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03-11-11 11:50 PM
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Here's the second poem I've written. I hope everyone likes it. It took me about 15 - 30 minutes to make.

The Blue Land (by Matt S.)

The dawning, sunny light
shines upon the sand
across the marine waters
onto to the crystal, blue land.

A sailor of sorts
boarding a sail boat
notices the beauty
as if the glare seems to float.

A hiker, courageous
atop a huge mountain
sights an awesome view
as the sun begins to broaden.

The star shall rise
'till it reaches the top
as people are distracted
inside the baker's shop.

Soon, the peaceful vista
will come to a cease
as the glowing sun
nears towards the crease.

As it makes impact
it makes an epic outlook
with glory enough
to draw in a notebook.

Soon, the perception will end
but you mustn't worry
as this cycle will reappear
even if it's currently buried

Beneath the ground
of a place so grand
a place I like to call
The crystal, blue land.


Here's the second poem I've written. I hope everyone likes it. It took me about 15 - 30 minutes to make.

The Blue Land (by Matt S.)

The dawning, sunny light
shines upon the sand
across the marine waters
onto to the crystal, blue land.

A sailor of sorts
boarding a sail boat
notices the beauty
as if the glare seems to float.

A hiker, courageous
atop a huge mountain
sights an awesome view
as the sun begins to broaden.

The star shall rise
'till it reaches the top
as people are distracted
inside the baker's shop.

Soon, the peaceful vista
will come to a cease
as the glowing sun
nears towards the crease.

As it makes impact
it makes an epic outlook
with glory enough
to draw in a notebook.

Soon, the perception will end
but you mustn't worry
as this cycle will reappear
even if it's currently buried

Beneath the ground
of a place so grand
a place I like to call
The crystal, blue land.




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03-11-11 11:59 PM
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Yeah dude, that makes sense for me as: There is no answer to reality--as to what is reality, until you put your Creator and Christ into the picture...
Further, as I might be wrong to your concept, what is the Blue Land?
Yeah dude, that makes sense for me as: There is no answer to reality--as to what is reality, until you put your Creator and Christ into the picture...
Further, as I might be wrong to your concept, what is the Blue Land?

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03-12-11 12:10 AM
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tRIUNE : Well, I imagined it as a beautiful island with wonderful scenery, but I like how you see it as something different, something moral, with a message of truth behind it.
tRIUNE : Well, I imagined it as a beautiful island with wonderful scenery, but I like how you see it as something different, something moral, with a message of truth behind it.

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Dude that was really good its a very peacful poem





Dude that was really good its a very peacful poem

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its an awsome poem matt i can just see everything in my head as you read the lines i love it
its an awsome poem matt i can just see everything in my head as you read the lines i love it

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