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04-03-12 08:23 PM
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Title: Time to ride.

 When you see me riding by i'll be flossing feeling high.
Shorty looking fly saying she wants to ride.
She want's to dip, swerve and slide, it's gonna be a long night.
 The break of dawn,the sunrise,time to move on.
Just another day,another play,life goes on.
  Creepin around the corner, time to get mean.
Hit the switches then i lean.
Mind on my green,doing my thing,got you blinded by my bling.
 Old timey spokes shining every day.
Even haters got to say it's good to get paid.
Title: Time to ride.

 When you see me riding by i'll be flossing feeling high.
Shorty looking fly saying she wants to ride.
She want's to dip, swerve and slide, it's gonna be a long night.
 The break of dawn,the sunrise,time to move on.
Just another day,another play,life goes on.
  Creepin around the corner, time to get mean.
Hit the switches then i lean.
Mind on my green,doing my thing,got you blinded by my bling.
 Old timey spokes shining every day.
Even haters got to say it's good to get paid.
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It's a very interesting poem, I like it.
Do you write often?
It's a very interesting poem, I like it.
Do you write often?
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Actualy no i don't,I was kinda stuck at the house for a while and i wrote like six or seven songs in a couple of days.that song had another couple of verses but i think i woud have got in trouble so i kept it short.However i noticed i was good at making stories when i was little but never did any thing with it. Thanks for reply
Actualy no i don't,I was kinda stuck at the house for a while and i wrote like six or seven songs in a couple of days.that song had another couple of verses but i think i woud have got in trouble so i kept it short.However i noticed i was good at making stories when i was little but never did any thing with it. Thanks for reply
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I thought it was a pretty good poem. Definitely interesting. I give you credit for posting it online. I have never been that good at writing poetry or anything like that.
I thought it was a pretty good poem. Definitely interesting. I give you credit for posting it online. I have never been that good at writing poetry or anything like that.
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Thanks jordanv78. Yea i was wondering if i should post it. I guess i just wanted to share with any one who likes reading.
Thanks jordanv78. Yea i was wondering if i should post it. I guess i just wanted to share with any one who likes reading.
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I'm not a very good poetic writer, lol. Thought you did a nice job and I also commend you for putting it online.

Good job
I'm not a very good poetic writer, lol. Thought you did a nice job and I also commend you for putting it online.

Good job
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This is another one that has a steady flow to it.  However, out of all your poems, I'd have to say I like this one the least.  Alluring to me is how cryptic the poem seems.  It seems to hint at a few things.... JUST enough to give you a vague idea of what it's about... only to pull that understanding away in the next line.

Then again, it might just be due to the fact that I'm not perfectly in tune with all the slang kids use.  
This is another one that has a steady flow to it.  However, out of all your poems, I'd have to say I like this one the least.  Alluring to me is how cryptic the poem seems.  It seems to hint at a few things.... JUST enough to give you a vague idea of what it's about... only to pull that understanding away in the next line.

Then again, it might just be due to the fact that I'm not perfectly in tune with all the slang kids use.  
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