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06-09-11 03:30 AM
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I'm getting tired of posting these... but here we go...

This one is one I tested with repetitiveness. It's not my favorite style, but it's one I grew accustomed to for this exercise.

What does it take
To feel as if you belong
What does it take
For one to judge who is right or wrong

What does it take
For one person to take that chance
What does it take
To dance that Daunting Dance?

What does it take
For one to say, "I've had enough"
What does it take
For a man to continue when it gets rough?

What does it take
For one to open up and hope people see?
What does it take
For one to see who you can really be?

What does it take
For that one person to save you?
What does it take
To pick you up when you are feeling blue

What does it take
To keep moving, with no care
What does it take
For one to make their lives fair?

Is there a solution?
Is there an answer?
What's the downer?
Can it be true?

I don't think there is an answer
All doubt removed from my mind
But the one thing I can't shake
I cant shake the feeling of being behind

Take a step out the doorway
Take a step towards today
Tomorrow doesn't matter
Because, everythings gonna be OK

I'm getting tired of posting these... but here we go...

This one is one I tested with repetitiveness. It's not my favorite style, but it's one I grew accustomed to for this exercise.

What does it take
To feel as if you belong
What does it take
For one to judge who is right or wrong

What does it take
For one person to take that chance
What does it take
To dance that Daunting Dance?

What does it take
For one to say, "I've had enough"
What does it take
For a man to continue when it gets rough?

What does it take
For one to open up and hope people see?
What does it take
For one to see who you can really be?

What does it take
For that one person to save you?
What does it take
To pick you up when you are feeling blue

What does it take
To keep moving, with no care
What does it take
For one to make their lives fair?

Is there a solution?
Is there an answer?
What's the downer?
Can it be true?

I don't think there is an answer
All doubt removed from my mind
But the one thing I can't shake
I cant shake the feeling of being behind

Take a step out the doorway
Take a step towards today
Tomorrow doesn't matter
Because, everythings gonna be OK

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06-09-11 04:41 AM
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legacyme3 : The last paragraph basically told me to get a life... xP

Sometimes repetitiveness is what makes a poem, a good poem. That's a compliment. 

As I was reading the first ones, I was answering to the questions. 

"With guts. With bravery. With courage. With determination. With common sense." (Not in order, but those are the few ones I thought I'd answer to the questions.)

This reminds me of a few of my "existential" poems, for some reason. My poems are more like, questioning the universe, questioning why we exist, etc.
legacyme3 : The last paragraph basically told me to get a life... xP

Sometimes repetitiveness is what makes a poem, a good poem. That's a compliment. 

As I was reading the first ones, I was answering to the questions. 

"With guts. With bravery. With courage. With determination. With common sense." (Not in order, but those are the few ones I thought I'd answer to the questions.)

This reminds me of a few of my "existential" poems, for some reason. My poems are more like, questioning the universe, questioning why we exist, etc.

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07-07-11 11:40 PM
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This is a really good poem and it actually ment a lot to me, Every person has asked themselves questions like this at some point in there life
This is a really good poem and it actually ment a lot to me, Every person has asked themselves questions like this at some point in there life


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07-07-11 11:43 PM
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Great poem leggy. read through it and it personally has an impact on what I think of like. I could use this to teach some other people as well.
Great poem leggy. read through it and it personally has an impact on what I think of like. I could use this to teach some other people as well.


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