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The armor of cynicism. I gues the title could be worse. :P

 

11-24-10 08:53 PM
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I am your hollowed-out saint, an angel with clipped wings.
You nailed my hands to the floor and stood on the ceiling.
Now I've played the victim for so long I can't remember what pain feels like.
So I hide in the crib that made me what I am.

Remember the sunrise. When naivety meant a clean conscience.
Remember the sunset. The thought of shutting my tired eyes.

I guess that's the beauty of self-preservation.
The Holy Grail can be ignored.
But it makes the journey worthless.
Because all that's left is the brick sun and and the solitary figure.

And when the negative finally sleeps, the world will breathe the light that was obscured.
I am your hollowed-out saint, an angel with clipped wings.
You nailed my hands to the floor and stood on the ceiling.
Now I've played the victim for so long I can't remember what pain feels like.
So I hide in the crib that made me what I am.

Remember the sunrise. When naivety meant a clean conscience.
Remember the sunset. The thought of shutting my tired eyes.

I guess that's the beauty of self-preservation.
The Holy Grail can be ignored.
But it makes the journey worthless.
Because all that's left is the brick sun and and the solitary figure.

And when the negative finally sleeps, the world will breathe the light that was obscured.
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11-24-10 09:33 PM
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Wow, you're really good at poetry. I like your style. The last one you posted was good too... do you have any more?
Wow, you're really good at poetry. I like your style. The last one you posted was good too... do you have any more?
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11-24-10 10:03 PM
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the_casualty : Thanks! That means a lot. I have a few more poems but they aren't as good.
the_casualty : Thanks! That means a lot. I have a few more poems but they aren't as good.
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This one in particular sounded very much like the lyrics to a song. I'm liking your style as well.
This one in particular sounded very much like the lyrics to a song. I'm liking your style as well.
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11-24-10 10:58 PM
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NotJon : Thank you.
NotJon : Thank you.
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11-25-10 02:42 AM
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Thats good Blue Your write some good poems man
Thats good Blue Your write some good poems man
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