HEY EVERYONE I MADE A BIT OF MY FIRST STORY AND ONCE IT'S DONE I'M PLANNING TO SEND IT TO A PUBLISHER WISH ME LUCK
Rewind
RING! RING! Not even Trevor's alarm clock could wake him up today. Not after what happened yesterday. Lets rewind shall we. Where do we start? Oh yes, Lets start at Trevors best friends house Mike. BOOM! Trevor and Mike were plaing star wars battlefront on Mikes ps2. "I'm telling you the x-wing could kick your tie fighters but" Mike said with confidence. "Want to bet on that Mike"? "Sure i'm up for that". "If i win i get all your chocolate bars". "Fine" said Trevor. "But if i win you gotta give me all your ps2 games". "No way"! Mike said with greed. "How about that watch that my mom gave me for my birthday 2 weeks ago". "She got it at some wierd guy at the flea market i haven't even wore it". "Sure why not". With that Trevor and Mike started to fire there lasers and missles in the end Trevor was the victor. "Ha i told you i'd win Trevor said with a proud voice". "You only won because you got that hyper jump power-up" Mike said with a mumbling voice. "Well i guess i get the watch said Trevor". "Hmph i'll go get it" said Mike. Mike returned with the watch. Then Mike suggested they go to the new antique store along the way back to Trevors house Mike said he needed to see if they had a vase that looked like the one Mike had broke 2 days ago. He said it was a miricale his mom hasn't noticed that he broke it yet. They had arrived at the store. They started to look around when Trevor noticed that there was an outlet swinging from the celing. Trevor decided to touch it. His curiousty is always getting the better of him. Trevor was electrecuted. Luckiley it wan't a huge shock just enough to make his hair standing on one end. Just then the store clerk came and hurried to check if evryone was alright. He made sure no one touched the outlet until the electrician arrived. After that Trevor felt a little weird. Just then he said to himself: "if i could just go back and make it so i didn't touch that outlet". Just then Trevor felt a weird sensation. His hair started to go down he saw Mike searching for a vase but he was walking backwards! Just then time had stopped! Then everything was normal but Trevor felt like he never even been electrecuted. Then he noticed that he was in the same exact position as he was before he touched the outlet! Just then the store clerk came and looked like he just for the first time noticed the outlet. Then he saw Trevor and told him to stay away from the outlet while he calls the electricians. Just then he realized what just happened...He went back in time!

Thats cool hackerman it was really interesting I didnt know you was a writer thats cool man I wish you luck with the publisher I hope he likes it