diabeticzach : The poem is quite good

i enjoyed reading all of theses poems. well done!

Friendship
Its a fickled thing
Gets you in trouble and feels as if ur a double
Best friends can be worst enemies alls it takes is 1 girl
She changed my world but at what cost one must ask
A friendship and all that trust with it
It hurts it bleeds but he lied to her and i gave her better
But for some reason im still hurt I didnt do anything wrong
Its not as if I fell for this girl on purpose
She fell in my lap and I connected with her and asked for her hand
But this man my once called friend he cant forgive me i was honest with him
He is acting like I stabbed him in the back
As if he was dating this lovely girl which he wasnt
So i rant i rave and i just crave i feel a little bit better now

Enjoy not really a poem but i needed to blog about this before i lsot it and took it out on the wrong people Love ya all my vizzed friends

Well written, deep, a good poem , but a little too painful to the poet

Wow those are real good
I like them they are quite nice.
You should make some more.

my own little poem about your poem
. 5-7-5

Man cannot succeed unless he goes through some struggles first.
I have conquered many things
Both little and small
Some scary and others joyous
Its a rare thing to be in recovery
Seeing things in a true light
Not all messed up and causing plight
To be healthy and not sick both in mind and spirit
So I challenge all of you
To take control of all the misfortune in life
Turn it around and find that bright light
It shines like a star though its hard to find
Its one day at a time, one step
Though baby steps they are
Succeeding is what you will get
Slow and painful it seems but that light makes it worth it





Life and things
Chasing ones true dreams
Feeling relief no more grief
Free at last life is finally a blast
I see and feel taste and smell
Black turned to White
Finding those new colors in life
No more strife just rife with this new life
Its going good momentum building never ceasing
This train will never stop just keeping up

Interesting poetry. Very good actually! ^-^ Keep it up!

Hey all sorry im not on here as much as i would like, but its been time consuming with this new job and all these various other things that have been going on. I miss you all and wish more people would comment in here so i can get a better understanding of my writting style.

Thanks again my lovely Vizzed friends!

Watching waiting hiding seeing
seeking feeling doing breathing
things we do without notice
they happen so suddenly
like a storm passing by
causing havoc and feeling a rye
so we eat we breath and sleep and see
its amazing what we do cause we have to



The bells are ringing and my girl is singing
Marriage to come its a wave of emotions
Chasing dreams and winning things
I love her and she knows so forever we will grow
I though this would never happen again but it has
So thank those in the skies above and those demons below
Cause once this all is said and down
It's time to drag that ball and chain ^^ happy reading folks

Long LIVE VIZZED

That is a great poem. You should really be a professional poet (just saying my own opinion about you)

Hey all I know its been awhile...I missed my friends ^^ been busy with this new job i have and such and planning a wedding and finding a new place to live. I currently work for a company called modern tool inc we fab parts for John Deer tractors, I personally just use the laser and cut out parts ie i sit and use a computer and a blue print to punch in the dimensions and watch it go! WEll thats it for now ill post some more poems in time thanks a ton lots of love DiabeticZach


Well I found some free time so time to get them here poems on the net for you all

The smell of metal rustic and dense
Flares ones nostrils all so intense
Removing slag and scale feeling bored and stale
Forming the parts and welding them up
Its mundane and slow but it must be done
So one day this bracket can be on that tractor
There small and big and even shaped like pigs
Some look like guns from halo even but none the less
It still smells like oil rust and its always dense



We frolic and laugh having a blast
Chasing those dreams and even our past
What to do when we get lost feeling like Robert Frost
Diverged in a Yellow Wood, or scream all obscene
Its not a mob scene just us people bored and dored from it all lost
Thats why we chase those dreams and even our past
Running and wishing that winter would pass
I miss the green grass and the smell of flowers even the chance to go frolf is calling
But spring is not here and the snow is not gone so what to do while i wait for fun
Vizzed it is even though i seem to be gone

Good poem. Needs a bit of rhythm

I am like emily dickinson I have a ton of poems that I have typed/written for my girlfriend and no one else has seen them. I felt so accomplished when I actually brought a tear to her eye. That was a beautiful moment. I might post some later, I still haven't decided.

Hey all thanks for the great feed back and sorry I have not been really active. Started school again, which means I'm owned by the school cause I have to be there everyday almost and then add work....ya Dig

Anyways here's something new not really a poem but ill let you all be the judge of that thanks

Life goes on
Down this path
Nothing forseen
Our hearts bleed
Fleeing all sorts of things
Does it feel right
To deal in matters
So black and white
Trying to move forward
Falling always it seems
Is this what defines us
Our own struggles in life
3 months 15 days is it worth it
Mistress Mary Jane is now gone
Lost in black and white
Never finding gray
Always desolate, black
Whats our purpose
Now drugs, Rock-n-Roll
But rather to procreate it seems
What a mess never been able to mesh
Mending those breaks and bends
Missing it all, the mistress, the lingo
Parties of root beer
Nothing else to look forward to
Sobriety is all I have
About time one would think ^^
Zachary L. 3-27-2011

Finding our dreams
Chasing all those fun things
This road is hard but it's worth the trip
The bumps the hills and the easy stretch
Feeling it all taking it in
Spinning in my own head
Finally working on things and moving forward
The gray desolate past is there but less prevalent
So lets get it done and carry on
Live Love Laugh

nice poems. You should be a poet one day

I'm not a poem critic but I think those poems are wonderful. You should make more.

Great poems

You should compile them all into an anthology and get it published

septembern : Thats a good idea, but to get published is easy for just a single poem but to get a chap book published takes some work and with school and such i dont have time for those things