So, if you follow my posts from time to time, you know that I post some of my personal stuff for criticism. This time, this is very serious. The place where I moved to, all they really take is resumes, which is new to me. My old flash drive that I had broke, and it had everything on there. So I am asking for your criticism. And please, do not do anything stupid with the personal information. I would prefer you just ignore that part, so I leave it out., Just know that it is there, I have just elected not to put it in for fear of some idiots using it for stupid reasons.

OBJECTIVE
A position that will help me become more responsible.

SKILLS
Ability to operate any electronic device.
Superior knowledge in mathematics and history.
Good filing and organizational skills.
Ability to take accurate phone messages and deliver messages promptly.
Good customer-relations background.
Great with mutli-tasking.
EMPLOYEMENT HISTORY

Insider/ Delivery                                                                                             2012
Dino’s Pizza, Cameron, NC
Clean up all work stations on nights that I closed.
Successfully complete all jobs by time requested.
Did all the errands for the owners and managers.

EDUCATION

High school Diploma for CTCP Prep and College Prep.
Terry Sanford High School.
Fayetteville, North Carolina.
Copy of Transcript available upon request.

ACOMPLISHMENTS
National Beta Club, Red Springs, North Carolina Chapter
Invited to join National Honor Society
Graduated with a 3.02 GPA

So... is there anything that needs to be edited, taken out, or added? I feel like there is a section that I am missing, but I can not think of what it is. Any help is greatly appreciated.

It would really help if we knew exactly what this resume was for. Is it for a job, college, other?

rcarter2 : any darned job i can get, really. so it would be for employement. Had some luck today, found a couple of people who are hiting. I just hope they choose me.

I wouldnt say can use any electronic device, no offence but it sounds... Lame.
Say something like im technologically apt, experienced with computers (only say that if its true, if you have no clue and bomb, it'll be that much worse).
I would say seeking to use my knowledge in a constructive manner and increase my knowledge and skills further, (if its relevant, also you want to meet new people and are looking forward to working in a team).
Good linguistic skills.
Good communication, good with people, working with people, enjoy a challenge.
Put how long you were employed for, and the dates.
And all the jobs you've had.
Contacts to your previous employer (phone number so potential employers can verify.
Put in you have a drivers license and vehicle if you do, thats a big winner.
This could help you, if only to see what to put in:
http://www.reed.co.uk/cvbuilder/account/signin?ReturnUrl=%2fcvbuilder

thenumberone : thank you., I will take this advice into consideration.

Well, the biggest problem I see here is the fact that having this up on the board like this would make the people that would hire you think it would be plagiarism since they have no way of telling it's you or not (As far as when they're selecting), and they won't bother to ask.

Other than that, I have no clue I have no idea how any of this works, to be honest, Nya~.

MegaRevolution1 : I see what you are saying, but I doubt they would actually got looking for a resume online.

If you are going to be judged on a resume then you better take out your objective.

"A position that will help me become more responsible."

To me that statement makes you sound really irresponsible. But I guess that depends on who is reading the resume. Maybe say something like "Obtain a position where management and responsibility skills are a top priority." There are other ways to say it that is just one that looks a little better but what do I know? I never actually got hired off a resume lol.

Ability to operate any electronic device.

I should put this on my resume. I didn't realize it was a skill since just about anyone I know can do that.