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Passion
Sorry I haven't posted anything, due to the SOPA and uni stuff, but here is a lovely, short, sweet poem. Hope you enjoy!
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01-22-12 06:29 AM
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Thought of by you all day, I think of you.
May a walk of reminiscence on the pier hinder.
Above the prayer of rain, unacred blue,
not paradise, goes nowhere endlessly.
How is that on a mile walk toward revolution
can split into two, while we stay trapped in confusion,
queuing for hope? It seems the feeling will never shift
from our hearts and minds; a longing call against the wind
to just have that tender prolonged passionate kiss.
Love has indulged, like a suddenly lit flame
from the deepest of desperation. Your lips,
innocent, tender, like an angel's, this chain of words.
The rain still falls over us, drenching our clothes.
Desire and passion breathes in our heart pounding woes.
Thought of by you all day, I think of you.
May a walk of reminiscence on the pier hinder.
Above the prayer of rain, unacred blue,
not paradise, goes nowhere endlessly.
How is that on a mile walk toward revolution
can split into two, while we stay trapped in confusion,
queuing for hope? It seems the feeling will never shift
from our hearts and minds; a longing call against the wind
to just have that tender prolonged passionate kiss.
Love has indulged, like a suddenly lit flame
from the deepest of desperation. Your lips,
innocent, tender, like an angel's, this chain of words.
The rain still falls over us, drenching our clothes.
Desire and passion breathes in our heart pounding woes.
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01-25-12 02:06 PM
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Glad to see you back to Vizzed Board, man. I was waiting for your next poem and, well, it was worth waiting. Another nice poem, just one question that I ever asked you before unless you mentioned that before: Where do you find your inspiration? Any writer and/or book?
Glad to see you back to Vizzed Board, man. I was waiting for your next poem and, well, it was worth waiting. Another nice poem, just one question that I ever asked you before unless you mentioned that before: Where do you find your inspiration? Any writer and/or book?
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01-27-12 02:31 AM
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Nice to hear from you, mate! Yeah, it's been a while - I'm kind of caught up with my university work and such, so I've got less time to write and post these days. I'm not sure - my memory's a bit flunked! Haha. My style inspirations is a mixture of poets that I've studied in the past few years in college, such as Browning, Keats, Armitage, Ann Duffy... even studying Shakespeare plays have influenced my style. My actual inspirations come from daily things. I usually write about something that has had a big impact on me, personally, or something I've witnessed. Of course, I keep it ambiguous sometimes in my poems, because I enjoy the readers' comments, I like seeing different interpretations. I'm very fond of your responses, because they're quite indifferent from what others would say, so I enjoy the fact that you ENJOY reading my poetry!
Nice to hear from you, mate! Yeah, it's been a while - I'm kind of caught up with my university work and such, so I've got less time to write and post these days. I'm not sure - my memory's a bit flunked! Haha. My style inspirations is a mixture of poets that I've studied in the past few years in college, such as Browning, Keats, Armitage, Ann Duffy... even studying Shakespeare plays have influenced my style. My actual inspirations come from daily things. I usually write about something that has had a big impact on me, personally, or something I've witnessed. Of course, I keep it ambiguous sometimes in my poems, because I enjoy the readers' comments, I like seeing different interpretations. I'm very fond of your responses, because they're quite indifferent from what others would say, so I enjoy the fact that you ENJOY reading my poetry!
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