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Hello and welcome!

This story is really old, so It has typos and may not be finished.

Also, I used my name in here, then my characters names.

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Creator:
Liam
Original
Idea from: Black ops.
Chapter
1
The
world between.
My
vision is broken, I can’t see a thing... but I know I’m falling,
fast.
I
hit the ground, I was sat pondering how to get out for a while, when
a zombie came up to me! The zombie fell down quickly, I found out the
zombie died, a boy came forward, “Hello, I’m Ross,” Ross said
gleefully, “let me help you up.”
He
was carrying an AUG, and a double wield pistol, “IT WILL BE
DANGEROUS! HERE TAKE THIS!” Ross said as if it was a reference from
something.
Oh,
the first Legend of Zelda, that was the reference.
I
saw something in the distance, “I just saw an explosion, what is
it?” I asked Ross.
Chapter
2
Friends
all around.
“That
man...” Ross muttered to himself,
I
saw he was carrying and RPG-7, with his shots well aimed. He had a
chunk of flesh missing out of his head.
He
came up to Ross and said, “Hey Ross, long time no see!” He said.
“Who
are you?” I asked him.
“Oh,
I’m Troy,” He replied politely, “Who are you?”
“I’m...
Liam.” I said quietly.
A
hoard of zombies came up to us,
“No
time to introduce ourselves!” yelled Troy, “Get a move on!”
Chapter
3
Friend
get, friend lost.
Troy
had disappeared for a while, me and Ross were curious what he was up
to, but he came back with better ranged RPG.
“I
killed 65 zombies, I’ve been keeping count,” I said to Troy.
“Ross!”
Me and troy yelled. We noticed Ross was trapped by the zombies.
I
killed 27 more, but it wasn’t enough. I heard the zombies laugh;
It
was way too late to progress with Ross, I wish I’ll see him soon,
but he’s dead now, no chance.
Chapter
4, the mindless zombie, Zanagar.
“Troy!
I’ve been trying to keep up with you... The zombie master Zanagar
has awoken!” Said someone from behind.
“Logan!”
Troy cried out!
“Who?
What? When? Where? Why?” I blurted out in confusion.
“Ah
yes, Let me introduce myself...” Logan said. “I am Logan, Prince
of the world between, until, the zombies came, leaded by a mindless
zombie” “Zanagar” Troy Interrupted. “Yes,” Continued Logan,
“Zanagar lead the zombie clan to the world between to look for
human beings to feed on. Zanagar was eating the poor people and
animals, Zanagar, the evil mindless zombie master.”Said Logan
sadly.
“Well
then, are we going to hunt him down or not?” I said rudely.
“Yes,”
replied Logan, “Let’s go!”
Chapter
5
3
is a crowd, but 4?
“Another
zombie is coming!” Troy shouted through the misty land, “And it
doesn’t look very weak!”
“Oh
no!” I shouted, “He’s coming for me!” I wasn’t kidding, he
really was! I shot him 25 times, I was out of ammo, and I had no time
to reload!
The
strange zombie just laughed and walked off, “Damn! Damn damn!”
Yelled Troy, A machete blasted through the air and knocked me down,
“Liam!” Cried out Logan. I couldn’t see, it was all a blur,
then I heard a voice, a sooth voice, they were reviving me through
the power of their guns.
I
was up again! Logan and Troy seemed confused, I looked behind me, and
there was someone there.
“Hey
there, I’m Kieran, call me Kiwi” Kieran said cheerfully,
“What
are you here for?” Logan asked,
“Fighting
off zombies, you?” Kieran replied,
“Same,”
I said, “Also were hunting for Zanagar.
“Idiot,
no-one, No- One should know about Zanagar!” Shouted Logan.
“I
haven’t said anything for a while.” Said Troy sadly.
“No
worries, I already knew about him, stupid mindless vampire / zombie
leader...” said Kieran.
“WUT!”
Me, Logan and Troy shouted.
“Vampire
leader?” I said.
“Yes,
and I’m going to kill them!” Kieran said, pulling out a thunder
gun out of his jacket.
“Here,
a double pistol won’t be enough to destroy the clan. Take this AUG,
I found it while I was killing zombies, one of them had ate a gun.”
Said Kieran. (Geez, from now on he’s Kiwi!)
I
shuddered, I knew where THAT had come from, and I don’t even want
to KNOW what they did to his belt...
Now
this is really getting to the next level!
Chapter
6
3
– 2 = 1?
This
is so boring; we have been walking up masses of mountains searching
for Zanagar... is it tomorrow yet? I forget... Troy’s been arguing
with everyone... it’s so weird... until one day Troy just couldn’t
stand being on this side, he went to kiwi, told him there was no way
anyone can survive, he thought it was a joke about the walking and
all, but, troy got out his RPG-7 and there was an explosion, of
course I was dropping behind, Logan following me, it didn’t hit me,
but kiwi was with Troy, and I think Troy had something to do with
it... I ran up there after the explosion had faded, Troy, wasn’t
Troy anymore... he was a zombie!
“No
way!” I shouted, grabbing my AUG, aiming.
Logan
just sighed, “I should have known since his behaviour.”
Troy
laughed; I had no idea why though...
“You
thought I was human?!?!” Troy said. “What did you expect from
this chunk of flesh missing out of my head?!?!”
I
thought for a minute, it was all making sense... was Troy the one
that actually commanded those zombies to kill Ross?
“This
Zanagar you’re looking for...” Troy said. “Is... Me!” Troy
ran and ran, until I couldn’t see him anymore.
Then
the penny dropped, “I get it now!” I yelled. “Troy- - I mean
Zanagar, is trying to get our group, to get us to give up! But it’s
no use, our friends come ‘n go.
As
I finished speaking a familiar voice came from behind me.
“You
thought the zombies could defeat me?” The voice said,
“Ross?”
I said, thinking of the voice.
“Yes,”
Ross said, “I’m back, and I’m not a zombie!
“Score!”
I yelled without thinking.
Ross,
he had a chunk of flesh missing out of him, it was a close one, and I
was going to give him his AUG, when he got a China lake from his
belt.
“Might
not be much to the zombies, but it’ll do for a while, don’t
bother about the AUG, also, do you want to hear what happened?”
“Sure,”
I said.
Chapter
7
Ross’
story
“Well,”
Ross said, “I actually saw the zombies coming; I thought of a plan,
very quick, it was quite good I’d say, well, here goes, I got
thrashed by the zombies, but one stood out, that green one, did you
see?”
“Yes,”
I said.
“Well,
that zombie was quite kind. It went down into the horde, and grabbed
me, and warped, unfortunately, I hadn’t been holding my AUG, I
could see the zombies running away, then I saw myself on a gray
mountain, then the zombie jumped off,
“Wut...”
I muttered.
“I’ll
be right back, going to get myself a better gun.” Ross said.
Then
we set off, again. We decided to look for more people to destroy the
zombie clan, oh and vampires too.
Chapter
8
Friends
‘n guns.
“Arghh,”
Said a voice, “Stupid vampire, wont diiiiiiee!”
“Huh?”
I said, the others turned around to follow my sight, it looked like
someone, that I don’t know, oh, a girl... she’s gotta ray gun.
The
girl was running away from the zombies and a few vampires, and ran
into Ross, since he had a bit of flesh missing, she mistook him for a
zombie, and nearly shot him, until Ross said hi, then she knew he
wasn’t a zombie,
“Oh,
hi...” She said, “My names Yahnah, sorry for mistaking you for a
zombie!”
Then
Ross got the idea that she was quite strong, and asked her if she’d
become part of our clan.
“Sure,”
Yahnah replied, just don’t be afraid of Zanagar.
Logan
said, “How do you know about Zanagar!”
“It
WAS a tale, but someone found out it was real last year and told
everyone, then the zombies attacked, and then came the vampires.”
Yahnah said.
“Makes
sense...” I said. “Now let’s get going!”
Chapter
9
The
mountains of murder.
“Durr...”
I said, “We are back to the place where Kieran died.”
“Death
is a strong word,” Someone said. “I’m just hurt!”
“Kieran!”
Me and Logan shouted, while Yahnah and Ross just said: “Kieran?”
“I’m
okay, don’t be too surprised, I thought something may happen, then
I jumped off the mountain and used my rope to grip on, the rope
slowed me down a bit, but my hands were burning badly, so I let go,
and I survived.”
Chapter
10
Never
ending, never lose.
“Right
then, no one’s heard my story, or Logan’s, I suppose we have
time.” I said.
“Mine
first” Logan said.
“Okay,”
I said.
“Well,
here goes,” said Logan, “I am a ruler of the world between, only
one of them, yeah, there are 3 princes and only one king. By the way,
the king is 204 years old, and he’s my dad. To become the king, the
3 princes have to do tests, like capture giant boars, but the test
are only held when the king is dead, or dying. Well, you get it.
Zanagar is trying to kill the king, so I’m trying to stop him.”
“Okay,
I understand now, now it’s my turn.” I said.
“I
had gone out for one of my night strolls, when I found a big hole,
the next day me and my sister had gone down the park, then I got
bored, so I took the shortcut home, and I forgot about the hole, and
I slipped up and fell, but I didn’t stop falling, I couldn’t see
anything at all.”
“Anyone
want to hear how I got here?” Ross said.
“Hear!”
We all said.
“Okay
then,” Ross said.
“One
Saturday, I was so happy that there was no school, so I started
running around streets, then I saw a hole, I was curious what was
down there. The next day I had said about the hole to my brother, who
is actually my best friend, not my real bro. He wanted to come down
the hole with me; I just said it looked quite deep.
So
yes, on Sunday, we went to the hole, he said go after him if he
didn’t come up for a minute, so he was screaming, so I jumped down,
I could see him falling, I didn’t dare tell him, but he landed
fine, but he got eaten by a zombie, every day I kill thousands of
zombies to get revenge.
“Yep.”
I said. “Does anybody know how to get out?
(Awkward
silence)
“Uhh...” Logan said, “I don’t actually know.”
“I
don’t want to say my story,” said Yahnah.
“Neither
do I.” Kieran said.
Once
again, awkward silence...
Chapter
11
Strange
confusion, death of the vampire clan.
“Hmm,”
Ross said, “Is this a code?”
“Probably,”
Kieran muttered, “We don’t have the key though,”
I
was silent, so Ross asked, “You dead? You haven’t spoken for
about half an hour.”
Of
course I was still silent; I couldn’t speak, till I found myself
saying, “Kiá hotlgk bgÚ...”
“What?”
Ross and Kieran shouted, “What the Bob Marley are you saying?!”
“Kímrí
TÍJ Núk?” I
said, trying to figure out what I was saying.
First
thing I wasn’t controlling my mouth, now I wasn’t controlling my
entire body, before I could struggle, I raised into the air, now I
couldn’t even see, it was no way near confusion, a monster wasn’t
taking over my body, I could see again, and I could read the code, it
said, “Whoever gets thee pass code wrong, will be abolished by dark
souls.”
“Mékor
Jí...” I said, “Kamísho Korió tamí, Trín kafá tamí lokót,
Tío Krín, sami fol.
Then
I had black flame surrounded me, I was hovering over the code, then I
landed, now I had complete restoration for body movements, but still
being possessed by dark spirits, my mouth was still messed up,
“Rikinas Koróu!” I
yelled with delight, “Tivinch karco.”
“Hmm,
taken over by monsters, I expect,” Kieran said,
“Must
be this area, let’s get out of here, there should be another way
round.”
“Kiká
mificho!!!” I
shouted, I think I was trying to say that it wasn’t,
“Krekino
shiká chedsli tufu, kami ki nó,”
Yahnah,
mystified by this darkness, just said, “Well, I think it’s the
code, you got it wrong earlier Ross, it might be something to do with
the code.”
“Hmm,
come to think of it, that does sound right, damn...” Ross said.
“Hílogan
crekré tem.” I
said.
(Too
many awkward silences.)
“Damnit,
now your being possessed by dark spirits.” Kieran said.
“I...
I... I thought it was a myth... the 3 dark spirits, luckily, you’ve
only been possessed by two, the third can even attack your brain!”
Logan said, “Plus, this was why I was silent for so long.”
“Íuokunty?”
I
said, “HYCROTAMI!!”
“Do
you know when this will wear off?” Ross whispered to Logan.
“About
a week, if he’s lucky the minimums about 5 days.”
Then
I was like // (OnO) /
“KYUKU
FUMIMTI KE!”
“Well,
we have to still destroy Zanagar, even if Liam is like that.”
Kieran
said.
“Kya
Chanlic!”
I was happy that I could still see and control myself, the problems
my language.
Pulling
out an AUG, I yelled “Granlig Edikio!” and
hurried on.
Stupidly,
we went the wrong way, the vampire infested way, of course, that
place was the vampire’s hideout, and it was morning.
Chapter-?
Year
6.
I
haven’t got much time left to finish this, the school computers
resist my discs, so in a year, it’ll be done.
Chapter
12
Sealed
in the darkness inside of me.
Its
Been 4 days since we set off, I still haven’t recovered yet.
A
small problem, we have NO idea where were going so, yeah.
“Kakis
no kiav.” I said.
“Meee
Voiz iz retrnung!”
“Wow!
Did he just speak?!” Logan said.
“The
minimum is 5 days... It’s only been 4!”
“Black......”
I said, hardly speaking.
“You’re
right, the black flames.” Logan muttered.
“Black
flames?!” We all chorused, well, except me, who didn’t speak,
finding it hard to.
“There
is still a dark soul, and it seems like it’s going to stay there.”
Logan said.
“Mountain...”
I said, pointing at a mountain with a broken house at the top.
So
we went to the mountain, wondering who or what was up there.
After
a while, I spoke a bit more, and then we got up to the top, the house
was abandoned, it looked like it was bombed.
I
found a book, the cover said, “How to be protected from zombies.”
The
word “Zombies” Caught my eye. Everyone else was investigating, so
I sat on the floor and read it.
It
looked quite fake, “Zombies can’t stand fire, Make a wall and
burn it, but make sure you can get over it.”
I
saw a zombie walk through fire earlier, that’s when Yahnah found
me.
“What
are you doing here?” She said, “Oh, and we only found this.”
She
pointed to an ancient painting, crumbling apart.
“I’m
Reading cause I couldn’t find anything but this book.” I replied.
“I
found a hidden door!” Ross shouted.
I
dumped the book on what looks like the remains of a table, and
started sprinting to Ross, Yahnah did the same.
We
found Ross below a desk, poking at a square block, joined onto the
table.
“Watch
this.” He said, and pushed the block up, where the block was there
were lots of stairs, and he said, “Come on then!”
Me,
Ross, Yahnah and Kieran went down, Logan said he’ll look for more
stuff.
Chapter
13
The
stair-case.
We
had been going down the stairs for a while now, and then Kieran said
he saw light, and then we saw it.
This
wasn’t day light, no way. It was a lamp.
“Oh...”
Kieran said, “It’s just a lamp.”
But
it wasn’t just a lamp, it was a... uh... um.... Triple power lamp!
After
that there were more stairs, but this time, they were going up.
After
a minute, Logan came down the opposite way, I said, “How did you
get here?”
“Different
passage,” Logan replied, “It must just be a different way
around.”
So
we went back up.
I
only just realised that I was tired, not just my legs, darn it.
Everyone
else was quite tired, so Yahnah said: “Why don’t we rest and look
more tomorrow?”
Everyone
agreed.
We
went outside and Logan said he’ll go get firewood, while we sat
here.
Chapter
14
The
story.
We
all sat by the fire, Kieran said: “Hey, can I tell you a secret?”
He said to me, everyone else was asleep.
“Do
you remember the time we met?”
“Yeah,
you saved me.”
“Well,
I was the one that threw the machete, it was an accident, don’t
tell anyone though.”
“Oh,
Alright, That means I don’t owe you a favour!”
“You
already did the favour, we travelled together.”
“Aww,
Aint that sweet?” Said Ross, in a mocking voice.
“Quiet
you.” I said, pointing my Aug at him.
“Emm...
Alright.” He said, tilting his head and closed his eyes.
“But
before,” He said, making me jump, “Have I seen you before?”
“I
was going to ask the same thing tomorrow!” I said, realising
something.
“I
think we know each other.” I said, joyfully.
In
a way, By any chance is your full name William?
“Yes.”
I said, “And your last name is Howieson, correct?”
He
nodded. The sign for me to jump about.
Chapter
15
Best
friends
“I
didn’t know it was you, Ross!” I said.
“Muh?”
Logan said, woken by this. “What... are... you...” and he fell
asleep.
“Ah,
Let’s go back to sleep, I thought I would never see you again, but
there you were, in front of me all this time.”
Ross said.
“Yeah,
Good night.” I said.
Kieran
was just surprised, and then he fell asleep.
Yahnah
was the first to wake up, since she was the longest one asleep.
She
woke us up, saying “Zombies.”
Of
course we killed them, but there was something going on back at the
place where Ross found me.
We
could see the whole world between from the mountain, I said, “Come
on! We got to go back!” No one was listening, except Ross.
Ross
said, “Hey, we don’t need them.”
I
said “Um... Ok, but I would
feel better if they came, we could run into Zanagar along the way.”
“Not
likely.” Ross said. “Zanagar hides; he wouldn’t even ambush one
of us.”
“Great.”
I said, “But what about earlier?”
“That
was just to annoy us, by killing off teammates one by one, but his
plan failed, and Kiwi lived.” Ross replied.
“Great
job Zanagar, You just made me REALLY mad!” I said.
Before
Ross can go off after me, I ran off shouting “I’m going to break
your nose!”
Chapter
16
Another
goodbye.
“You
try to kill us off one by one! This is just MAKING ME REALLY ANGRY
WITH YOU!” I said.
“He’s
madder than ever, guys.” Ross said to Logan.
“Possibly
the last dark spirit.” Logan replied.
“No,
I think he knows who Zanagar is going after.” Yahnah said.
I
was still running. I actually had no idea of where I was going. But
then I remembered. I could feel my rage burning. I felt like Zanagar
was going after... Yahnah!
I
felt like I would go super saiyan, I was that mad.
Now
back at the mountain Ross ran down shouting: “I’m going to find
Liam!
I
sat down for a rest, and then I saw Ross walking, out of breath.
“goshdarnit
Cr- -Liam!” He shouted.
“What’s
wrong with you?”
I
didn’t say a thing.
I
was looking up at Zanagar right there.
Then
Ross was silent too.
“Oh
chicken.” Ross said.
“RUUUUNN!”
So
we ran up the hill, but I left my gun behind!
Then
Zanagar picked it up.
“Hey,
why did you say Cr at the start when you yelled my name?” I said,
still running.
Ross
didn’t say for a while.
“I...
know your REAL name...” He finally said.
“And
so do I. It’s William.” I said.
“No.
I know you more than you think, Criso.” Ross said.
“Criso?
Are you on drugs?!?!” I said.
“Nope.
I’m not Ross either.” He replied.
“I’m
Chrono.” Chrono said.
“Wait;
so we don’t really know each other.” I said.
“Wrong.”
He said. “I’m your brother.”
“You’re
Mad!” I shouted.
“Oh,
stop being dramatic and damn run!” Chrono shouted.
“Says
you!” I said.
“Just
run!” He replied.
“But
what about my gun?” I said.
“We
will think about THAT later!” Chrono shouted, running faster.
“But
I need to tell you!” I said. “Zanagar is aiming for Yahnah!”
“Oh
no he don’t!” Chrono said. “He thinks he’s going to kill us
off one by one? Lies!”
“He’ll
probably go for me, I don’t have any weapon.” I said.
“No;
Zanagar isn’t like that at all.” He replied.
I
stared at him. Was he really my brother? Or was he just kidding.
He
didn’t sound like Ross and my brother Chrono is... dead.
Oh
my god. I just figured it out. Chrono didn’t die!
“No,
Criso. We are all dead. The zombies just died twice.”
“Wait;
what?” I said.
“You
remember? I died didn’t I?” He said.
I
thought about it. He said he was Ross, but why?
“I
know what you’re thinking.” Chrono said. “I had to.” “To
avoid you going psycho.”
“I
am right now!” I said. “...We have been running for hours.”
“We
are here!” Chrono shouted.
The
final chapter.
What
I’ve done.
“Ah,
Hello, Chrono.” Logan said.
“WHAT?!”
I shouted. “You knew this too?!”
“Sorry,
we needed to.” Yahnah said. “It’s something you won’t
understand.
“Fine
then. You just wait.” I said.
“For
what?” Yahnah said.
“This
world is meant to be a lie...” I said, grabbing a sword from the
floor.
“Then
you people are just... fake?” I said.
“I
couldn’t say.” Kieran said, with an evil grin.
I’m
not Kieran. I’m Zekroi. The man that killed you.
“I’m
not Yahnah, I’m Kiroso.” Kiroso said.
“I’m
not Logan either.” Whoever that guy was said. “I’m your best
friend. Zeki.”
“P-p-prove
it!” I stammered, knowing this was all a lie.
“Kirokozi!”
Zeki said.
He
was. Only me and Zeki made up that word.
But
I didn’t think so.
Pulling
out the sword, I shouted. “No! You can’t be him! This is all
faaaake!!!!”
“Snap
out of it Criso!” Kiroso shouted, nearly crying.
“No!
You guys have just been keeping it from me! You knew it all this
time!” I shouted, crying.
I
actually stabbed Chrono, but he wasn’t hurt.
“Criso,
get it in your head. This is your dream in death. You are dead.”
Chrono said.
“You
mean I worked so hard for a “Try again...” Screen.” I said.
“YOU
JUST DARN KEPT IT FROM ME!” I shouted. “You’ll pay for this,
Chrono!
I
stabbed him again, this time he fell.
I
looked at Kieran, or Zekroi. He flinched then ran.
I
just went after him, I was faster.
In
the corner of my eye, Zeki pulled out a gun.
I
knew what was coming.
I
didn’t blame him, would you shoot your friend if they were killing
your friends on a killing spree and eyeing you?
He
pulled the trigger on his gun, but I wasn’t stupid, I swung my
sword and the bullet went flying back.
He
didn’t dodge, so Kiroso dived at pulled him out of the way.
I
wouldn’t move, I just stood there, then Zeki grinned and did a
trick shot and a real one.
Now
this was actually a wave of bullets. I either dodge by swinging the
sword sideways or let him shoot me.
But
at the last second, I did a front flip over the bullets. One skinned
the top of my head, but otherwise, he missed.
The
dark spirits heard the fight. They were with me in this.
The
zombies joined in too. Even Zanagar did! I grinned of how I
outnumbered them so much. The odds of them winning were small. I was
smiling with purple flames all around me, and lots of zombies.
But
the zombies seemed to be scared.
Since
the dark spirits had a heart, I could fly, and talk too.
“It’s
your fault you lost. You could have said I was dead and you would
have defeated me. You left it too long.” I said.
But
I couldn’t move. It wasn’t the dark spirits, it was me. I fainted
in midair, the dark spirits left me and I fell to the ground. I
didn’t think I was alive, but I just couldn’t move. Zeki took my
sword from the ground and pointed it at me. Never seen someone so
happy to kill their friend.
Then
before I knew what was happening, Zeki pulled the sword back and
threw it at Kiroso.
I
nearly laughed, I knew I shouldn’t, but I nearly did. Zeki said
“You live for as long as you like in this world.”
I
said “Yeah, right.”
I
had fell for the trick, I long forgot about Zekroi, who murmured:
“For the second time...” and pulled out a gun from his belt and
tried to shoot me. Zeki grinned evilly.
“What
the hell are you doing?!” I yelled, having to dodge series of
bullets, but one hit me. It didn’t do any major damage; but my leg
was wounded from the shot.
I
ended up falling on my knees, cursing Zekroi.
He
fired his last bullet, and missed. I didn’t move so I expected it
to be some trick, but he just reloaded and fired with a better shot.
The shot got my head and killed me, for a second time.
BUT-
Zeki... He wasn't really planning this...
He
got angry with Zekroi and killed him.
Epilogue.
Lame.
I died. The thing is that Criso would actually win it, even though
they outnumbered him. He actually let the final shot hit him. He
would have dodged.
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Chapter
1
The
world between.
My
vision is broken, I can’t see a thing... but I know I’m falling,
fast.
I
hit the ground, I was sat pondering how to get out for a while, when
a zombie came up to me! The zombie fell down quickly, I found out the
zombie died, a boy came forward, “Hello, I’m Ross,” Ross said
gleefully, “let me help you up.”
He
was carrying an AUG, and a double wield pistol, “IT WILL BE
DANGEROUS! HERE TAKE THIS!” Ross said as if it was a reference from
something.
Oh,
the first Legend of Zelda, that was the reference.
I
saw something in the distance, “I just saw an explosion, what is
it?” I asked Ross.
Chapter
2
Friends
all around.
“That
man...” Ross muttered to himself,
I
saw he was carrying and RPG-7, with his shots well aimed. He had a
chunk of flesh missing out of his head.
He
came up to Ross and said, “Hey Ross, long time no see!” He said.
“Who
are you?” I asked him.
“Oh,
I’m Troy,” He replied politely, “Who are you?”
“I’m...
Liam.” I said quietly.
A
hoard of zombies came up to us,
“No
time to introduce ourselves!” yelled Troy, “Get a move on!”
Chapter
3
Friend
get, friend lost.
Troy
had disappeared for a while, me and Ross were curious what he was up
to, but he came back with better ranged RPG.
“I
killed 65 zombies, I’ve been keeping count,” I said to Troy.
“Ross!”
Me and troy yelled. We noticed Ross was trapped by the zombies.
I
killed 27 more, but it wasn’t enough. I heard the zombies laugh;
It
was way too late to progress with Ross, I wish I’ll see him soon,
but he’s dead now, no chance.
Chapter
4, the mindless zombie, Zanagar.
“Troy!
I’ve been trying to keep up with you... The zombie master Zanagar
has awoken!” Said someone from behind.
“Logan!”
Troy cried out!
“Who?
What? When? Where? Why?” I blurted out in confusion.
“Ah
yes, Let me introduce myself...” Logan said. “I am Logan, Prince
of the world between, until, the zombies came, leaded by a mindless
zombie” “Zanagar” Troy Interrupted. “Yes,” Continued Logan,
“Zanagar lead the zombie clan to the world between to look for
human beings to feed on. Zanagar was eating the poor people and
animals, Zanagar, the evil mindless zombie master.”Said Logan
sadly.
“Well
then, are we going to hunt him down or not?” I said rudely.
“Yes,”
replied Logan, “Let’s go!”
Chapter
5
3
is a crowd, but 4?
“Another
zombie is coming!” Troy shouted through the misty land, “And it
doesn’t look very weak!”
“Oh
no!” I shouted, “He’s coming for me!” I wasn’t kidding, he
really was! I shot him 25 times, I was out of ammo, and I had no time
to reload!
The
strange zombie just laughed and walked off, “Damn! Damn damn!”
Yelled Troy, A machete blasted through the air and knocked me down,
“Liam!” Cried out Logan. I couldn’t see, it was all a blur,
then I heard a voice, a sooth voice, they were reviving me through
the power of their guns.
I
was up again! Logan and Troy seemed confused, I looked behind me, and
there was someone there.
“Hey
there, I’m Kieran, call me Kiwi” Kieran said cheerfully,
“What
are you here for?” Logan asked,
“Fighting
off zombies, you?” Kieran replied,
“Same,”
I said, “Also were hunting for Zanagar.
“Idiot,
no-one, No- One should know about Zanagar!” Shouted Logan.
“I
haven’t said anything for a while.” Said Troy sadly.
“No
worries, I already knew about him, stupid mindless vampire / zombie
leader...” said Kieran.
“WUT!”
Me, Logan and Troy shouted.
“Vampire
leader?” I said.
“Yes,
and I’m going to kill them!” Kieran said, pulling out a thunder
gun out of his jacket.
“Here,
a double pistol won’t be enough to destroy the clan. Take this AUG,
I found it while I was killing zombies, one of them had ate a gun.”
Said Kieran. (Geez, from now on he’s Kiwi!)
I
shuddered, I knew where THAT had come from, and I don’t even want
to KNOW what they did to his belt...
Now
this is really getting to the next level!
Chapter
6
3
– 2 = 1?
This
is so boring; we have been walking up masses of mountains searching
for Zanagar... is it tomorrow yet? I forget... Troy’s been arguing
with everyone... it’s so weird... until one day Troy just couldn’t
stand being on this side, he went to kiwi, told him there was no way
anyone can survive, he thought it was a joke about the walking and
all, but, troy got out his RPG-7 and there was an explosion, of
course I was dropping behind, Logan following me, it didn’t hit me,
but kiwi was with Troy, and I think Troy had something to do with
it... I ran up there after the explosion had faded, Troy, wasn’t
Troy anymore... he was a zombie!
“No
way!” I shouted, grabbing my AUG, aiming.
Logan
just sighed, “I should have known since his behaviour.”
Troy
laughed; I had no idea why though...
“You
thought I was human?!?!” Troy said. “What did you expect from
this chunk of flesh missing out of my head?!?!”
I
thought for a minute, it was all making sense... was Troy the one
that actually commanded those zombies to kill Ross?
“This
Zanagar you’re looking for...” Troy said. “Is... Me!” Troy
ran and ran, until I couldn’t see him anymore.
Then
the penny dropped, “I get it now!” I yelled. “Troy- - I mean
Zanagar, is trying to get our group, to get us to give up! But it’s
no use, our friends come ‘n go.
As
I finished speaking a familiar voice came from behind me.
“You
thought the zombies could defeat me?” The voice said,
“Ross?”
I said, thinking of the voice.
“Yes,”
Ross said, “I’m back, and I’m not a zombie!
“Score!”
I yelled without thinking.
Ross,
he had a chunk of flesh missing out of him, it was a close one, and I
was going to give him his AUG, when he got a China lake from his
belt.
“Might
not be much to the zombies, but it’ll do for a while, don’t
bother about the AUG, also, do you want to hear what happened?”
“Sure,”
I said.
Chapter
7
Ross’
story
“Well,”
Ross said, “I actually saw the zombies coming; I thought of a plan,
very quick, it was quite good I’d say, well, here goes, I got
thrashed by the zombies, but one stood out, that green one, did you
see?”
“Yes,”
I said.
“Well,
that zombie was quite kind. It went down into the horde, and grabbed
me, and warped, unfortunately, I hadn’t been holding my AUG, I
could see the zombies running away, then I saw myself on a gray
mountain, then the zombie jumped off,
“Wut...”
I muttered.
“I’ll
be right back, going to get myself a better gun.” Ross said.
Then
we set off, again. We decided to look for more people to destroy the
zombie clan, oh and vampires too.
Chapter
8
Friends
‘n guns.
“Arghh,”
Said a voice, “Stupid vampire, wont diiiiiiee!”
“Huh?”
I said, the others turned around to follow my sight, it looked like
someone, that I don’t know, oh, a girl... she’s gotta ray gun.
The
girl was running away from the zombies and a few vampires, and ran
into Ross, since he had a bit of flesh missing, she mistook him for a
zombie, and nearly shot him, until Ross said hi, then she knew he
wasn’t a zombie,
“Oh,
hi...” She said, “My names Yahnah, sorry for mistaking you for a
zombie!”
Then
Ross got the idea that she was quite strong, and asked her if she’d
become part of our clan.
“Sure,”
Yahnah replied, just don’t be afraid of Zanagar.
Logan
said, “How do you know about Zanagar!”
“It
WAS a tale, but someone found out it was real last year and told
everyone, then the zombies attacked, and then came the vampires.”
Yahnah said.
“Makes
sense...” I said. “Now let’s get going!”
Chapter
9
The
mountains of murder.
“Durr...”
I said, “We are back to the place where Kieran died.”
“Death
is a strong word,” Someone said. “I’m just hurt!”
“Kieran!”
Me and Logan shouted, while Yahnah and Ross just said: “Kieran?”
“I’m
okay, don’t be too surprised, I thought something may happen, then
I jumped off the mountain and used my rope to grip on, the rope
slowed me down a bit, but my hands were burning badly, so I let go,
and I survived.”
Chapter
10
Never
ending, never lose.
“Right
then, no one’s heard my story, or Logan’s, I suppose we have
time.” I said.
“Mine
first” Logan said.
“Okay,”
I said.
“Well,
here goes,” said Logan, “I am a ruler of the world between, only
one of them, yeah, there are 3 princes and only one king. By the way,
the king is 204 years old, and he’s my dad. To become the king, the
3 princes have to do tests, like capture giant boars, but the test
are only held when the king is dead, or dying. Well, you get it.
Zanagar is trying to kill the king, so I’m trying to stop him.”
“Okay,
I understand now, now it’s my turn.” I said.
“I
had gone out for one of my night strolls, when I found a big hole,
the next day me and my sister had gone down the park, then I got
bored, so I took the shortcut home, and I forgot about the hole, and
I slipped up and fell, but I didn’t stop falling, I couldn’t see
anything at all.”
“Anyone
want to hear how I got here?” Ross said.
“Hear!”
We all said.
“Okay
then,” Ross said.
“One
Saturday, I was so happy that there was no school, so I started
running around streets, then I saw a hole, I was curious what was
down there. The next day I had said about the hole to my brother, who
is actually my best friend, not my real bro. He wanted to come down
the hole with me; I just said it looked quite deep.
So
yes, on Sunday, we went to the hole, he said go after him if he
didn’t come up for a minute, so he was screaming, so I jumped down,
I could see him falling, I didn’t dare tell him, but he landed
fine, but he got eaten by a zombie, every day I kill thousands of
zombies to get revenge.
“Yep.”
I said. “Does anybody know how to get out?
(Awkward
silence)
“Uhh...” Logan said, “I don’t actually know.”
“I
don’t want to say my story,” said Yahnah.
“Neither
do I.” Kieran said.
Once
again, awkward silence...
Chapter
11
Strange
confusion, death of the vampire clan.
“Hmm,”
Ross said, “Is this a code?”
“Probably,”
Kieran muttered, “We don’t have the key though,”
I
was silent, so Ross asked, “You dead? You haven’t spoken for
about half an hour.”
Of
course I was still silent; I couldn’t speak, till I found myself
saying, “Kiá hotlgk bgÚ...”
“What?”
Ross and Kieran shouted, “What the Bob Marley are you saying?!”
“Kímrí
TÍJ Núk?” I
said, trying to figure out what I was saying.
First
thing I wasn’t controlling my mouth, now I wasn’t controlling my
entire body, before I could struggle, I raised into the air, now I
couldn’t even see, it was no way near confusion, a monster wasn’t
taking over my body, I could see again, and I could read the code, it
said, “Whoever gets thee pass code wrong, will be abolished by dark
souls.”
“Mékor
Jí...” I said, “Kamísho Korió tamí, Trín kafá tamí lokót,
Tío Krín, sami fol.
Then
I had black flame surrounded me, I was hovering over the code, then I
landed, now I had complete restoration for body movements, but still
being possessed by dark spirits, my mouth was still messed up,
“Rikinas Koróu!” I
yelled with delight, “Tivinch karco.”
“Hmm,
taken over by monsters, I expect,” Kieran said,
“Must
be this area, let’s get out of here, there should be another way
round.”
“Kiká
mificho!!!” I
shouted, I think I was trying to say that it wasn’t,
“Krekino
shiká chedsli tufu, kami ki nó,”
Yahnah,
mystified by this darkness, just said, “Well, I think it’s the
code, you got it wrong earlier Ross, it might be something to do with
the code.”
“Hmm,
come to think of it, that does sound right, damn...” Ross said.
“Hílogan
crekré tem.” I
said.
(Too
many awkward silences.)
“Damnit,
now your being possessed by dark spirits.” Kieran said.
“I...
I... I thought it was a myth... the 3 dark spirits, luckily, you’ve
only been possessed by two, the third can even attack your brain!”
Logan said, “Plus, this was why I was silent for so long.”
“Íuokunty?”
I
said, “HYCROTAMI!!”
“Do
you know when this will wear off?” Ross whispered to Logan.
“About
a week, if he’s lucky the minimums about 5 days.”
Then
I was like // (OnO) /
“KYUKU
FUMIMTI KE!”
“Well,
we have to still destroy Zanagar, even if Liam is like that.”
Kieran
said.
“Kya
Chanlic!”
I was happy that I could still see and control myself, the problems
my language.
Pulling
out an AUG, I yelled “Granlig Edikio!” and
hurried on.
Stupidly,
we went the wrong way, the vampire infested way, of course, that
place was the vampire’s hideout, and it was morning.
Chapter-?
Year
6.
I
haven’t got much time left to finish this, the school computers
resist my discs, so in a year, it’ll be done.
Chapter
12
Sealed
in the darkness inside of me.
Its
Been 4 days since we set off, I still haven’t recovered yet.
A
small problem, we have NO idea where were going so, yeah.
“Kakis
no kiav.” I said.
“Meee
Voiz iz retrnung!”
“Wow!
Did he just speak?!” Logan said.
“The
minimum is 5 days... It’s only been 4!”
“Black......”
I said, hardly speaking.
“You’re
right, the black flames.” Logan muttered.
“Black
flames?!” We all chorused, well, except me, who didn’t speak,
finding it hard to.
“There
is still a dark soul, and it seems like it’s going to stay there.”
Logan said.
“Mountain...”
I said, pointing at a mountain with a broken house at the top.
So
we went to the mountain, wondering who or what was up there.
After
a while, I spoke a bit more, and then we got up to the top, the house
was abandoned, it looked like it was bombed.
I
found a book, the cover said, “How to be protected from zombies.”
The
word “Zombies” Caught my eye. Everyone else was investigating, so
I sat on the floor and read it.
It
looked quite fake, “Zombies can’t stand fire, Make a wall and
burn it, but make sure you can get over it.”
I
saw a zombie walk through fire earlier, that’s when Yahnah found
me.
“What
are you doing here?” She said, “Oh, and we only found this.”
She
pointed to an ancient painting, crumbling apart.
“I’m
Reading cause I couldn’t find anything but this book.” I replied.
“I
found a hidden door!” Ross shouted.
I
dumped the book on what looks like the remains of a table, and
started sprinting to Ross, Yahnah did the same.
We
found Ross below a desk, poking at a square block, joined onto the
table.
“Watch
this.” He said, and pushed the block up, where the block was there
were lots of stairs, and he said, “Come on then!”
Me,
Ross, Yahnah and Kieran went down, Logan said he’ll look for more
stuff.
Chapter
13
The
stair-case.
We
had been going down the stairs for a while now, and then Kieran said
he saw light, and then we saw it.
This
wasn’t day light, no way. It was a lamp.
“Oh...”
Kieran said, “It’s just a lamp.”
But
it wasn’t just a lamp, it was a... uh... um.... Triple power lamp!
After
that there were more stairs, but this time, they were going up.
After
a minute, Logan came down the opposite way, I said, “How did you
get here?”
“Different
passage,” Logan replied, “It must just be a different way
around.”
So
we went back up.
I
only just realised that I was tired, not just my legs, darn it.
Everyone
else was quite tired, so Yahnah said: “Why don’t we rest and look
more tomorrow?”
Everyone
agreed.
We
went outside and Logan said he’ll go get firewood, while we sat
here.
Chapter
14
The
story.
We
all sat by the fire, Kieran said: “Hey, can I tell you a secret?”
He said to me, everyone else was asleep.
“Do
you remember the time we met?”
“Yeah,
you saved me.”
“Well,
I was the one that threw the machete, it was an accident, don’t
tell anyone though.”
“Oh,
Alright, That means I don’t owe you a favour!”
“You
already did the favour, we travelled together.”
“Aww,
Aint that sweet?” Said Ross, in a mocking voice.
“Quiet
you.” I said, pointing my Aug at him.
“Emm...
Alright.” He said, tilting his head and closed his eyes.
“But
before,” He said, making me jump, “Have I seen you before?”
“I
was going to ask the same thing tomorrow!” I said, realising
something.
“I
think we know each other.” I said, joyfully.
In
a way, By any chance is your full name William?
“Yes.”
I said, “And your last name is Howieson, correct?”
He
nodded. The sign for me to jump about.
Chapter
15
Best
friends
“I
didn’t know it was you, Ross!” I said.
“Muh?”
Logan said, woken by this. “What... are... you...” and he fell
asleep.
“Ah,
Let’s go back to sleep, I thought I would never see you again, but
there you were, in front of me all this time.”
Ross said.
“Yeah,
Good night.” I said.
Kieran
was just surprised, and then he fell asleep.
Yahnah
was the first to wake up, since she was the longest one asleep.
She
woke us up, saying “Zombies.”
Of
course we killed them, but there was something going on back at the
place where Ross found me.
We
could see the whole world between from the mountain, I said, “Come
on! We got to go back!” No one was listening, except Ross.
Ross
said, “Hey, we don’t need them.”
I
said “Um... Ok, but I would
feel better if they came, we could run into Zanagar along the way.”
“Not
likely.” Ross said. “Zanagar hides; he wouldn’t even ambush one
of us.”
“Great.”
I said, “But what about earlier?”
“That
was just to annoy us, by killing off teammates one by one, but his
plan failed, and Kiwi lived.” Ross replied.
“Great
job Zanagar, You just made me REALLY mad!” I said.
Before
Ross can go off after me, I ran off shouting “I’m going to break
your nose!”
Chapter
16
Another
goodbye.
“You
try to kill us off one by one! This is just MAKING ME REALLY ANGRY
WITH YOU!” I said.
“He’s
madder than ever, guys.” Ross said to Logan.
“Possibly
the last dark spirit.” Logan replied.
“No,
I think he knows who Zanagar is going after.” Yahnah said.
I
was still running. I actually had no idea of where I was going. But
then I remembered. I could feel my rage burning. I felt like Zanagar
was going after... Yahnah!
I
felt like I would go super saiyan, I was that mad.
Now
back at the mountain Ross ran down shouting: “I’m going to find
Liam!
I
sat down for a rest, and then I saw Ross walking, out of breath.
“goshdarnit
Cr- -Liam!” He shouted.
“What’s
wrong with you?”
I
didn’t say a thing.
I
was looking up at Zanagar right there.
Then
Ross was silent too.
“Oh
chicken.” Ross said.
“RUUUUNN!”
So
we ran up the hill, but I left my gun behind!
Then
Zanagar picked it up.
“Hey,
why did you say Cr at the start when you yelled my name?” I said,
still running.
Ross
didn’t say for a while.
“I...
know your REAL name...” He finally said.
“And
so do I. It’s William.” I said.
“No.
I know you more than you think, Criso.” Ross said.
“Criso?
Are you on drugs?!?!” I said.
“Nope.
I’m not Ross either.” He replied.
“I’m
Chrono.” Chrono said.
“Wait;
so we don’t really know each other.” I said.
“Wrong.”
He said. “I’m your brother.”
“You’re
Mad!” I shouted.
“Oh,
stop being dramatic and damn run!” Chrono shouted.
“Says
you!” I said.
“Just
run!” He replied.
“But
what about my gun?” I said.
“We
will think about THAT later!” Chrono shouted, running faster.
“But
I need to tell you!” I said. “Zanagar is aiming for Yahnah!”
“Oh
no he don’t!” Chrono said. “He thinks he’s going to kill us
off one by one? Lies!”
“He’ll
probably go for me, I don’t have any weapon.” I said.
“No;
Zanagar isn’t like that at all.” He replied.
I
stared at him. Was he really my brother? Or was he just kidding.
He
didn’t sound like Ross and my brother Chrono is... dead.
Oh
my god. I just figured it out. Chrono didn’t die!
“No,
Criso. We are all dead. The zombies just died twice.”
“Wait;
what?” I said.
“You
remember? I died didn’t I?” He said.
I
thought about it. He said he was Ross, but why?
“I
know what you’re thinking.” Chrono said. “I had to.” “To
avoid you going psycho.”
“I
am right now!” I said. “...We have been running for hours.”
“We
are here!” Chrono shouted.
The
final chapter.
What
I’ve done.
“Ah,
Hello, Chrono.” Logan said.
“WHAT?!”
I shouted. “You knew this too?!”
“Sorry,
we needed to.” Yahnah said. “It’s something you won’t
understand.
“Fine
then. You just wait.” I said.
“For
what?” Yahnah said.
“This
world is meant to be a lie...” I said, grabbing a sword from the
floor.
“Then
you people are just... fake?” I said.
“I
couldn’t say.” Kieran said, with an evil grin.
I’m
not Kieran. I’m Zekroi. The man that killed you.
“I’m
not Yahnah, I’m Kiroso.” Kiroso said.
“I’m
not Logan either.” Whoever that guy was said. “I’m your best
friend. Zeki.”
“P-p-prove
it!” I stammered, knowing this was all a lie.
“Kirokozi!”
Zeki said.
He
was. Only me and Zeki made up that word.
But
I didn’t think so.
Pulling
out the sword, I shouted. “No! You can’t be him! This is all
faaaake!!!!”
“Snap
out of it Criso!” Kiroso shouted, nearly crying.
“No!
You guys have just been keeping it from me! You knew it all this
time!” I shouted, crying.
I
actually stabbed Chrono, but he wasn’t hurt.
“Criso,
get it in your head. This is your dream in death. You are dead.”
Chrono said.
“You
mean I worked so hard for a “Try again...” Screen.” I said.
“YOU
JUST DARN KEPT IT FROM ME!” I shouted. “You’ll pay for this,
Chrono!
I
stabbed him again, this time he fell.
I
looked at Kieran, or Zekroi. He flinched then ran.
I
just went after him, I was faster.
In
the corner of my eye, Zeki pulled out a gun.
I
knew what was coming.
I
didn’t blame him, would you shoot your friend if they were killing
your friends on a killing spree and eyeing you?
He
pulled the trigger on his gun, but I wasn’t stupid, I swung my
sword and the bullet went flying back.
He
didn’t dodge, so Kiroso dived at pulled him out of the way.
I
wouldn’t move, I just stood there, then Zeki grinned and did a
trick shot and a real one.
Now
this was actually a wave of bullets. I either dodge by swinging the
sword sideways or let him shoot me.
But
at the last second, I did a front flip over the bullets. One skinned
the top of my head, but otherwise, he missed.
The
dark spirits heard the fight. They were with me in this.
The
zombies joined in too. Even Zanagar did! I grinned of how I
outnumbered them so much. The odds of them winning were small. I was
smiling with purple flames all around me, and lots of zombies.
But
the zombies seemed to be scared.
Since
the dark spirits had a heart, I could fly, and talk too.
“It’s
your fault you lost. You could have said I was dead and you would
have defeated me. You left it too long.” I said.
But
I couldn’t move. It wasn’t the dark spirits, it was me. I fainted
in midair, the dark spirits left me and I fell to the ground. I
didn’t think I was alive, but I just couldn’t move. Zeki took my
sword from the ground and pointed it at me. Never seen someone so
happy to kill their friend.
Then
before I knew what was happening, Zeki pulled the sword back and
threw it at Kiroso.
I
nearly laughed, I knew I shouldn’t, but I nearly did. Zeki said
“You live for as long as you like in this world.”
I
said “Yeah, right.”
I
had fell for the trick, I long forgot about Zekroi, who murmured:
“For the second time...” and pulled out a gun from his belt and
tried to shoot me. Zeki grinned evilly.
“What
the hell are you doing?!” I yelled, having to dodge series of
bullets, but one hit me. It didn’t do any major damage; but my leg
was wounded from the shot.
I
ended up falling on my knees, cursing Zekroi.
He
fired his last bullet, and missed. I didn’t move so I expected it
to be some trick, but he just reloaded and fired with a better shot.
The shot got my head and killed me, for a second time.
BUT-
Zeki... He wasn't really planning this...
He
got angry with Zekroi and killed him.
Epilogue.
Lame.
I died. The thing is that Criso would actually win it, even though
they outnumbered him. He actually let the final shot hit him. He
would have dodged.
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silverthundr :
tj4bigred :
rcarter2 :

Basically, wrong forum. I think that this might belong in that Stories forum.

Wow, that is really long...

LOL, I don't even think that I even have stories left that I have written 5+ years ago.
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Basically, wrong forum. I think that this might belong in that Stories forum.

Wow, that is really long...

LOL, I don't even think that I even have stories left that I have written 5+ years ago.
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Didn't read it yet (lotta line breaks. Are those intentional?)

But is this original to Vizzed? Meaning have you ever posted this to any other website or submitted it anywhere else? If not, great! But if so, we'll ignore words for the post, but you won't be in trouble or anything.
Didn't read it yet (lotta line breaks. Are those intentional?)

But is this original to Vizzed? Meaning have you ever posted this to any other website or submitted it anywhere else? If not, great! But if so, we'll ignore words for the post, but you won't be in trouble or anything.
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tj4bigred: I started this in school. Shouldn't have anything rude.

PS - Line breaks arent intended, copy and paste does it itself. 

Also, I did put a few rudish things in it. People die, so I need to change the description.
tj4bigred: I started this in school. Shouldn't have anything rude.

PS - Line breaks arent intended, copy and paste does it itself. 

Also, I did put a few rudish things in it. People die, so I need to change the description.
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