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05-02-08 11:18 PM
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I have decided to create a .Hack Fanfiction.
It's going to be semi-related to the storyline of G.U, however, the main character is NOT a known character of Dot Hack.

Currently what I have:


-Prologue (Don't know what to call it...)-

In 2007, CyberConnect Corp. started
The Dazzling Twilight Dream
known as 「The World」

The game instantaneously became popular,
and more than 20 million copies were sold worldwide.

However, Dreams don't last forever

After the events of the "Morganna Incident,"
the game gradually deteriorated;
crashing at random points in the day,
many of the areas having errors,
and many of the players eventually lost interest in 「The World.」

The Twilight Dream soon came to an end.

*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*

In 2016, CyberConnect Corp. released
「The World R:2,」and suddenly,
The Twilight Dream had returned.

I'll post the first chapter in a short time.
Yasashii kaori ga suru sunda sora ga tsuzuku,
Hito wa kono tochi wo marude rakuen no you to iu.

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I have decided to create a .Hack Fanfiction.
It's going to be semi-related to the storyline of G.U, however, the main character is NOT a known character of Dot Hack.

Currently what I have:


-Prologue (Don't know what to call it...)-

In 2007, CyberConnect Corp. started
The Dazzling Twilight Dream
known as 「The World」

The game instantaneously became popular,
and more than 20 million copies were sold worldwide.

However, Dreams don't last forever

After the events of the "Morganna Incident,"
the game gradually deteriorated;
crashing at random points in the day,
many of the areas having errors,
and many of the players eventually lost interest in 「The World.」

The Twilight Dream soon came to an end.

*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*

In 2016, CyberConnect Corp. released
「The World R:2,」and suddenly,
The Twilight Dream had returned.

I'll post the first chapter in a short time.


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A pleasant fragrance hangs on the breeze as the weather clears again,
People say that this land is just like paradise.
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(edited by BennyMD4123 on 05-02-08 11:21 PM)    

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Seems pretty cool. Tell me when you make one sounds interesting.
Seems pretty cool. Tell me when you make one sounds interesting.

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the plot almost seems like the explanation of how the first couple attempts failed in "The Matrix." people losing interest and all
the plot almost seems like the explanation of how the first couple attempts failed in "The Matrix." people losing interest and all

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I think if you were to get back on this story, that it'd expand into something awesome

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I think if you were to get back on this story, that it'd expand into something awesome


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oh, this definitely could turn into something great. it's a story with enormous potential
oh, this definitely could turn into something great. it's a story with enormous potential

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You guys do realize, that's basically what actually happens in the series. (It's based off of ".Hack")

But I will continue it.

The main problem I have is that the .Hack//G.U. Portion (set in this timeline) isn't over yet.
This means, the story might have to be changed immensely in the later chapters (if something happens).

===To anyone who says it's over because you beat the games===
READ .HACK//G.U.+ (The manga). IT'S NOT OVER YET.
(I'm pretty sure they're going up to V5)

Yasashii kaori ga suru sunda sora ga tsuzuku,
Hito wa kono tochi wo marude rakuen no you to iu.

A pleasant fragrance hangs on the breeze as the weather clears again,
People say that this land is just like paradise.

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You guys do realize, that's basically what actually happens in the series. (It's based off of ".Hack")

But I will continue it.

The main problem I have is that the .Hack//G.U. Portion (set in this timeline) isn't over yet.
This means, the story might have to be changed immensely in the later chapters (if something happens).

===To anyone who says it's over because you beat the games===
READ .HACK//G.U.+ (The manga). IT'S NOT OVER YET.
(I'm pretty sure they're going up to V5)



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(edited by BennyMD4123 on 02-26-09 09:28 AM)    

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you don't need to base it completely off of it. make it more original, that's where I see most of the potential
you don't need to base it completely off of it. make it more original, that's where I see most of the potential

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