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03-24-08 01:29 AM
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I'm currently writing a book, I'm going to have to rewrite it again, so it won't sound so bad/will be more detailed.

The Basics:
The main character gets involved in an accident when he is younger, thus forcing him to live with many mental problems throughout his life, and lose his ability to speak and interact normally with people.

Throughout his life he has been taken out of several schools due to major disruptions and vandalism (none of which he had purposely done)

He is eventually forced to move out of his country for a "fresh start" but will the new move help him to find a cure, or will it eventually lead to an incurable state of mental instability?


I'm currently writing a book, I'm going to have to rewrite it again, so it won't sound so bad/will be more detailed.

The Basics:
The main character gets involved in an accident when he is younger, thus forcing him to live with many mental problems throughout his life, and lose his ability to speak and interact normally with people.

Throughout his life he has been taken out of several schools due to major disruptions and vandalism (none of which he had purposely done)

He is eventually forced to move out of his country for a "fresh start" but will the new move help him to find a cure, or will it eventually lead to an incurable state of mental instability?


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Very good plotline. It's gritty and to the point; I like it . And yes, I use semicolons
Very good plotline. It's gritty and to the point; I like it . And yes, I use semicolons
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Say, when you publish the book (if you do) let me know so that i can by the book because i want to read all about it. It already has grabbed my attention.
Say, when you publish the book (if you do) let me know so that i can by the book because i want to read all about it. It already has grabbed my attention.
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So it's about... ME?!
Naw just kidding.
But since I'm insane, you have peaked my rural interest. Whens the first release?
So it's about... ME?!
Naw just kidding.
But since I'm insane, you have peaked my rural interest. Whens the first release?
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Ben, I think I've just got an idea to motivate us to finish our books: Make an "Issue" weekly that's 2 to 3 pages in length. If we do this, our books will be done slowly and with pure quality.
Ben, I think I've just got an idea to motivate us to finish our books: Make an "Issue" weekly that's 2 to 3 pages in length. If we do this, our books will be done slowly and with pure quality.
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that is true you should allow us to read at least 2 to 3 pages of it each week that way we can tell you our opinions
that is true you should allow us to read at least 2 to 3 pages of it each week that way we can tell you our opinions
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Well, "issues 1 and 2 are in my thread. Expect issue 3 next week.
Well, "issues 1 and 2 are in my thread. Expect issue 3 next week.
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Currently, it's still in the 'idea' stage, but when the first chapter is done, I'll release it here for some constructive criticism.
Currently, it's still in the 'idea' stage, but when the first chapter is done, I'll release it here for some constructive criticism.
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Good . Can't wait to see it.
Good . Can't wait to see it.
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It sounds excellent.
It sounds excellent.
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I've posted a new mini-series in this forum.
I've posted a new mini-series in this forum.
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