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04-16-10 02:16 PM
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I noticed that the board was down for a couple days. While that happened I joined deviantART and I posted chapters of a story that I am writing. This is the first story i've ever written, so it might not be that good, but I'd want some feedback. Please check it out!!! And if you're on deviantART you can add me if you like.

http://artsywriter.deviantart.com/

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I noticed that the board was down for a couple days. While that happened I joined deviantART and I posted chapters of a story that I am writing. This is the first story i've ever written, so it might not be that good, but I'd want some feedback. Please check it out!!! And if you're on deviantART you can add me if you like.

http://artsywriter.deviantart.com/

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From the couple sentences I read about him taking aim at the fighters with his sniper rifle and such. Sounds good. I'm not much of a reader though. You should add the first chapters as well...
From the couple sentences I read about him taking aim at the fighters with his sniper rifle and such. Sounds good. I'm not much of a reader though. You should add the first chapters as well...
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Thanks! I did add the first chapters. i guess it's just being blocked by all the other chapters that were after.
Thanks! I did add the first chapters. i guess it's just being blocked by all the other chapters that were after.
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