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Chapter 4: Lullaby
I actually wrote this from listening to 'River Flows With You', so for the optimised rhythm, find a piano cover to the song and read the poem. Enjoy!
I actually wrote this from listening to 'River Flows With You', so for the optimised rhythm, find a piano cover to the song and read the poem. Enjoy!
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Chapter 4: Lullaby
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Slowly with each finger I trace along your soft skin The warmth between the tips and your cheek suddenly melt us Our eyes slowly meet and just there, we're caught in a moment Swept away like the ocean by your eyes, you take me somewhere Somewhere where everything around me feels light, and it's just you and me With every beat of my heart, I play every note with passion With every key of the piano, I play every note with meaning With every tone of the rhythm, I play every note with grace Our troubles fade away in the ambiance of symphonies And as the ballad grows stronger with every heart beat We overcome our fears, our worries and our weaknesses Gently caressing your cheek, your hand places itself over mine Guiding it down as your grasp slightly tightens My lips tremble as I whisper into your ear - “You’re so beautiful… - With your eyes such as the colour of the vast ocean, with your lips shining so smooth - And the softness of your skin, I find it hard to resist something so beautiful like you” My heart grows stronger and my other hand places itself on your other cheek My forehead leans against yours, and our lips brush slightly I whisper against yours “Just feeling like this, I don’t know how to contain myself - Nor can I stop myself wanting to say the three magic words to reassure you - But sweet rose, how you make me feel, how I should show you when I say - I love you?” Just close your eyes and listen to your lullaby playing As my hands gently tilt your head, we press our lips together And just in that moment, I already felt as if I could fly The rhythms intertwine with the soft melody that’s playing Our hearts beat as one and each other, we lose our breath If you only knew how I felt deep down inside, sweet rose Those thorns you have still prick me, and I still bleed But only slightly, not sharp enough to hurt so much I’ve learnt to contain this mistake, this agitation I hold inside my heart But once in a while, I can’t hold it in, and I have to show you Show you how I really feel towards you, like no one in the world would I try my best to see you smile; I do my best to make you happy I do whatever I can for you, just to see you pass through a day smiling Smiling, smiling that sweet charming one that I’m able to trace Like mine, yours overpowers anyone and makes others smile But yours, it just makes me crumble to my knees It makes my heart fly; it injects adrenaline through my veins Infecting me with this want, this agitation, this… Parasite, you call love How have I longed to show you this much I’ve held it in for far too long, and I’ve been foolish too I’ve made mistakes and tried to fix them But with your hand and support, you’ve kept me going Like my guardian angel, my life support, the only one I hope not to lose And those special minutes I still hold, and they will never die If only, only, only could I match up to what you could ever want I still stand somewhere, watching you, and offer my assistance You’ll never realize it; you’ll never pick it, because I make it so discreet sometimes That only the slightest word would change the course Like I said “I would do anything for you to see you smile, to see you happy - I would do my best and give everything I could… just for you… Because, I love you” This moment, so intense, I can’t bear to let go, can you? Was I wrong to think that? Because you’re slipping away Have I done something wrong? If so, can you tell me? Is it wrong to feel like this and show you how I do? No don’t, don’t pull away Now your eyes look deeply into mine, watery and tear-like Sweet rose, you’re going to cry… A tear drop runs down your cheek, and I wipe it away with the back of my hand As I do, I remember what I’ve just done So I tense, and pull back, confused, panicked, hurt, and vulnerable Like a child, so vulnerable, tensing and jerking Moving away from you, as if I was some kind of monster Your eyes engage and you realize the problem You call me back, move to comfort I move back, I’m too scared, too weak move now Stuck and cornered on your sofa, I persevere myself Your hand touches mine, then holds it and your eyes look into mine, deeply Reading me, trying to calm me, for as I’m trembling and tensing “It’s not your fault…” I say, “But neither is it yours…” You reply Your arms wrap around me and hold me close, calming all the panic inside me With just you holding me, I suddenly break, my heart losing count of its beat Yet I still feel vulnerable between the awkwardness and the longing You finally relax the chaos inside me by just holding me That’s all I can call for, that’s all I can manage And I appreciate it very much, whereas you still don’t know enough You know how I feel though, but just not how bad… So sweet rose, I play your sweet lullaby With every beat of my heart, I play every note with passion With every key of the piano, I play every note with meaning With every tone of the rhythm, I play every note with grace With every purpose of this feeling, I play every note with love So hush, and shut your eyes, as this lullaby comes to an end You are more than welcome to hear it repeat as much as you like Lie your head down on your pillows, let the bed cradle you Rest your thoughts, and soften your heart’s pace You won’t have to worry about a thing I shall be wherever you need me, whenever you need me I’ll do whatever I can to make you smile; I’ll do whatever I can to make you happy I’ll anything just for you, because that’s how you make me feel You have my heart; it’s in the palm of your hand Hold it safe, hold it tight, but not too tight, you might hurt it And if you hurt and break it, you break me * * * With every beat of my heart, I play every note with passion With every key of the piano, I play every note with meaning With every tone of the rhythm, I play every note with grace With every touch of the key, I play every note with feeling With every breath I take, I play every note with courage With every rhythm I hear, I play every note with remembrance With every purpose of this feeling, I play every note with love With every purpose of this feeling, I play every note with love Every purpose of this feeling I play every note with love Every note with love, every purpose of this feeling Avec chaque battement de le sentiment, je joue chaque note avec amour “With every purpose of this feeling, I play every note with love” The warmth between the tips and your cheek suddenly melt us Our eyes slowly meet and just there, we're caught in a moment Swept away like the ocean by your eyes, you take me somewhere Somewhere where everything around me feels light, and it's just you and me With every beat of my heart, I play every note with passion With every key of the piano, I play every note with meaning With every tone of the rhythm, I play every note with grace Our troubles fade away in the ambiance of symphonies And as the ballad grows stronger with every heart beat We overcome our fears, our worries and our weaknesses Gently caressing your cheek, your hand places itself over mine Guiding it down as your grasp slightly tightens My lips tremble as I whisper into your ear - “You’re so beautiful… - With your eyes such as the colour of the vast ocean, with your lips shining so smooth - And the softness of your skin, I find it hard to resist something so beautiful like you” My heart grows stronger and my other hand places itself on your other cheek My forehead leans against yours, and our lips brush slightly I whisper against yours “Just feeling like this, I don’t know how to contain myself - Nor can I stop myself wanting to say the three magic words to reassure you - But sweet rose, how you make me feel, how I should show you when I say - I love you?” Just close your eyes and listen to your lullaby playing As my hands gently tilt your head, we press our lips together And just in that moment, I already felt as if I could fly The rhythms intertwine with the soft melody that’s playing Our hearts beat as one and each other, we lose our breath If you only knew how I felt deep down inside, sweet rose Those thorns you have still prick me, and I still bleed But only slightly, not sharp enough to hurt so much I’ve learnt to contain this mistake, this agitation I hold inside my heart But once in a while, I can’t hold it in, and I have to show you Show you how I really feel towards you, like no one in the world would I try my best to see you smile; I do my best to make you happy I do whatever I can for you, just to see you pass through a day smiling Smiling, smiling that sweet charming one that I’m able to trace Like mine, yours overpowers anyone and makes others smile But yours, it just makes me crumble to my knees It makes my heart fly; it injects adrenaline through my veins Infecting me with this want, this agitation, this… Parasite, you call love How have I longed to show you this much I’ve held it in for far too long, and I’ve been foolish too I’ve made mistakes and tried to fix them But with your hand and support, you’ve kept me going Like my guardian angel, my life support, the only one I hope not to lose And those special minutes I still hold, and they will never die If only, only, only could I match up to what you could ever want I still stand somewhere, watching you, and offer my assistance You’ll never realize it; you’ll never pick it, because I make it so discreet sometimes That only the slightest word would change the course Like I said “I would do anything for you to see you smile, to see you happy - I would do my best and give everything I could… just for you… Because, I love you” This moment, so intense, I can’t bear to let go, can you? Was I wrong to think that? Because you’re slipping away Have I done something wrong? If so, can you tell me? Is it wrong to feel like this and show you how I do? No don’t, don’t pull away Now your eyes look deeply into mine, watery and tear-like Sweet rose, you’re going to cry… A tear drop runs down your cheek, and I wipe it away with the back of my hand As I do, I remember what I’ve just done So I tense, and pull back, confused, panicked, hurt, and vulnerable Like a child, so vulnerable, tensing and jerking Moving away from you, as if I was some kind of monster Your eyes engage and you realize the problem You call me back, move to comfort I move back, I’m too scared, too weak move now Stuck and cornered on your sofa, I persevere myself Your hand touches mine, then holds it and your eyes look into mine, deeply Reading me, trying to calm me, for as I’m trembling and tensing “It’s not your fault…” I say, “But neither is it yours…” You reply Your arms wrap around me and hold me close, calming all the panic inside me With just you holding me, I suddenly break, my heart losing count of its beat Yet I still feel vulnerable between the awkwardness and the longing You finally relax the chaos inside me by just holding me That’s all I can call for, that’s all I can manage And I appreciate it very much, whereas you still don’t know enough You know how I feel though, but just not how bad… So sweet rose, I play your sweet lullaby With every beat of my heart, I play every note with passion With every key of the piano, I play every note with meaning With every tone of the rhythm, I play every note with grace With every purpose of this feeling, I play every note with love So hush, and shut your eyes, as this lullaby comes to an end You are more than welcome to hear it repeat as much as you like Lie your head down on your pillows, let the bed cradle you Rest your thoughts, and soften your heart’s pace You won’t have to worry about a thing I shall be wherever you need me, whenever you need me I’ll do whatever I can to make you smile; I’ll do whatever I can to make you happy I’ll anything just for you, because that’s how you make me feel You have my heart; it’s in the palm of your hand Hold it safe, hold it tight, but not too tight, you might hurt it And if you hurt and break it, you break me * * * With every beat of my heart, I play every note with passion With every key of the piano, I play every note with meaning With every tone of the rhythm, I play every note with grace With every touch of the key, I play every note with feeling With every breath I take, I play every note with courage With every rhythm I hear, I play every note with remembrance With every purpose of this feeling, I play every note with love With every purpose of this feeling, I play every note with love Every purpose of this feeling I play every note with love Every note with love, every purpose of this feeling Avec chaque battement de le sentiment, je joue chaque note avec amour “With every purpose of this feeling, I play every note with love” |
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Man, I wasn't expecting a French sentence at the end of this lullaby, to be honest it's really original. Keep up the good work and excuse my lack of comments but I will tell you what I think about those chronicles at the end Keep up the good work and excuse my lack of comments but I will tell you what I think about those chronicles at the end |
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