Free verse poetry is the poetic equivalent of a rap battle, except that here is there is no competition other then the quest to produce unique works of poetry.

There is only one rule, everything you write has to be spontaneous and completely improvised.

i.e. You write the poem 'live' here and post the thread without editing or correcting your work, what comes up, comes up that's how it goes.

If you wish to publish other poems you have previously written I am sure there is a thread elsewhere this is for free verse only.

You are allowed to post as many poems as you want, within whatever Vizzed rules or parameters there are on posting, Mods please clarify, but please try to keep it to one poem per post.

Let the 'battle' commence

Oh guiding star
I
cant believe
how beautiful you are
you are
you are
you are
we shouted soon
the spiritless girl desired them
a flower dreamt in them
the soft heart surrendered quickly
the mouth shouted in a heartbroken desire
you felt the fragile warmth
a warmth surrendered in him
a rose fell slowly
a desire kissed us soon
a happy love died delicate
the deafening heart loved a mellow breeze passionately
a captivating love gave us the spiritless warmth
you fondled a delicate kiss softly
the languishing fire dreamt deafening
the pretty sun whispered passionately
a burning desire danced
I cuddled a pretty kiss quickly
a noisy lover desired a warm breeze carefully
we fell tenderly
the warmth came
My love for star is so great,
my heart melts for her 'til the dusk of day.
The night soothes when her's away,
kindles, flames 'til day's dawn.
Her beauty is great,
Wondering mind 'til her sees,
loving is all I do,
While waiting for the moment, for her to say "I do."