Okay guys so this is what is going to happen i am going to write a page of my book to you guys if you like it vote yes and you guys are the best.However if you dont like it then vote no and leave me alone please. Also only comment good things and if you want give me a thumbs up.{P.S i am trying to make up for my last faliure Valley Kings }.

Chapter 1: My New World
"So, Sam what are you going to do at the dance friday." i say walking down the the street talking to Sam who was next to me. Sam is white and has braids leading down to his neck he always weres green googles with his sam blue sweater and jeans. "I was going to see if i could finally ask shella." as we walk down the long street i see a man with a black coat and black jeans. The sun is blazing hot yet i only feel energy. My red hair is getting in the way of my fire red eyes so I push it over my ear. as we pass the the man i look in his eyes and see total black. I turn to Sam to tell him 'RUN' but im to late the man takes out a blood red sword and slices my friend's head clean off.
I stare in horror as my best friend sam has blood rushing out of his head like a waterfall. all of the fear is pushed out of me and is replaced with anger. I run and take out a pocket knife from sam's lifeless body. Then the man puches me in the face andi fall to the ground with a big 'ThUD' I grunt in pain. Just then the pocket knife started to glow red and i drop it and my arm turns into a fire sword like thing. i look up at the man and say "i'll kill you."

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