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03-06-11 11:49 PM
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This is a poem I wrote for comm. Arts... Somehow I got an A

Cheese
I don't like cheese
It makes my stomach unease
When I see people eat more
I feel very sad
And throw it on the floor
Because cheese makes me mad
Why cheese why?
Do you make me cry?

This is a poem I wrote for comm. Arts... Somehow I got an A

Cheese
I don't like cheese
It makes my stomach unease
When I see people eat more
I feel very sad
And throw it on the floor
Because cheese makes me mad
Why cheese why?
Do you make me cry?

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Lol, this belongs in the Stories/Simulation forum... w/e.

Anyyyyways, I actually like this poem. It isn't bad, although it is kind of silly.

Lol, this belongs in the Stories/Simulation forum... w/e.

Anyyyyways, I actually like this poem. It isn't bad, although it is kind of silly.

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This is a very nice poem, but I'm gonna move it to the Poetry forum so others can see it.

This is a very nice poem, but I'm gonna move it to the Poetry forum so others can see it.

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Wow, this touched me so deep Choko. I LOVE IT!!!!!
Wow, this touched me so deep Choko. I LOVE IT!!!!!

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haha cool poem. A lot of these are pretty funny to me. Sorry

haha cool poem. A lot of these are pretty funny to me. Sorry


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the funniest part is when you said i threw it on the floor.






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the funniest part is when you said i threw it on the floor.






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This is a good poem choko good job have you ever wrote anymore poems?





This is a good poem choko good job have you ever wrote anymore poems?

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M!cH@3l 001 : Lol written other.

Very nice Choko!! I love it, and it's original!
M!cH@3l 001 : Lol written other.

Very nice Choko!! I love it, and it's original!

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It's da best poem evar. I personally love cheese though so this is BLASPHEMY!!! But it's a good poem.

It's da best poem evar. I personally love cheese though so this is BLASPHEMY!!! But it's a good poem.

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Poetry does not have to allways be serious good job choko
Poetry does not have to allways be serious good job choko

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M!cH@3l 001 : I have but they're not funny and not to good either.

M!cH@3l 001 : I have but they're not funny and not to good either.

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Not bad! I enjoy humorous poems. This almost sounds sort of like a possible upcoming rap...
Not bad! I enjoy humorous poems. This almost sounds sort of like a possible upcoming rap...

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lol!
That's a cool poem. Not deep but very funny. *thumbs up









lol!
That's a cool poem. Not deep but very funny. *thumbs up

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Short and sweet, thats how I describe it.
Unlike cheese itself that is XD

Short and sweet, thats how I describe it.
Unlike cheese itself that is XD

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This poem would make me happy, except for the fact that I love cheese DX
This poem would make me happy, except for the fact that I love cheese DX



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