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01-07-11 08:26 PM
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the pain life can cause

indiscriminate, desolate, vast beyond sight

does it define us the pain life can bring

choices like shaking dice causes predicaments

feeling lost, head gone going mad, dwelling on the past

no amount of grass changes it not even at last

so struggle on finding that winding road

thinking of Robert Frost's road least traveled

peering down it seeing new ideas and different plights

The pain caused by life is self derived

changing it a matter of perspective

1-6-2011


Running chasing things one cant always see

Dark and dank this dungeon isn't neat

Life's a mess thy shall not contest

Peering over seeing demons running tripping stumbling

Trying to grasp if its reality or a paradox
(not finished)
More to come


life is fun yet it is up and down
children will play till they fall upon their crown
it is not a game but it will be fun when life is done
to rest eternally forever gone
it wont happen young but once we are old
the stars will gather and will be sold
its this mystery we love and strive to solve
all to get that little bit of resolve
its not a game nor is it tamed
wild and rampant like Hollywood fame
life is fun with ups and downs
roller coasters rides in this town
we live on striving to be our own entity


The diabetic way of life!
My insulin is forever my blood
The needle tearing through beloved children
The bloodshed of thousands is like a flood
Children used to take ritilan
Now they cry from withdrawl of insulin
They lay dying of diabetic shock
The molded bread of diesese like penicilian
Killing millions of children like a rock
The diesease of time done by thine ownself
Sitting around a scary looking shelf


Addiction!
Struggling alyways and forever
Addict for life feeling morbid
The light seems to leave
Yet sixty minutes ago
Everything seemed fine
Life was divine
Alls it takes is ten seconds
The deamons are back
Will we prosper or fail
Clean and seiren
Nine months or six days its all the same
Tens seconds to hit that bottom
Feeling as if there is no choice
Friends Family all gone
Addicted and alone missing home
Is there no joy
Or is K.I.S.S. not working
Higher powers lost causes
That danm addict won again
Clean indeed yet not when it comes to thinking
Process the same without the drugs
Always at square 1 no matter what

Syringes and children with insunlin
pumpers and cords conneced
We all share the bond
We come every year
just to see all the kdis cheer and smile
Peanut buttered hair slimey fingers
Camp is it again no longer here
WE will all miss it till next year
So Put some glucose on it
and enjoy All the childrens cheers



"You can turn your back on a person but never turn your back on a drug."






the pain life can cause

indiscriminate, desolate, vast beyond sight

does it define us the pain life can bring

choices like shaking dice causes predicaments

feeling lost, head gone going mad, dwelling on the past

no amount of grass changes it not even at last

so struggle on finding that winding road

thinking of Robert Frost's road least traveled

peering down it seeing new ideas and different plights

The pain caused by life is self derived

changing it a matter of perspective

1-6-2011


Running chasing things one cant always see

Dark and dank this dungeon isn't neat

Life's a mess thy shall not contest

Peering over seeing demons running tripping stumbling

Trying to grasp if its reality or a paradox
(not finished)
More to come


life is fun yet it is up and down
children will play till they fall upon their crown
it is not a game but it will be fun when life is done
to rest eternally forever gone
it wont happen young but once we are old
the stars will gather and will be sold
its this mystery we love and strive to solve
all to get that little bit of resolve
its not a game nor is it tamed
wild and rampant like Hollywood fame
life is fun with ups and downs
roller coasters rides in this town
we live on striving to be our own entity


The diabetic way of life!
My insulin is forever my blood
The needle tearing through beloved children
The bloodshed of thousands is like a flood
Children used to take ritilan
Now they cry from withdrawl of insulin
They lay dying of diabetic shock
The molded bread of diesese like penicilian
Killing millions of children like a rock
The diesease of time done by thine ownself
Sitting around a scary looking shelf


Addiction!
Struggling alyways and forever
Addict for life feeling morbid
The light seems to leave
Yet sixty minutes ago
Everything seemed fine
Life was divine
Alls it takes is ten seconds
The deamons are back
Will we prosper or fail
Clean and seiren
Nine months or six days its all the same
Tens seconds to hit that bottom
Feeling as if there is no choice
Friends Family all gone
Addicted and alone missing home
Is there no joy
Or is K.I.S.S. not working
Higher powers lost causes
That danm addict won again
Clean indeed yet not when it comes to thinking
Process the same without the drugs
Always at square 1 no matter what

Syringes and children with insunlin
pumpers and cords conneced
We all share the bond
We come every year
just to see all the kdis cheer and smile
Peanut buttered hair slimey fingers
Camp is it again no longer here
WE will all miss it till next year
So Put some glucose on it
and enjoy All the childrens cheers



"You can turn your back on a person but never turn your back on a drug."






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Those poems are pretty good. Kinda dark for my tastes but w/e.

BTW, my blog totally pwns yours. Jk, jk.
Those poems are pretty good. Kinda dark for my tastes but w/e.

BTW, my blog totally pwns yours. Jk, jk.
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01-08-11 11:53 AM
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The Sun sets and the moon shines out
Like the eyes of a beautiful women
I gently caress her cheek, taking in its warmth
Smiling from my heart feeling happy and on a cloud that will never break
Is it love or lust the intoxication of this person is irresistible
Her touch forever gentle methodical almost
I dont care if its both or just one
She makes me happy and that i feel is enough of a thing to have won

^^ Enjoy

This is about this girl Kayla i keep hanging with..It's weird never felt this way before what does one do in such a predicament? I guess its just figure it out and have fun, Hopefully someone will finally give some constructive feed back Though TC you did ok hahaha Lots of Love DiabeticZach
The Sun sets and the moon shines out
Like the eyes of a beautiful women
I gently caress her cheek, taking in its warmth
Smiling from my heart feeling happy and on a cloud that will never break
Is it love or lust the intoxication of this person is irresistible
Her touch forever gentle methodical almost
I dont care if its both or just one
She makes me happy and that i feel is enough of a thing to have won

^^ Enjoy

This is about this girl Kayla i keep hanging with..It's weird never felt this way before what does one do in such a predicament? I guess its just figure it out and have fun, Hopefully someone will finally give some constructive feed back Though TC you did ok hahaha Lots of Love DiabeticZach
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diabeticzach : that is a touching poem. What do you think of my poem "the fence"?
the fence is big
extends for miles
keeps people in
keeps people out
separates land
destroys diversion
destroys hope of the future
keeps people at worst
its height can be jumped
its lows can be dugged
its length can be surrounded
the fence is greed
the fence
a border between brothers
diabeticzach : that is a touching poem. What do you think of my poem "the fence"?
the fence is big
extends for miles
keeps people in
keeps people out
separates land
destroys diversion
destroys hope of the future
keeps people at worst
its height can be jumped
its lows can be dugged
its length can be surrounded
the fence is greed
the fence
a border between brothers
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becerra95 : is there a hidden meaning to it? i like i though
becerra95 : is there a hidden meaning to it? i like i though
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diabeticzach : The meaning of the poem is about the fence between Mexico and U.S
diabeticzach : The meaning of the poem is about the fence between Mexico and U.S
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Interesting Are you of Mexican decent or something
Interesting Are you of Mexican decent or something
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(Sorry if it sounds mean) I am thank you for nocticing. =D
(Sorry if it sounds mean) I am thank you for nocticing. =D
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IT don't sound mean
IT don't sound mean
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diabeticzach : Just saying because you know how grumpy people say "thank you for nocticing" sarcasticly
diabeticzach : Just saying because you know how grumpy people say "thank you for nocticing" sarcasticly
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Yea I do but you have understand thats one thing that is hard to use on the web brah
Yea I do but you have understand thats one thing that is hard to use on the web brah
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diabeticzach : I know, but still. Well anyway, is there any more poetry you want to post ?
diabeticzach : I know, but still. Well anyway, is there any more poetry you want to post ?
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The Process!

Life it seems passes us by

Wondering why we all had to cry

We plead and beg for something new

In the end it all fell through

So we pick up the pieces and start a new

Trying not to come unglued

This is the cycle of life


Random

Children running having loads of fun
Wind through their hair not having a care
Cars drive by like crows in the sky
No one realizes the blackness of death
A blue car with shiny white rims
Prowls the street windows down straps out
Children running screaming
The sound of projectiles slows time
It's a vortex of bullets
Cars stop then drive
Two hours later the smell of death rises
One driver shot in the head
Three children now without friends
Families suffer, children cry
The city life is void of time
Random things at random times
The Process!

Life it seems passes us by

Wondering why we all had to cry

We plead and beg for something new

In the end it all fell through

So we pick up the pieces and start a new

Trying not to come unglued

This is the cycle of life


Random

Children running having loads of fun
Wind through their hair not having a care
Cars drive by like crows in the sky
No one realizes the blackness of death
A blue car with shiny white rims
Prowls the street windows down straps out
Children running screaming
The sound of projectiles slows time
It's a vortex of bullets
Cars stop then drive
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The city life is void of time
Random things at random times
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Those poems are really good. Just saying , are one of them deep poets ?
Those poems are really good. Just saying , are one of them deep poets ?
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Those are really good diabeticzach you have talent

becerra95 : Yours was really good also
Those are really good diabeticzach you have talent

becerra95 : Yours was really good also
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I <3 you guys thanks for all the feed back more to come soon
I <3 you guys thanks for all the feed back more to come soon
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diabeticzach : Dude you rock keep up the good work a the poem had me lost, I least you know how to let yourself out and help yourself. anytime dude remember always your friend
diabeticzach : Dude you rock keep up the good work a the poem had me lost, I least you know how to let yourself out and help yourself. anytime dude remember always your friend
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Aj7yk : Thx bro and which one is confusing?
This is a start of a song im writting for my girlfriend let me know what ya all think thanks a million

Kayla
Here we are hand in hand signing our song till the very end

I dont know how it works but i love all those little quirks

I see you i laugh it brings out the light and this little heart of mine

I see you smile and i smile back singing this song in the back of my head

I hold you close i kiss you that kiss i found that love i know id miss

Dance in the rain stare at the stairs i dont care cause will go far

Chased you for what seemed like a year now they will all stay clear

Summer time will go fishing at night singing songs in the camp light

Fire flys light up our face remembering every embrace
Aj7yk : Thx bro and which one is confusing?
This is a start of a song im writting for my girlfriend let me know what ya all think thanks a million

Kayla
Here we are hand in hand signing our song till the very end

I dont know how it works but i love all those little quirks

I see you i laugh it brings out the light and this little heart of mine

I see you smile and i smile back singing this song in the back of my head

I hold you close i kiss you that kiss i found that love i know id miss

Dance in the rain stare at the stairs i dont care cause will go far

Chased you for what seemed like a year now they will all stay clear

Summer time will go fishing at night singing songs in the camp light

Fire flys light up our face remembering every embrace
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That's good man If I were you I would change ''stare at the stairs'' to ''stare at the stars'' because it would be better in my opinion. But it's up to man its cool
That's good man If I were you I would change ''stare at the stairs'' to ''stare at the stars'' because it would be better in my opinion. But it's up to man its cool
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M!cH@3l 001 : Lol thats just a typo ironically you quoted the right verse and i cant wait to lay it down on a cd!! ^^
M!cH@3l 001 : Lol thats just a typo ironically you quoted the right verse and i cant wait to lay it down on a cd!! ^^
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