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What do you think of my music? (For Creative Criticism)

 

02-19-11 07:39 PM
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A Joe Project is my band, a one man band, might add some other people to it. But yeah, please tell me honestly what you think. Thank you
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A Joe Project is my band, a one man band, might add some other people to it. But yeah, please tell me honestly what you think. Thank you
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It was...silly. Try to be a little more creative than just raising the pitch of your voice extremely high or low and relying on cuss words and popular songs. Try to add some layers to your songs. You can still make a parody, just give the listener more to work with. The interpretation can be much more loose.

I really admire you for posting that and asking for feedback. The best advice that I can give you is to keep playing. If you fall, get yourself back up.

Also, it should be http://www.last.fm/music/A+Joe+Project/Parodies+and+Insanities you forgot the / in front of the 2nd url.
It was...silly. Try to be a little more creative than just raising the pitch of your voice extremely high or low and relying on cuss words and popular songs. Try to add some layers to your songs. You can still make a parody, just give the listener more to work with. The interpretation can be much more loose.

I really admire you for posting that and asking for feedback. The best advice that I can give you is to keep playing. If you fall, get yourself back up.

Also, it should be http://www.last.fm/music/A+Joe+Project/Parodies+and+Insanities you forgot the / in front of the 2nd url.
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NotJon : Oh well thanks NotJon, that's great advice. I shall work harder, and then come back and post some more songs. Again, thanks for the advice. I'll follow it.
NotJon : Oh well thanks NotJon, that's great advice. I shall work harder, and then come back and post some more songs. Again, thanks for the advice. I'll follow it.
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You're very welcome. I'm the same way with my art. I'm always trying to improve and I always enjoy getting some advice. Would you mind critiquing my art? It's in this thread: https://www.vizzed.com/vizzedboard/thread.php?id=23054
You're very welcome. I'm the same way with my art. I'm always trying to improve and I always enjoy getting some advice. Would you mind critiquing my art? It's in this thread: https://www.vizzed.com/vizzedboard/thread.php?id=23054
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02-19-11 08:03 PM
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NotJon : Wow! You're a pretty well accomplished artist, I am striving to draw like that. All i say is that perhaps lighter on the pencil, make it a little brighter or color it in. I do like it in black and white, as it instantly strikes you.
NotJon : Wow! You're a pretty well accomplished artist, I am striving to draw like that. All i say is that perhaps lighter on the pencil, make it a little brighter or color it in. I do like it in black and white, as it instantly strikes you.
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Scarecrowcalls : Oh yes. There is actually little strokes of orange in there. I have a hard time incorporating colour into black and white and vice versa. It's one of the things that I try and work on. Glad you picked up on that. For this drawing, however, I was running out of time and I didn't want to experiment too much with colour because it was a Valentine's Day present. I don't draw women very often and I really like the way my friend came out (though I wish I did the eyes better). Thanks man.

And now to keep this post relevant to this thread I thought of something that you could do. I think you should listen to some Weird Al and Isaac Hayes. Weird Al is the king of parody while Issac Hayes (AKA "Chef" from South Park) was actually an accomplished R&B musician. He was very talented. He was a master of taking songs and extending them and transforming them into something new and all his own. For example, listen to this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AO073fekFfA. That was the original. Here is his version (or at least the first ten minutes): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VUzUMJIty4M. The difference is striking isn't it? Anyway, I'll let you marinate on that. Nice talking with you.
Scarecrowcalls : Oh yes. There is actually little strokes of orange in there. I have a hard time incorporating colour into black and white and vice versa. It's one of the things that I try and work on. Glad you picked up on that. For this drawing, however, I was running out of time and I didn't want to experiment too much with colour because it was a Valentine's Day present. I don't draw women very often and I really like the way my friend came out (though I wish I did the eyes better). Thanks man.

And now to keep this post relevant to this thread I thought of something that you could do. I think you should listen to some Weird Al and Isaac Hayes. Weird Al is the king of parody while Issac Hayes (AKA "Chef" from South Park) was actually an accomplished R&B musician. He was very talented. He was a master of taking songs and extending them and transforming them into something new and all his own. For example, listen to this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AO073fekFfA. That was the original. Here is his version (or at least the first ten minutes): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VUzUMJIty4M. The difference is striking isn't it? Anyway, I'll let you marinate on that. Nice talking with you.
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