The last day of Mario school. Just a fan story with Mario characters. Mario's accent has a "A" in it at times,
You will understand.

Here is the story:

[Peach] Ok, class, we are going to take a final test and if you pass this, you will be eligible to graduate. If you get a D or F, you will have to go to summer school, if I see any cheating or if it looks like it, I will give the cheaters a automatic 0 and you will be forced to go to summer school.  I will pass out the tests, keep them upside down. *passes papers out* Any questions before we start?
[Mario] I got a question, how hard is this a test going to be? If it is a hard, I will Mama Mia off a cliff.
[Peach] This will be easy, don't worry.
[Yoshi] Yoshi yoshi yoshi? (How long will this test take?)
[Peach] About 15-30 minutes, depends.
Let's start the test!

[Narrator] After everyone finishes the test...

[Peach] Ok, I graded everyone's tests, and here are ALL of the scores.

Mario, 95, A.
Luigi, 79, C+.
Toad, 70, C-.
Yoshi, 73, C-.
Red koopa, 69, D+. You will go to summer school.
[Red Koopa]
[Peach] Green Koopa, 71, C-.
Birdo, 100! A+!
[Birdo] Yay!
[Peach] Dry Bones, a 65, D-.
[Dry Bones] *facepalms*
[Peach] You are going to summer school.
Pirahna Plant, a 76, C.
Goomba, 67, D. You are also going to summer school.
Merlon, 98, A+!
Nolrem, 89, B+.
Lastly, Cheep Cheep, a 94, A.

Any comments?

[Goomba] *slams head on desk* NOOOOOOO! *cries*

[Peach] There was only 3 people who didn't pass, they are, Red Koopa, Goomba, and Dry Bones, all with D's. You three will get picked up on Monday through Friday at 7 in the morning for summer school, so you better set your alarms to 7 AM every day!

*bell rings*

[Peach] Also, before you go, here are your report cards, don't open them until you get home, everyone! Bye bye, everyone, see you in college!

[Narrator] At the Mario Bros house...

[Peach] Whew, that was a tiring year!
[Toad Father] Mario and Luigi, what is your grade?
[Mario] 95 which equals A.
[Luigi] 79 which equals C+.
[Toad Mother] Good work, you two!
[Toad] Want to hear my grade?
[Toad Father] What did you get?
[Toad] A 70 which equals a C-.
[Toad Mother] You got lucky.
[Mario] It is time for a dinner!

[Narrator] So the Mario Bros family ate dinner and they were ready for college.

The End, for now.  

Not bad that was a pretty good story. Have ever thought about becoming a writer? Not joking I have short attention span and I won't read anything if doesn't get my attention.

Peach actually announced each student's scores out to the class? Wow, she is a horrible teacher. Teachers are not supposed to do that

rcarter2 : This a fan made story, so I could put whatever I wanted to put in there. In that school, there was a rule that said:
- All Mario School teachers have to say the grades out, no matter what.

Next part coming tommorow if someone posts!

Just to clarify, I was not criticizing your story. Just because I am finishing out my teaching degree, that is one thing we are always told, so I was being a a smart-alek Just in case you got the impression I was trying to point out flaws or something. Just kidding

That was a very good fan made story that you did.

SuperGameBoy1 : Thanks!

Ok everyone, time for the summer school part! [ dun Dun DUn DUN!]

[Narrator] Continued from where the last day ended, only 3 people didn't pass the final test and they had to go to summer school.

[Bus Driver] Here we are, everyone!
[Goomba] Wait a minute, that looks like a resturant, everyone, follow me!
[Red Koopa and Dry Bones] YAY!
[Narrator] But when they got inside...
[Red Koopa] What is this?
[Bowser] *slams door shut and does the bowser laugh* I tricked you into thinking this was a resturant, and there is NO escape here! HA HA HA! Let's get to class, shall we?
[Goomba] I'm scared!
[Bowser] Right this way, everyone.
[Narrator] In Room 666...
[Bowser] *slams door shut* Ok, everyone, my name is "Mr. King Koopa"!
[Red Koopa] Dont we already know you?
[Bowser] SILENCE!
[Red Koopa] Okay.
[Bowser] Now, todays assignment is to a easy paper with only 5 problems and I will be able to see if you will stay back in 12th grade, or you go to college.
I will pass out the papers for the "easy" test, leave them upside down, and NO CHEATING! If I see or if it looks like it, I can banish you back to 12th grade! Get it, banishback? *laughs like crazy*
[Goomba] Good, while he is laughing, let's try to get out of here before he-
[Bowser] Were you planing on a escape?
[Goomba] Uh, no.
[Bowser] Good, let's start the test!
[Red Koopa] Oh, my, MAMA MIA! 25 problems that we never could do!? You are so insane with this! D:<
[Bowser] Good luck, you will need it.

[Narrator] After Goomba, Koopa, and Dry Bones finish the test...

[Bowser] Ok, here are the results:

Red Koopa, you passed?
[Red Koopa] Yay!
[Bowser] Goomba, you FAILED!!! HA HA!
[Goomba] I have to go Mama Mia off a cliff now!
[Bowser] Lastly, Dry Bones... You also failed. HA HA HA HA HA! Which means that only the Red Koopa has passed the test with a lucky 70, here is what the others got:
Goomba got a 64, F. Red Koopa got a 69, D+. Looks like you both will stay back a year because "You failed!" HA HA HA HA!
*bell rings*

[Bowser] Good luck, Red Koopa, hope you have a good college, my friend.
[Red Koopa] Hope so, too!
[Goomba] Wait a minute, how are you two friends?
[Red Koopa] We met when we were trying to conquer the mushroom kingdom, remember that, Goomba and Dry Bones? Trying to conquer the Mushroom Kingdom?
[Cricket] *makes cricket noises*
[Red Koopa] What in the Mama Mia's is that?
[Bowser] Get to your bus, class is over. See you two failures in 12th grade! >

[Narrator] Outside the school and inside the bus...
[Goomba] I really hate bowser, he is brutal!
[Red Koopa] I know, he is such a dumb bot!
[Dry Bones] It is his fault for ripping all of my skin off from when I had some before, making me a skinless enemy! D:<


To be continued, again...

That was a very good and funny summer school part.

Now, for the one and only... The story finale (?) of the Mario School Last Day Madness!
Gloomba is Goomba's mother, and Boomba is Goomba's father, so you aren't confused with Goomba's parents.

[Narrator] At the Mario Enemy Club...

[Bowser] Order, order, in the club please! I have some news, this is some good news...
[Goomba's Thought] Please don't say it, PLEASE don't say it!
[Bowser] Goomba and Dry Bones failed summer school! HA HA HA HA HA!
[Goomba and Dry Bones] *gets laughed at by the whole club*
[Bowser] Lets settle down, now, please. I have more news...
[Red Koopa's Thought] Please say it, I need to be honered!
[Bowser] We have a enemy who passed summer school, Red Koopa!
[Club] *applauds at Red Koopa*
[Birdo] Way to go, my friend!
[Hammer Brother] I knew you could do it!
[Red Koopa] Thanks, everyone! Now, I can go to college and get a job for myself and make my own house!
[Green Koopa] Don't you already share my house with me?
[Red Koopa] Yes, I do have a house plan for our houses to be sticked together. Here is the plan, uh, everyone, clear a table for my blueprint, please! Thanks, here is the plan, I will have a wall-blocked walkway which will be chained between the bottom of our houses, I will cut out the doors where the walkway will be chained with a knob in it so if "we" need to have fun or do something, we could come to the house and have some fun, probably dance with each other. Once I become a Engineer, that plan will happen.
[Bowser] Now it is 4:30 PM, bye everyone, see you tommorrow!
[Narrator] After everyone leaves...
[Bowser] Finally it is time for me to email Goomba and Dry Bones's parents with this letter. *types it then finishes* There we go. Now to send it to their parents and I will sneak in cameras so I can see what will happen. HA HA HA H-
[Manager of Mario Enemy Club] What are you laughing about?
[Bowser] I thought of a good plan for myself to enjoy.
[Manager of Mario Enemy Club] Ok, just checking. *leaves*

[Narrator] At the Goomba house...

[Gloomba] *spanks goomba* Unbelievable, you do good, then you stay back, you have to die now.
[Goomba] Wait, you don't under- *gets squished and dissappears*
[Boomba] What was all of that noise!?*screams* You killed our son!? I can't believe you did that, you swore to not kill your son, but now, you just stepped way too far and did it. D:<
[Gloomba] He deserved it, remember when I told him to not stay back a grade in school or else he dies?
[Boomba] I don't remember th- *gets smacked*
[Gloomba] He deserved it, AND THAT IS THAT! I QUIT! STOMP ON ME PLEASE! *gets stomped* Thank you. *disappears*

[Narrator] From Bowser's computer in the club...
[Bowser] *laughs out loud* I can't believe she killed his own son, exactly like Mario would! Now to see the Dry Bone reaction. *starts recording*

[Narrator] At Dry Bone's house...
[Dry Bone's Mom] *kicks Dry Bones*
You are the stupidest enemy in the world, now we can't afford anything anymore! I got to jump you now. *stomps Dry Bones*
[Dry Bones] *uncollaspes* You thought that would kill me?
[Dry Bone's Mom] *seperates all bones* There you go, nice, and seperated. *throws Dry Bones into the trash* You deserve to die like that!
[Dry Bone's Dad] ?
[Dry Bone's Mom] I was just, you know, settling something with our son.

[Narrator] Again, at Bowser's Computer in the club...
[Bowser] *rolls on the floor while laughing* I didn't see that coming,  that will defenitly go inside my Club History book:
Goomba and Dry Bones dead, population -2. That was perfect! I never knew that plan would go into to perfection, but it worked!

[Narrator] The End.
[Me] Do you have a question or a comment about the story? Please post it here!

Thanks for reading the story of the Mario School Madness. "See you again soon!" - Omochao from Sonic And The Secret Rings

Stevie 764
What can I say about this?

In short :
I like the style, and its a very good parody. (Not to be vague, but really that's it! I just like it!)
I had a smile on my face from beginning to end... Thanks for sharing it!

Questions :
1. How long did you spend on this? (including revision)
2. Have you done stuff like this before? (or seen other people's stuff like this and thought you would have a go?)

And the most important one
3. Are you planning to do anymore? (of anything)

Take care!

On3On : Thanks for the compliment! Here are the answers to your questions.

My answer for question 1:
It took me a little more than 20 minutes to write, I did type this in my iPod notes and then I copy & pasted it into the post to create my story.

My answer for question 2:
However, I have actually done this with my pikachu and ash story with me probably "bashing" pikachu at the start and it was pretty fun to make something like this, when I think of what part of a story to write, it will be fun to type out on my iPod, then copy & paste it onto the post.

My answer to question 3:
That is all of the story, I will do a ongoing club story of Mario thread, but instead, it will focus on the club because there is no summer school now. I will do a Kirby story on Friday this week, and the story will take the games stories and put the games in chronogical order. (Chronogical order means to list stuff in the order they happen.

Those are my answers to the questions that you asked me.
One thing I also have to add is that when I write these stories in my iPod notes, I don't have to worry doing short story parts being slightly more than 100 words. Also, when I make these stories, they are so long that they can get up to 500+ words long, with the Mario club part of the story being a total of 694 words long counting everything in my post, even the characters lines that have the character name who says it in brackets so it is a lot easier to figure out what person will say whatever I put in their lines. But whenever I make posts like the story parts, I get tons of post exp and I rank up higher and higher in the memberlist ranking for post experience.

This is a seriously interesting story. Please create another one similar to this story.

LOL, wow these are some great stories dude. I hope you can make some more funny Mario stories soon.

ProGamer135 : I am making a sequel, I will post the link once I get the first story part done.

Markeith21 : I have a sequel to this story being created, once I get the first part of it done, I will post the thread link.