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Hello and welcome! This story is really old, so It has typos and may not be finished. Also, I used my name in here, then my characters names. ROLL THE STORY, WEEEEE! (please don't call this spammy.) You might see someone elses vizzed in here somewhere Creator: Liam Original Idea from: Black ops. Chapter 1 The world between. My vision is broken, I can’t see a thing... but I know I’m falling, fast. I hit the ground, I was sat pondering how to get out for a while, when a zombie came up to me! The zombie fell down quickly, I found out the zombie died, a boy came forward, “Hello, I’m Ross,” Ross said gleefully, “let me help you up.” He was carrying an AUG, and a double wield pistol, “IT WILL BE DANGEROUS! HERE TAKE THIS!” Ross said as if it was a reference from something. Oh, the first Legend of Zelda, that was the reference. I saw something in the distance, “I just saw an explosion, what is it?” I asked Ross. Chapter 2 Friends all around. “That man...” Ross muttered to himself, I saw he was carrying and RPG-7, with his shots well aimed. He had a chunk of flesh missing out of his head. He came up to Ross and said, “Hey Ross, long time no see!” He said. “Who are you?” I asked him. “Oh, I’m Troy,” He replied politely, “Who are you?” “I’m... Liam.” I said quietly. A hoard of zombies came up to us, “No time to introduce ourselves!” yelled Troy, “Get a move on!” Chapter 3 Friend get, friend lost. Troy had disappeared for a while, me and Ross were curious what he was up to, but he came back with better ranged RPG. “I killed 65 zombies, I’ve been keeping count,” I said to Troy. “Ross!” Me and troy yelled. We noticed Ross was trapped by the zombies. I killed 27 more, but it wasn’t enough. I heard the zombies laugh; It was way too late to progress with Ross, I wish I’ll see him soon, but he’s dead now, no chance. Chapter 4, the mindless zombie, Zanagar. “Troy! I’ve been trying to keep up with you... The zombie master Zanagar has awoken!” Said someone from behind. “Logan!” Troy cried out! “Who? What? When? Where? Why?” I blurted out in confusion. “Ah yes, Let me introduce myself...” Logan said. “I am Logan, Prince of the world between, until, the zombies came, leaded by a mindless zombie” “Zanagar” Troy Interrupted. “Yes,” Continued Logan, “Zanagar lead the zombie clan to the world between to look for human beings to feed on. Zanagar was eating the poor people and animals, Zanagar, the evil mindless zombie master.”Said Logan sadly. “Well then, are we going to hunt him down or not?” I said rudely. “Yes,” replied Logan, “Let’s go!” Chapter 5 3 is a crowd, but 4? “Another zombie is coming!” Troy shouted through the misty land, “And it doesn’t look very weak!” “Oh no!” I shouted, “He’s coming for me!” I wasn’t kidding, he really was! I shot him 25 times, I was out of ammo, and I had no time to reload! The strange zombie just laughed and walked off, “Damn! Damn damn!” Yelled Troy, A machete blasted through the air and knocked me down, “Liam!” Cried out Logan. I couldn’t see, it was all a blur, then I heard a voice, a sooth voice, they were reviving me through the power of their guns. I was up again! Logan and Troy seemed confused, I looked behind me, and there was someone there. “Hey there, I’m Kieran, call me Kiwi” Kieran said cheerfully, “What are you here for?” Logan asked, “Fighting off zombies, you?” Kieran replied, “Same,” I said, “Also were hunting for Zanagar. “Idiot, no-one, No- One should know about Zanagar!” Shouted Logan. “I haven’t said anything for a while.” Said Troy sadly. “No worries, I already knew about him, stupid mindless vampire / zombie leader...” said Kieran. “WUT!” Me, Logan and Troy shouted. “Vampire leader?” I said. “Yes, and I’m going to kill them!” Kieran said, pulling out a thunder gun out of his jacket. “Here, a double pistol won’t be enough to destroy the clan. Take this AUG, I found it while I was killing zombies, one of them had ate a gun.” Said Kieran. (Geez, from now on he’s Kiwi!) I shuddered, I knew where THAT had come from, and I don’t even want to KNOW what they did to his belt... Now this is really getting to the next level! Chapter 6 3 – 2 = 1? This is so boring; we have been walking up masses of mountains searching for Zanagar... is it tomorrow yet? I forget... Troy’s been arguing with everyone... it’s so weird... until one day Troy just couldn’t stand being on this side, he went to kiwi, told him there was no way anyone can survive, he thought it was a joke about the walking and all, but, troy got out his RPG-7 and there was an explosion, of course I was dropping behind, Logan following me, it didn’t hit me, but kiwi was with Troy, and I think Troy had something to do with it... I ran up there after the explosion had faded, Troy, wasn’t Troy anymore... he was a zombie! “No way!” I shouted, grabbing my AUG, aiming. Logan just sighed, “I should have known since his behaviour.” Troy laughed; I had no idea why though... “You thought I was human?!?!” Troy said. “What did you expect from this chunk of flesh missing out of my head?!?!” I thought for a minute, it was all making sense... was Troy the one that actually commanded those zombies to kill Ross? “This Zanagar you’re looking for...” Troy said. “Is... Me!” Troy ran and ran, until I couldn’t see him anymore. Then the penny dropped, “I get it now!” I yelled. “Troy- - I mean Zanagar, is trying to get our group, to get us to give up! But it’s no use, our friends come ‘n go. As I finished speaking a familiar voice came from behind me. “You thought the zombies could defeat me?” The voice said, “Ross?” I said, thinking of the voice. “Yes,” Ross said, “I’m back, and I’m not a zombie! “Score!” I yelled without thinking. Ross, he had a chunk of flesh missing out of him, it was a close one, and I was going to give him his AUG, when he got a China lake from his belt. “Might not be much to the zombies, but it’ll do for a while, don’t bother about the AUG, also, do you want to hear what happened?” “Sure,” I said. Chapter 7 Ross’ story “Well,” Ross said, “I actually saw the zombies coming; I thought of a plan, very quick, it was quite good I’d say, well, here goes, I got thrashed by the zombies, but one stood out, that green one, did you see?” “Yes,” I said. “Well, that zombie was quite kind. It went down into the horde, and grabbed me, and warped, unfortunately, I hadn’t been holding my AUG, I could see the zombies running away, then I saw myself on a gray mountain, then the zombie jumped off, “Wut...” I muttered. “I’ll be right back, going to get myself a better gun.” Ross said. Then we set off, again. We decided to look for more people to destroy the zombie clan, oh and vampires too. Chapter 8 Friends ‘n guns. “Arghh,” Said a voice, “Stupid vampire, wont diiiiiiee!” “Huh?” I said, the others turned around to follow my sight, it looked like someone, that I don’t know, oh, a girl... she’s gotta ray gun. The girl was running away from the zombies and a few vampires, and ran into Ross, since he had a bit of flesh missing, she mistook him for a zombie, and nearly shot him, until Ross said hi, then she knew he wasn’t a zombie, “Oh, hi...” She said, “My names Yahnah, sorry for mistaking you for a zombie!” Then Ross got the idea that she was quite strong, and asked her if she’d become part of our clan. “Sure,” Yahnah replied, just don’t be afraid of Zanagar. Logan said, “How do you know about Zanagar!” “It WAS a tale, but someone found out it was real last year and told everyone, then the zombies attacked, and then came the vampires.” Yahnah said. “Makes sense...” I said. “Now let’s get going!” Chapter 9 The mountains of murder. “Durr...” I said, “We are back to the place where Kieran died.” “Death is a strong word,” Someone said. “I’m just hurt!” “Kieran!” Me and Logan shouted, while Yahnah and Ross just said: “Kieran?” “I’m okay, don’t be too surprised, I thought something may happen, then I jumped off the mountain and used my rope to grip on, the rope slowed me down a bit, but my hands were burning badly, so I let go, and I survived.” Chapter 10 Never ending, never lose. “Right then, no one’s heard my story, or Logan’s, I suppose we have time.” I said. “Mine first” Logan said. “Okay,” I said. “Well, here goes,” said Logan, “I am a ruler of the world between, only one of them, yeah, there are 3 princes and only one king. By the way, the king is 204 years old, and he’s my dad. To become the king, the 3 princes have to do tests, like capture giant boars, but the test are only held when the king is dead, or dying. Well, you get it. Zanagar is trying to kill the king, so I’m trying to stop him.” “Okay, I understand now, now it’s my turn.” I said. “I had gone out for one of my night strolls, when I found a big hole, the next day me and my sister had gone down the park, then I got bored, so I took the shortcut home, and I forgot about the hole, and I slipped up and fell, but I didn’t stop falling, I couldn’t see anything at all.” “Anyone want to hear how I got here?” Ross said. “Hear!” We all said. “Okay then,” Ross said. “One Saturday, I was so happy that there was no school, so I started running around streets, then I saw a hole, I was curious what was down there. The next day I had said about the hole to my brother, who is actually my best friend, not my real bro. He wanted to come down the hole with me; I just said it looked quite deep. So yes, on Sunday, we went to the hole, he said go after him if he didn’t come up for a minute, so he was screaming, so I jumped down, I could see him falling, I didn’t dare tell him, but he landed fine, but he got eaten by a zombie, every day I kill thousands of zombies to get revenge. “Yep.” I said. “Does anybody know how to get out? (Awkward silence) “Uhh...” Logan said, “I don’t actually know.” “I don’t want to say my story,” said Yahnah. “Neither do I.” Kieran said. Once again, awkward silence... Chapter 11 Strange confusion, death of the vampire clan. “Hmm,” Ross said, “Is this a code?” “Probably,” Kieran muttered, “We don’t have the key though,” I was silent, so Ross asked, “You dead? You haven’t spoken for about half an hour.” Of course I was still silent; I couldn’t speak, till I found myself saying, “Kiá hotlgk bgÚ...” “What?” Ross and Kieran shouted, “What the Bob Marley are you saying?!” “Kímrí TÍJ Núk?” I said, trying to figure out what I was saying. First thing I wasn’t controlling my mouth, now I wasn’t controlling my entire body, before I could struggle, I raised into the air, now I couldn’t even see, it was no way near confusion, a monster wasn’t taking over my body, I could see again, and I could read the code, it said, “Whoever gets thee pass code wrong, will be abolished by dark souls.” “Mékor Jí...” I said, “Kamísho Korió tamí, Trín kafá tamí lokót, Tío Krín, sami fol. Then I had black flame surrounded me, I was hovering over the code, then I landed, now I had complete restoration for body movements, but still being possessed by dark spirits, my mouth was still messed up, “Rikinas Koróu!” I yelled with delight, “Tivinch karco.” “Hmm, taken over by monsters, I expect,” Kieran said, “Must be this area, let’s get out of here, there should be another way round.” “Kiká mificho!!!” I shouted, I think I was trying to say that it wasn’t, “Krekino shiká chedsli tufu, kami ki nó,” Yahnah, mystified by this darkness, just said, “Well, I think it’s the code, you got it wrong earlier Ross, it might be something to do with the code.” “Hmm, come to think of it, that does sound right, damn...” Ross said. “Hílogan crekré tem.” I said. (Too many awkward silences.) “Damnit, now your being possessed by dark spirits.” Kieran said. “I... I... I thought it was a myth... the 3 dark spirits, luckily, you’ve only been possessed by two, the third can even attack your brain!” Logan said, “Plus, this was why I was silent for so long.” “Íuokunty?” I said, “HYCROTAMI!!” “Do you know when this will wear off?” Ross whispered to Logan. “About a week, if he’s lucky the minimums about 5 days.” Then I was like // (OnO) / “KYUKU FUMIMTI KE!” “Well, we have to still destroy Zanagar, even if Liam is like that.” Kieran said. “Kya Chanlic!” I was happy that I could still see and control myself, the problems my language. Pulling out an AUG, I yelled “Granlig Edikio!” and hurried on. Stupidly, we went the wrong way, the vampire infested way, of course, that place was the vampire’s hideout, and it was morning. Chapter-? Year 6. I haven’t got much time left to finish this, the school computers resist my discs, so in a year, it’ll be done. Chapter 12 Sealed in the darkness inside of me. Its Been 4 days since we set off, I still haven’t recovered yet. A small problem, we have NO idea where were going so, yeah. “Kakis no kiav.” I said. “Meee Voiz iz retrnung!” “Wow! Did he just speak?!” Logan said. “The minimum is 5 days... It’s only been 4!” “Black......” I said, hardly speaking. “You’re right, the black flames.” Logan muttered. “Black flames?!” We all chorused, well, except me, who didn’t speak, finding it hard to. “There is still a dark soul, and it seems like it’s going to stay there.” Logan said. “Mountain...” I said, pointing at a mountain with a broken house at the top. So we went to the mountain, wondering who or what was up there. After a while, I spoke a bit more, and then we got up to the top, the house was abandoned, it looked like it was bombed. I found a book, the cover said, “How to be protected from zombies.” The word “Zombies” Caught my eye. Everyone else was investigating, so I sat on the floor and read it. It looked quite fake, “Zombies can’t stand fire, Make a wall and burn it, but make sure you can get over it.” I saw a zombie walk through fire earlier, that’s when Yahnah found me. “What are you doing here?” She said, “Oh, and we only found this.” She pointed to an ancient painting, crumbling apart. “I’m Reading cause I couldn’t find anything but this book.” I replied. “I found a hidden door!” Ross shouted. I dumped the book on what looks like the remains of a table, and started sprinting to Ross, Yahnah did the same. We found Ross below a desk, poking at a square block, joined onto the table. “Watch this.” He said, and pushed the block up, where the block was there were lots of stairs, and he said, “Come on then!” Me, Ross, Yahnah and Kieran went down, Logan said he’ll look for more stuff. Chapter 13 The stair-case. We had been going down the stairs for a while now, and then Kieran said he saw light, and then we saw it. This wasn’t day light, no way. It was a lamp. “Oh...” Kieran said, “It’s just a lamp.” But it wasn’t just a lamp, it was a... uh... um.... Triple power lamp! After that there were more stairs, but this time, they were going up. After a minute, Logan came down the opposite way, I said, “How did you get here?” “Different passage,” Logan replied, “It must just be a different way around.” So we went back up. I only just realised that I was tired, not just my legs, darn it. Everyone else was quite tired, so Yahnah said: “Why don’t we rest and look more tomorrow?” Everyone agreed. We went outside and Logan said he’ll go get firewood, while we sat here. Chapter 14 The story. We all sat by the fire, Kieran said: “Hey, can I tell you a secret?” He said to me, everyone else was asleep. “Do you remember the time we met?” “Yeah, you saved me.” “Well, I was the one that threw the machete, it was an accident, don’t tell anyone though.” “Oh, Alright, That means I don’t owe you a favour!” “You already did the favour, we travelled together.” “Aww, Aint that sweet?” Said Ross, in a mocking voice. “Quiet you.” I said, pointing my Aug at him. “Emm... Alright.” He said, tilting his head and closed his eyes. “But before,” He said, making me jump, “Have I seen you before?” “I was going to ask the same thing tomorrow!” I said, realising something. “I think we know each other.” I said, joyfully. In a way, By any chance is your full name William? “Yes.” I said, “And your last name is Howieson, correct?” He nodded. The sign for me to jump about. Chapter 15 Best friends “I didn’t know it was you, Ross!” I said. “Muh?” Logan said, woken by this. “What... are... you...” and he fell asleep. “Ah, Let’s go back to sleep, I thought I would never see you again, but there you were, in front of me all this time.” Ross said. “Yeah, Good night.” I said. Kieran was just surprised, and then he fell asleep. Yahnah was the first to wake up, since she was the longest one asleep. She woke us up, saying “Zombies.” Of course we killed them, but there was something going on back at the place where Ross found me. We could see the whole world between from the mountain, I said, “Come on! We got to go back!” No one was listening, except Ross. Ross said, “Hey, we don’t need them.” I said “Um... Ok, but I would feel better if they came, we could run into Zanagar along the way.” “Not likely.” Ross said. “Zanagar hides; he wouldn’t even ambush one of us.” “Great.” I said, “But what about earlier?” “That was just to annoy us, by killing off teammates one by one, but his plan failed, and Kiwi lived.” Ross replied. “Great job Zanagar, You just made me REALLY mad!” I said. Before Ross can go off after me, I ran off shouting “I’m going to break your nose!” Chapter 16 Another goodbye. “You try to kill us off one by one! This is just MAKING ME REALLY ANGRY WITH YOU!” I said. “He’s madder than ever, guys.” Ross said to Logan. “Possibly the last dark spirit.” Logan replied. “No, I think he knows who Zanagar is going after.” Yahnah said. I was still running. I actually had no idea of where I was going. But then I remembered. I could feel my rage burning. I felt like Zanagar was going after... Yahnah! I felt like I would go super saiyan, I was that mad. Now back at the mountain Ross ran down shouting: “I’m going to find Liam! I sat down for a rest, and then I saw Ross walking, out of breath. “goshdarnit Cr- -Liam!” He shouted. “What’s wrong with you?” I didn’t say a thing. I was looking up at Zanagar right there. Then Ross was silent too. “Oh chicken.” Ross said. “RUUUUNN!” So we ran up the hill, but I left my gun behind! Then Zanagar picked it up. “Hey, why did you say Cr at the start when you yelled my name?” I said, still running. Ross didn’t say for a while. “I... know your REAL name...” He finally said. “And so do I. It’s William.” I said. “No. I know you more than you think, Criso.” Ross said. “Criso? Are you on drugs?!?!” I said. “Nope. I’m not Ross either.” He replied. “I’m Chrono.” Chrono said. “Wait; so we don’t really know each other.” I said. “Wrong.” He said. “I’m your brother.” “You’re Mad!” I shouted. “Oh, stop being dramatic and damn run!” Chrono shouted. “Says you!” I said. “Just run!” He replied. “But what about my gun?” I said. “We will think about THAT later!” Chrono shouted, running faster. “But I need to tell you!” I said. “Zanagar is aiming for Yahnah!” “Oh no he don’t!” Chrono said. “He thinks he’s going to kill us off one by one? Lies!” “He’ll probably go for me, I don’t have any weapon.” I said. “No; Zanagar isn’t like that at all.” He replied. I stared at him. Was he really my brother? Or was he just kidding. He didn’t sound like Ross and my brother Chrono is... dead. Oh my god. I just figured it out. Chrono didn’t die! “No, Criso. We are all dead. The zombies just died twice.” “Wait; what?” I said. “You remember? I died didn’t I?” He said. I thought about it. He said he was Ross, but why? “I know what you’re thinking.” Chrono said. “I had to.” “To avoid you going psycho.” “I am right now!” I said. “...We have been running for hours.” “We are here!” Chrono shouted. The final chapter. What I’ve done. “Ah, Hello, Chrono.” Logan said. “WHAT?!” I shouted. “You knew this too?!” “Sorry, we needed to.” Yahnah said. “It’s something you won’t understand. “Fine then. You just wait.” I said. “For what?” Yahnah said. “This world is meant to be a lie...” I said, grabbing a sword from the floor. “Then you people are just... fake?” I said. “I couldn’t say.” Kieran said, with an evil grin. I’m not Kieran. I’m Zekroi. The man that killed you. “I’m not Yahnah, I’m Kiroso.” Kiroso said. “I’m not Logan either.” Whoever that guy was said. “I’m your best friend. Zeki.” “P-p-prove it!” I stammered, knowing this was all a lie. “Kirokozi!” Zeki said. He was. Only me and Zeki made up that word. But I didn’t think so. Pulling out the sword, I shouted. “No! You can’t be him! This is all faaaake!!!!” “Snap out of it Criso!” Kiroso shouted, nearly crying. “No! You guys have just been keeping it from me! You knew it all this time!” I shouted, crying. I actually stabbed Chrono, but he wasn’t hurt. “Criso, get it in your head. This is your dream in death. You are dead.” Chrono said. “You mean I worked so hard for a “Try again...” Screen.” I said. “YOU JUST DARN KEPT IT FROM ME!” I shouted. “You’ll pay for this, Chrono! I stabbed him again, this time he fell. I looked at Kieran, or Zekroi. He flinched then ran. I just went after him, I was faster. In the corner of my eye, Zeki pulled out a gun. I knew what was coming. I didn’t blame him, would you shoot your friend if they were killing your friends on a killing spree and eyeing you? He pulled the trigger on his gun, but I wasn’t stupid, I swung my sword and the bullet went flying back. He didn’t dodge, so Kiroso dived at pulled him out of the way. I wouldn’t move, I just stood there, then Zeki grinned and did a trick shot and a real one. Now this was actually a wave of bullets. I either dodge by swinging the sword sideways or let him shoot me. But at the last second, I did a front flip over the bullets. One skinned the top of my head, but otherwise, he missed. The dark spirits heard the fight. They were with me in this. The zombies joined in too. Even Zanagar did! I grinned of how I outnumbered them so much. The odds of them winning were small. I was smiling with purple flames all around me, and lots of zombies. But the zombies seemed to be scared. Since the dark spirits had a heart, I could fly, and talk too. “It’s your fault you lost. You could have said I was dead and you would have defeated me. You left it too long.” I said. But I couldn’t move. It wasn’t the dark spirits, it was me. I fainted in midair, the dark spirits left me and I fell to the ground. I didn’t think I was alive, but I just couldn’t move. Zeki took my sword from the ground and pointed it at me. Never seen someone so happy to kill their friend. Then before I knew what was happening, Zeki pulled the sword back and threw it at Kiroso. I nearly laughed, I knew I shouldn’t, but I nearly did. Zeki said “You live for as long as you like in this world.” I said “Yeah, right.” I had fell for the trick, I long forgot about Zekroi, who murmured: “For the second time...” and pulled out a gun from his belt and tried to shoot me. Zeki grinned evilly. “What the hell are you doing?!” I yelled, having to dodge series of bullets, but one hit me. It didn’t do any major damage; but my leg was wounded from the shot. I ended up falling on my knees, cursing Zekroi. He fired his last bullet, and missed. I didn’t move so I expected it to be some trick, but he just reloaded and fired with a better shot. The shot got my head and killed me, for a second time. BUT- Zeki... He wasn't really planning this... He got angry with Zekroi and killed him. Epilogue. Lame. I died. The thing is that Criso would actually win it, even though they outnumbered him. He actually let the final shot hit him. He would have dodged. This story is really old, so It has typos and may not be finished. Also, I used my name in here, then my characters names. ROLL THE STORY, WEEEEE! (please don't call this spammy.) You might see someone elses vizzed in here somewhere Creator: Liam Original Idea from: Black ops. Chapter 1 The world between. My vision is broken, I can’t see a thing... but I know I’m falling, fast. I hit the ground, I was sat pondering how to get out for a while, when a zombie came up to me! The zombie fell down quickly, I found out the zombie died, a boy came forward, “Hello, I’m Ross,” Ross said gleefully, “let me help you up.” He was carrying an AUG, and a double wield pistol, “IT WILL BE DANGEROUS! HERE TAKE THIS!” Ross said as if it was a reference from something. Oh, the first Legend of Zelda, that was the reference. I saw something in the distance, “I just saw an explosion, what is it?” I asked Ross. Chapter 2 Friends all around. “That man...” Ross muttered to himself, I saw he was carrying and RPG-7, with his shots well aimed. He had a chunk of flesh missing out of his head. He came up to Ross and said, “Hey Ross, long time no see!” He said. “Who are you?” I asked him. “Oh, I’m Troy,” He replied politely, “Who are you?” “I’m... Liam.” I said quietly. A hoard of zombies came up to us, “No time to introduce ourselves!” yelled Troy, “Get a move on!” Chapter 3 Friend get, friend lost. Troy had disappeared for a while, me and Ross were curious what he was up to, but he came back with better ranged RPG. “I killed 65 zombies, I’ve been keeping count,” I said to Troy. “Ross!” Me and troy yelled. We noticed Ross was trapped by the zombies. I killed 27 more, but it wasn’t enough. I heard the zombies laugh; It was way too late to progress with Ross, I wish I’ll see him soon, but he’s dead now, no chance. Chapter 4, the mindless zombie, Zanagar. “Troy! I’ve been trying to keep up with you... The zombie master Zanagar has awoken!” Said someone from behind. “Logan!” Troy cried out! “Who? What? When? Where? Why?” I blurted out in confusion. “Ah yes, Let me introduce myself...” Logan said. “I am Logan, Prince of the world between, until, the zombies came, leaded by a mindless zombie” “Zanagar” Troy Interrupted. “Yes,” Continued Logan, “Zanagar lead the zombie clan to the world between to look for human beings to feed on. Zanagar was eating the poor people and animals, Zanagar, the evil mindless zombie master.”Said Logan sadly. “Well then, are we going to hunt him down or not?” I said rudely. “Yes,” replied Logan, “Let’s go!” Chapter 5 3 is a crowd, but 4? “Another zombie is coming!” Troy shouted through the misty land, “And it doesn’t look very weak!” “Oh no!” I shouted, “He’s coming for me!” I wasn’t kidding, he really was! I shot him 25 times, I was out of ammo, and I had no time to reload! The strange zombie just laughed and walked off, “Damn! Damn damn!” Yelled Troy, A machete blasted through the air and knocked me down, “Liam!” Cried out Logan. I couldn’t see, it was all a blur, then I heard a voice, a sooth voice, they were reviving me through the power of their guns. I was up again! Logan and Troy seemed confused, I looked behind me, and there was someone there. “Hey there, I’m Kieran, call me Kiwi” Kieran said cheerfully, “What are you here for?” Logan asked, “Fighting off zombies, you?” Kieran replied, “Same,” I said, “Also were hunting for Zanagar. “Idiot, no-one, No- One should know about Zanagar!” Shouted Logan. “I haven’t said anything for a while.” Said Troy sadly. “No worries, I already knew about him, stupid mindless vampire / zombie leader...” said Kieran. “WUT!” Me, Logan and Troy shouted. “Vampire leader?” I said. “Yes, and I’m going to kill them!” Kieran said, pulling out a thunder gun out of his jacket. “Here, a double pistol won’t be enough to destroy the clan. Take this AUG, I found it while I was killing zombies, one of them had ate a gun.” Said Kieran. (Geez, from now on he’s Kiwi!) I shuddered, I knew where THAT had come from, and I don’t even want to KNOW what they did to his belt... Now this is really getting to the next level! Chapter 6 3 – 2 = 1? This is so boring; we have been walking up masses of mountains searching for Zanagar... is it tomorrow yet? I forget... Troy’s been arguing with everyone... it’s so weird... until one day Troy just couldn’t stand being on this side, he went to kiwi, told him there was no way anyone can survive, he thought it was a joke about the walking and all, but, troy got out his RPG-7 and there was an explosion, of course I was dropping behind, Logan following me, it didn’t hit me, but kiwi was with Troy, and I think Troy had something to do with it... I ran up there after the explosion had faded, Troy, wasn’t Troy anymore... he was a zombie! “No way!” I shouted, grabbing my AUG, aiming. Logan just sighed, “I should have known since his behaviour.” Troy laughed; I had no idea why though... “You thought I was human?!?!” Troy said. “What did you expect from this chunk of flesh missing out of my head?!?!” I thought for a minute, it was all making sense... was Troy the one that actually commanded those zombies to kill Ross? “This Zanagar you’re looking for...” Troy said. “Is... Me!” Troy ran and ran, until I couldn’t see him anymore. Then the penny dropped, “I get it now!” I yelled. “Troy- - I mean Zanagar, is trying to get our group, to get us to give up! But it’s no use, our friends come ‘n go. As I finished speaking a familiar voice came from behind me. “You thought the zombies could defeat me?” The voice said, “Ross?” I said, thinking of the voice. “Yes,” Ross said, “I’m back, and I’m not a zombie! “Score!” I yelled without thinking. Ross, he had a chunk of flesh missing out of him, it was a close one, and I was going to give him his AUG, when he got a China lake from his belt. “Might not be much to the zombies, but it’ll do for a while, don’t bother about the AUG, also, do you want to hear what happened?” “Sure,” I said. Chapter 7 Ross’ story “Well,” Ross said, “I actually saw the zombies coming; I thought of a plan, very quick, it was quite good I’d say, well, here goes, I got thrashed by the zombies, but one stood out, that green one, did you see?” “Yes,” I said. “Well, that zombie was quite kind. It went down into the horde, and grabbed me, and warped, unfortunately, I hadn’t been holding my AUG, I could see the zombies running away, then I saw myself on a gray mountain, then the zombie jumped off, “Wut...” I muttered. “I’ll be right back, going to get myself a better gun.” Ross said. Then we set off, again. We decided to look for more people to destroy the zombie clan, oh and vampires too. Chapter 8 Friends ‘n guns. “Arghh,” Said a voice, “Stupid vampire, wont diiiiiiee!” “Huh?” I said, the others turned around to follow my sight, it looked like someone, that I don’t know, oh, a girl... she’s gotta ray gun. The girl was running away from the zombies and a few vampires, and ran into Ross, since he had a bit of flesh missing, she mistook him for a zombie, and nearly shot him, until Ross said hi, then she knew he wasn’t a zombie, “Oh, hi...” She said, “My names Yahnah, sorry for mistaking you for a zombie!” Then Ross got the idea that she was quite strong, and asked her if she’d become part of our clan. “Sure,” Yahnah replied, just don’t be afraid of Zanagar. Logan said, “How do you know about Zanagar!” “It WAS a tale, but someone found out it was real last year and told everyone, then the zombies attacked, and then came the vampires.” Yahnah said. “Makes sense...” I said. “Now let’s get going!” Chapter 9 The mountains of murder. “Durr...” I said, “We are back to the place where Kieran died.” “Death is a strong word,” Someone said. “I’m just hurt!” “Kieran!” Me and Logan shouted, while Yahnah and Ross just said: “Kieran?” “I’m okay, don’t be too surprised, I thought something may happen, then I jumped off the mountain and used my rope to grip on, the rope slowed me down a bit, but my hands were burning badly, so I let go, and I survived.” Chapter 10 Never ending, never lose. “Right then, no one’s heard my story, or Logan’s, I suppose we have time.” I said. “Mine first” Logan said. “Okay,” I said. “Well, here goes,” said Logan, “I am a ruler of the world between, only one of them, yeah, there are 3 princes and only one king. By the way, the king is 204 years old, and he’s my dad. To become the king, the 3 princes have to do tests, like capture giant boars, but the test are only held when the king is dead, or dying. Well, you get it. Zanagar is trying to kill the king, so I’m trying to stop him.” “Okay, I understand now, now it’s my turn.” I said. “I had gone out for one of my night strolls, when I found a big hole, the next day me and my sister had gone down the park, then I got bored, so I took the shortcut home, and I forgot about the hole, and I slipped up and fell, but I didn’t stop falling, I couldn’t see anything at all.” “Anyone want to hear how I got here?” Ross said. “Hear!” We all said. “Okay then,” Ross said. “One Saturday, I was so happy that there was no school, so I started running around streets, then I saw a hole, I was curious what was down there. The next day I had said about the hole to my brother, who is actually my best friend, not my real bro. He wanted to come down the hole with me; I just said it looked quite deep. So yes, on Sunday, we went to the hole, he said go after him if he didn’t come up for a minute, so he was screaming, so I jumped down, I could see him falling, I didn’t dare tell him, but he landed fine, but he got eaten by a zombie, every day I kill thousands of zombies to get revenge. “Yep.” I said. “Does anybody know how to get out? (Awkward silence) “Uhh...” Logan said, “I don’t actually know.” “I don’t want to say my story,” said Yahnah. “Neither do I.” Kieran said. Once again, awkward silence... Chapter 11 Strange confusion, death of the vampire clan. “Hmm,” Ross said, “Is this a code?” “Probably,” Kieran muttered, “We don’t have the key though,” I was silent, so Ross asked, “You dead? You haven’t spoken for about half an hour.” Of course I was still silent; I couldn’t speak, till I found myself saying, “Kiá hotlgk bgÚ...” “What?” Ross and Kieran shouted, “What the Bob Marley are you saying?!” “Kímrí TÍJ Núk?” I said, trying to figure out what I was saying. First thing I wasn’t controlling my mouth, now I wasn’t controlling my entire body, before I could struggle, I raised into the air, now I couldn’t even see, it was no way near confusion, a monster wasn’t taking over my body, I could see again, and I could read the code, it said, “Whoever gets thee pass code wrong, will be abolished by dark souls.” “Mékor Jí...” I said, “Kamísho Korió tamí, Trín kafá tamí lokót, Tío Krín, sami fol. Then I had black flame surrounded me, I was hovering over the code, then I landed, now I had complete restoration for body movements, but still being possessed by dark spirits, my mouth was still messed up, “Rikinas Koróu!” I yelled with delight, “Tivinch karco.” “Hmm, taken over by monsters, I expect,” Kieran said, “Must be this area, let’s get out of here, there should be another way round.” “Kiká mificho!!!” I shouted, I think I was trying to say that it wasn’t, “Krekino shiká chedsli tufu, kami ki nó,” Yahnah, mystified by this darkness, just said, “Well, I think it’s the code, you got it wrong earlier Ross, it might be something to do with the code.” “Hmm, come to think of it, that does sound right, damn...” Ross said. “Hílogan crekré tem.” I said. (Too many awkward silences.) “Damnit, now your being possessed by dark spirits.” Kieran said. “I... I... I thought it was a myth... the 3 dark spirits, luckily, you’ve only been possessed by two, the third can even attack your brain!” Logan said, “Plus, this was why I was silent for so long.” “Íuokunty?” I said, “HYCROTAMI!!” “Do you know when this will wear off?” Ross whispered to Logan. “About a week, if he’s lucky the minimums about 5 days.” Then I was like // (OnO) / “KYUKU FUMIMTI KE!” “Well, we have to still destroy Zanagar, even if Liam is like that.” Kieran said. “Kya Chanlic!” I was happy that I could still see and control myself, the problems my language. Pulling out an AUG, I yelled “Granlig Edikio!” and hurried on. Stupidly, we went the wrong way, the vampire infested way, of course, that place was the vampire’s hideout, and it was morning. Chapter-? Year 6. I haven’t got much time left to finish this, the school computers resist my discs, so in a year, it’ll be done. Chapter 12 Sealed in the darkness inside of me. Its Been 4 days since we set off, I still haven’t recovered yet. A small problem, we have NO idea where were going so, yeah. “Kakis no kiav.” I said. “Meee Voiz iz retrnung!” “Wow! Did he just speak?!” Logan said. “The minimum is 5 days... It’s only been 4!” “Black......” I said, hardly speaking. “You’re right, the black flames.” Logan muttered. “Black flames?!” We all chorused, well, except me, who didn’t speak, finding it hard to. “There is still a dark soul, and it seems like it’s going to stay there.” Logan said. “Mountain...” I said, pointing at a mountain with a broken house at the top. So we went to the mountain, wondering who or what was up there. After a while, I spoke a bit more, and then we got up to the top, the house was abandoned, it looked like it was bombed. I found a book, the cover said, “How to be protected from zombies.” The word “Zombies” Caught my eye. Everyone else was investigating, so I sat on the floor and read it. It looked quite fake, “Zombies can’t stand fire, Make a wall and burn it, but make sure you can get over it.” I saw a zombie walk through fire earlier, that’s when Yahnah found me. “What are you doing here?” She said, “Oh, and we only found this.” She pointed to an ancient painting, crumbling apart. “I’m Reading cause I couldn’t find anything but this book.” I replied. “I found a hidden door!” Ross shouted. I dumped the book on what looks like the remains of a table, and started sprinting to Ross, Yahnah did the same. We found Ross below a desk, poking at a square block, joined onto the table. “Watch this.” He said, and pushed the block up, where the block was there were lots of stairs, and he said, “Come on then!” Me, Ross, Yahnah and Kieran went down, Logan said he’ll look for more stuff. Chapter 13 The stair-case. We had been going down the stairs for a while now, and then Kieran said he saw light, and then we saw it. This wasn’t day light, no way. It was a lamp. “Oh...” Kieran said, “It’s just a lamp.” But it wasn’t just a lamp, it was a... uh... um.... Triple power lamp! After that there were more stairs, but this time, they were going up. After a minute, Logan came down the opposite way, I said, “How did you get here?” “Different passage,” Logan replied, “It must just be a different way around.” So we went back up. I only just realised that I was tired, not just my legs, darn it. Everyone else was quite tired, so Yahnah said: “Why don’t we rest and look more tomorrow?” Everyone agreed. We went outside and Logan said he’ll go get firewood, while we sat here. Chapter 14 The story. We all sat by the fire, Kieran said: “Hey, can I tell you a secret?” He said to me, everyone else was asleep. “Do you remember the time we met?” “Yeah, you saved me.” “Well, I was the one that threw the machete, it was an accident, don’t tell anyone though.” “Oh, Alright, That means I don’t owe you a favour!” “You already did the favour, we travelled together.” “Aww, Aint that sweet?” Said Ross, in a mocking voice. “Quiet you.” I said, pointing my Aug at him. “Emm... Alright.” He said, tilting his head and closed his eyes. “But before,” He said, making me jump, “Have I seen you before?” “I was going to ask the same thing tomorrow!” I said, realising something. “I think we know each other.” I said, joyfully. In a way, By any chance is your full name William? “Yes.” I said, “And your last name is Howieson, correct?” He nodded. The sign for me to jump about. Chapter 15 Best friends “I didn’t know it was you, Ross!” I said. “Muh?” Logan said, woken by this. “What... are... you...” and he fell asleep. “Ah, Let’s go back to sleep, I thought I would never see you again, but there you were, in front of me all this time.” Ross said. “Yeah, Good night.” I said. Kieran was just surprised, and then he fell asleep. Yahnah was the first to wake up, since she was the longest one asleep. She woke us up, saying “Zombies.” Of course we killed them, but there was something going on back at the place where Ross found me. We could see the whole world between from the mountain, I said, “Come on! We got to go back!” No one was listening, except Ross. Ross said, “Hey, we don’t need them.” I said “Um... Ok, but I would feel better if they came, we could run into Zanagar along the way.” “Not likely.” Ross said. “Zanagar hides; he wouldn’t even ambush one of us.” “Great.” I said, “But what about earlier?” “That was just to annoy us, by killing off teammates one by one, but his plan failed, and Kiwi lived.” Ross replied. “Great job Zanagar, You just made me REALLY mad!” I said. Before Ross can go off after me, I ran off shouting “I’m going to break your nose!” Chapter 16 Another goodbye. “You try to kill us off one by one! This is just MAKING ME REALLY ANGRY WITH YOU!” I said. “He’s madder than ever, guys.” Ross said to Logan. “Possibly the last dark spirit.” Logan replied. “No, I think he knows who Zanagar is going after.” Yahnah said. I was still running. I actually had no idea of where I was going. But then I remembered. I could feel my rage burning. I felt like Zanagar was going after... Yahnah! I felt like I would go super saiyan, I was that mad. Now back at the mountain Ross ran down shouting: “I’m going to find Liam! I sat down for a rest, and then I saw Ross walking, out of breath. “goshdarnit Cr- -Liam!” He shouted. “What’s wrong with you?” I didn’t say a thing. I was looking up at Zanagar right there. Then Ross was silent too. “Oh chicken.” Ross said. “RUUUUNN!” So we ran up the hill, but I left my gun behind! Then Zanagar picked it up. “Hey, why did you say Cr at the start when you yelled my name?” I said, still running. Ross didn’t say for a while. “I... know your REAL name...” He finally said. “And so do I. It’s William.” I said. “No. I know you more than you think, Criso.” Ross said. “Criso? Are you on drugs?!?!” I said. “Nope. I’m not Ross either.” He replied. “I’m Chrono.” Chrono said. “Wait; so we don’t really know each other.” I said. “Wrong.” He said. “I’m your brother.” “You’re Mad!” I shouted. “Oh, stop being dramatic and damn run!” Chrono shouted. “Says you!” I said. “Just run!” He replied. “But what about my gun?” I said. “We will think about THAT later!” Chrono shouted, running faster. “But I need to tell you!” I said. “Zanagar is aiming for Yahnah!” “Oh no he don’t!” Chrono said. “He thinks he’s going to kill us off one by one? Lies!” “He’ll probably go for me, I don’t have any weapon.” I said. “No; Zanagar isn’t like that at all.” He replied. I stared at him. Was he really my brother? Or was he just kidding. He didn’t sound like Ross and my brother Chrono is... dead. Oh my god. I just figured it out. Chrono didn’t die! “No, Criso. We are all dead. The zombies just died twice.” “Wait; what?” I said. “You remember? I died didn’t I?” He said. I thought about it. He said he was Ross, but why? “I know what you’re thinking.” Chrono said. “I had to.” “To avoid you going psycho.” “I am right now!” I said. “...We have been running for hours.” “We are here!” Chrono shouted. The final chapter. What I’ve done. “Ah, Hello, Chrono.” Logan said. “WHAT?!” I shouted. “You knew this too?!” “Sorry, we needed to.” Yahnah said. “It’s something you won’t understand. “Fine then. You just wait.” I said. “For what?” Yahnah said. “This world is meant to be a lie...” I said, grabbing a sword from the floor. “Then you people are just... fake?” I said. “I couldn’t say.” Kieran said, with an evil grin. I’m not Kieran. I’m Zekroi. The man that killed you. “I’m not Yahnah, I’m Kiroso.” Kiroso said. “I’m not Logan either.” Whoever that guy was said. “I’m your best friend. Zeki.” “P-p-prove it!” I stammered, knowing this was all a lie. “Kirokozi!” Zeki said. He was. Only me and Zeki made up that word. But I didn’t think so. Pulling out the sword, I shouted. “No! You can’t be him! This is all faaaake!!!!” “Snap out of it Criso!” Kiroso shouted, nearly crying. “No! You guys have just been keeping it from me! You knew it all this time!” I shouted, crying. I actually stabbed Chrono, but he wasn’t hurt. “Criso, get it in your head. This is your dream in death. You are dead.” Chrono said. “You mean I worked so hard for a “Try again...” Screen.” I said. “YOU JUST DARN KEPT IT FROM ME!” I shouted. “You’ll pay for this, Chrono! I stabbed him again, this time he fell. I looked at Kieran, or Zekroi. He flinched then ran. I just went after him, I was faster. In the corner of my eye, Zeki pulled out a gun. I knew what was coming. I didn’t blame him, would you shoot your friend if they were killing your friends on a killing spree and eyeing you? He pulled the trigger on his gun, but I wasn’t stupid, I swung my sword and the bullet went flying back. He didn’t dodge, so Kiroso dived at pulled him out of the way. I wouldn’t move, I just stood there, then Zeki grinned and did a trick shot and a real one. Now this was actually a wave of bullets. I either dodge by swinging the sword sideways or let him shoot me. But at the last second, I did a front flip over the bullets. One skinned the top of my head, but otherwise, he missed. The dark spirits heard the fight. They were with me in this. The zombies joined in too. Even Zanagar did! I grinned of how I outnumbered them so much. The odds of them winning were small. I was smiling with purple flames all around me, and lots of zombies. But the zombies seemed to be scared. Since the dark spirits had a heart, I could fly, and talk too. “It’s your fault you lost. You could have said I was dead and you would have defeated me. You left it too long.” I said. But I couldn’t move. It wasn’t the dark spirits, it was me. I fainted in midair, the dark spirits left me and I fell to the ground. I didn’t think I was alive, but I just couldn’t move. Zeki took my sword from the ground and pointed it at me. Never seen someone so happy to kill their friend. Then before I knew what was happening, Zeki pulled the sword back and threw it at Kiroso. I nearly laughed, I knew I shouldn’t, but I nearly did. Zeki said “You live for as long as you like in this world.” I said “Yeah, right.” I had fell for the trick, I long forgot about Zekroi, who murmured: “For the second time...” and pulled out a gun from his belt and tried to shoot me. Zeki grinned evilly. “What the hell are you doing?!” I yelled, having to dodge series of bullets, but one hit me. It didn’t do any major damage; but my leg was wounded from the shot. I ended up falling on my knees, cursing Zekroi. He fired his last bullet, and missed. I didn’t move so I expected it to be some trick, but he just reloaded and fired with a better shot. The shot got my head and killed me, for a second time. BUT- Zeki... He wasn't really planning this... He got angry with Zekroi and killed him. 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