Mario] How would you like THIS!? *fires needles*
[Bowser] I think I, am starting... to... die. *collaspes*
[Mario] Yay! *touches axe* How do you like that now, dorky dork koopa?
[Bowser] *screams* I hate lava! *gasps* I AM DYING IN HERE! *burns into ashes*
[Mario] Tough luck, "Mister King Koopa" *runs to princess*
[Princess Peach] Mario, is that really you?
[Mario] Yes.
[Princess Peach] Oh, Mario! I missed you so much! *hugs Mario and kisses him* Lets go home.
[Mario] Okey Dokey! Let's a go!
[Game] *credits scroll*


[Narrator] 9/20/1985, 2 PM...
[Ludwig Von Koopa] Where's bowser?
[Mario Enemy News] This happened yesterday inside Bowser's castle, Mario was fighting Bowser, and taking him down, here was the footage of the scene:
{[Mario] Bowser is just around the corner, hear me, Bowser!?
[Bowser] Uh, oh. Here he comes!
[Mario] Here I am! Rocket Powers, GO! *fires a ton of rockets at bowser*
[Bowser] *laughs* I had a rocket proof vest on.
[Mario] How would you like THIS!? *fires needles*
[Bowser] I think I, am starting... to... die. *collaspes*
[Mario] Yay! *touches axe* How do you like that now, dorky dork koopa?
[Bowser] *screams* I hate lava! *gasps* I AM DYING IN HERE! *burns into ashes*
[Mario] Tough luck, "Mister King Koopa" *runs to princess*}
[Birdo] No more Bowser? *gasps*
[Mario] So long, club! *gets in a bulldozer and tears the club down* How do you like that, enemies? *shuts off bulldozer* Now that is a ton less things for me to worry about!

[Narrator] 8:28 PM, Mario's house...

[Luigi] Mama Mia! I thought you ended up dyin because I saw the Mario Enemy News. I like the Mushroom Kingdom News.
[Mario] I am alive, check out all these stitches I needed.
[Luigi] That is a lot!
[Mario] I just stopped Bowser and saved Princess Peach, so we should set up a party.
[Luigi] Maybe we could go bowling or something?
[Mario] I tried that before, I didn't even know how to play!
[Luigi] How about dance, or do the Mario?
[Mario] Do the Mario! Swing, your, arms, from side to side, come on, let's go do the Mario! *hums theme*
[Narrator] After the dancing...
[Mario] Wow, look at the time! It is getting late!
[Luigi] Yeah, 8:45 is when we sleep.

[Narrator] So Mario went to bed and slept...


Part 3 coming soon, where Mario has a strange sleeping dream.

Sorry about Mario destroyed in the first part, I actually like Mario, but I went a little too crazy thanks to the title, it was too much for me to fit my club crazyness with the title.

Mario was healed, he took down bowser and the club, what will happen next? A strange dream that will be in part 3.

On3On : I checked out part 1, my jaw dropped all the way to the floor when I saw how godly amazing it is compared to my efforts! I will check out the next 2 parts of it.


Part 3, long waited, but this time, it is a little weirder than before!

Note: Part 3 took me more than a hour to do, so this part is worth the effort!

[Narrator] After the events of part 2, we saw that Mario stopped bowser after getting the ultimate revenge after getting killed in part 1, and rescuing the princess, after that, he did the Mario. Let's continue.

Cut to: Mario's house, midnight, tight on Mario's dream...

[Game] Super Mario Bros 2 TM Nintendo, 1988.

Story- When Mario opened a door after climbing a long staircase in his dream, another world spread before him, he heard a cry for help, to be freed from a spell. After awakening, he went to the cave nearby and to his surprise, he saw exactly what he saw in his dream... Push Start Button.
[Dream Mario] *pushes start*
[Dream Game] Select your character.
[Dream Mario] *picks Mario*
[Dream Game] World 1-1. Mario x 2.
[Game Mario] (after finding a door) I wonder what is in here... *enters door* MAMA MIA, what is this!? Might as well explore the level and survive there.
[Narrator] Fast Foward to: Birdo fight in world 1-1...
[Game Birdo] This is as far as you'll go! *spits egg*
[Game Mario] *picks up egg and tosses it at birdo's head*
[Game Birdo] *dies, indistinct voice*
[Game Mario] *picks up magical orb*
[Game Bird Mask] *opens*
[Game Mario] *enters*
[Game] Win some extra lives with your coins from the level.
[Game Mario] *enters his 6 coins*
[Narrator] Fast Foward to: Select your character...
[Dream Mario] Let me a try Luigi!
[Game] World 1-2, Luigi x 7.
[Narrator] Fast Foward to: Key jar...
[Game Luigi] A key? In a jar? *grabs it* this is too easy!
[Phanto Mask] *gasps* luigi took the key! Attack!
[Game Luigi] Just have to put this is into the door an- *shrinks* What the... PHANTO MASK!? *runs into door* It won't open, quick, open the door! *unlocks door with key, enters door* Whew, almost got killed there. A cave? *plucks plants* Bombs? Sniffets? Maybe I need a bomb to explode this wall. *places bomb*
[Bomb] *explodes luigi*
[Game Luigi] *dies* Mama mia!
[Narrator] Rewind back to the bomb pluck...
[Game Luigi] Bombs? Sniffets? Maybe I need a bomb to explode this wall. *places bomb* RUN!
[Bomb] *Explodes wall*
[Game Luigi] Awesome! Wait, another sniffet? *tosses it into a pit* A ladder, too? *plucks 2nd plant* Wow, lucky me! A potion? Wonder that would do? *drinks*
Nothing? Uh oh, *dies* Mama Mia!
[Narrator] Rewind to potion pluck...
[Game Luigi] Wow, lucky me! A potion? Wonder what happens if I drop it? *drops potion, door appears* Lucky me! *enters*
[Narrator] Teleport to Subspace...
[Game Luigi] A few plants? *plucks them* Coin mayhem!
[Narrator] Teleport back to exact spot where luigi entered the door...
[Game Luigi] A crumbled floor? *drops bomb, explodes*
Another? *drops bomb, explodes*
Another one, too? *drops another bomb, explodes* There we go. Uh oh, NINJI is coming!
[Game Ninji] *running after luigi* Let me touch you!
[Game Luigi] No! *uses one as a jumping stone to reach the huge cliff* Whew! *enters door* Back at the regular world? That was a huge cave! *enters entrance to birdo*
[Game Luigi] Birdo, you again!
[Game Birdo] This is as far as you'll go! *spits out egg*

[Narrator] This is too much, Fast foward to the ending!

[Game Mario] *pulls out jar plug*
8 beezos came out?
[Game] Contributor, Mario. Character uses: Mario, 6. Luigi, 2.
Toad, 0. Princess, 0.

[Game Toad] Watch that wart get clobbered!
[King Wart] *screams* THIS HURTS!
[Game Mario] Thank you a so much for playing!
[Me] WARNING: Spoiler alert in the game!


[Narrator] End of part 3...

Cast:
Mario
Luigi
Toad
King Wart
Birdo
Sniffet
Ninji
Game (not really)
Phanto Mask
Beezo
Narrator (me!)


[Game] The end.
[Me] Of part 3, part 4 will come soon! Part 4 will focus on the club again, don't worry.

Stevie 764 : Sorry if I had kept you waiting, it wasn't intentional.
Well, I have nothing to add here, other then it is all an worth-while read. (in my opinion.)
Thank you again.

Off topic
<sub>Btw. Comparing works like that is out of context in this medium, ideally no one should have to be "better" then the other, if I enjoy something, I enjoy it equally. (Its hard to express my point here... Oh well.)

I mean no offence. Thanks for your time.</sub>

Part 4 of my sequel story. Here it goes!

[Narrator] After the events of Mario's dream, we discovered that it was weird, funny, and strange at the same time.

At the Mario Enemy Club...

[Bowser] Dang it! We failed to stop Mario, and I was nearly dead thanks to the Magikoopa for reviving me and my skin. Change of plans, what will we come up with now?
[Paragoomba] How About adding some more lava?
[Bowser] That won't even work out.
[Green Birdo] Maybe have every enemy spit fire?
[Bowser] Everyone who can't spit fire can burn easily, so no.
[Bombomb] Before I explode, how about we add some explosive land mines? *explodes*
[Bowser] Stupid bombomb destroyed my pictures! Also, no. Here is what I will do, we can probably send in guns to shoot Mario easily, simple.
[Goomba] The events of Mario ARE rated by ESRB, ESRB will not put the game in the E section, so let's think of something else.
[Bowser] Drat, how about we can set up a fake door that Mario enters, and I will be disguised as the Princess. Here is a simulation:

*simulation starts*
[Mario] A door? Out of nowhere? *enters door* Princess, are you okay?
[Princess] Thanks Mario, but your princess is in another castle. *spits out fire*
[Mario] What the!?
[Princess] *takes off mask*
[Mario] *gasps* BOWSER!?
[Bowser] *shoots freeze trap on Mario* RUN!!!

*simulation ends*

[Bowser] That will work awesome, like "Awesome sauce".
[Manager] You have this wrong, Bowser. When Mario saves the princess, the princess is the real one, there is absolutely no way in existance that you could get the EXACT costume of the princess!
[Bowser] Yes I can!
[Manager] How?
[Bowser] I will steal the princess dress and copy it onto my costume version.
[Manager] That would end up leaving her without a dress!
[Bowser] SKIP ALL OF THIS, THIS IS ANNOYING!
[Manager] Looks like I ain't working anymore. *takes off suit*
[Mario] It's a time for me to stomp some bowser!
[Bowser] *screams*
[Mario] *jumps on spike* Doh, Mama mia! *respawns outside club* "Why Bother?" I am developing a bowser killing machine right now! Don't tell a bowser, anyone!

[Narrator] At the Mario Science Center...

[Mario] I just have to get some touches to finish up this, and... Done! My very own, "Bowser Exploding T-100" machine. Now I have to sneak up to him and fire it off.

[Narrator] Back at the Mario Enemy Club...

[Bowser] Lets check the TV for some commercials. Nothing on channel 8, nothing on channel 29, NOTHING IS ON HERE!!! *smashes TV while screaming* Who's gonna pay for it!?
[Goomba] You?
[Bowser] NO! NOT ME, NOT ANYONE, IT IS ME AND MY MARIO HATING MADNESS!!! *screams while slamming walls*
[Goomba] What is with you!?

[Narrator] Goomba and Bowser then have a 10 minute conflict battle...

[Bowser] Whew, that was something to take care of, wait a minute, why do I smell something weird? Is that gum?
[Birdo] Not me.
[Mario] *fires the machine*
[Bowser] *screams* MY BACK, IT FEELS LIKE THE PAIN OF A THOUSAND BEES!!! *screams* HELP, HELP, HELLLLLLLLP! *finds a bucket of water* Almost, still a few. *rolls in it* There we go, wait, now I feel itchy! Is this a deadly disease or what!?
[Mario] *whispers to himself* It is the bowser kill disease.
[Bowser] It is reaching my body, now my neck, my head, my... Brain... *collaspes*

[Mario] Time to move out, calling to Mario Station Center, mission "destroy bowser" has been complete.



Part 5 coming soon...