A place for you to tell a campfire story, whether it's a scary story, a real life story, or some type of story to express yourself, tell us your story. I'll post mine once there's some replies...(To Be Continued)

Okay, my campfire story is based on a real story. Some people say it is horrible, but other people say that it is not real.

There once was a girl named Hailey. Her mother was sick in the hospital and her dad died when she was 3. Hailey was a 14 year old girl who likes to be a doctor. Right now, she was sitting next by her mom praying that she would be alright. When the doctor came, she told Hailey to leave to talk to her mom. After 3 minutes in the hallway, she thought what was going on. So, she went in the room. She was just standing there her mouth close. She saw nothing on the bed, but just a pillow and a sheet. It looked like there was nobody there. Then she looked around the room, searching for her mom and the doctor. After a second, another girl came to see the girl Hailey laying down on the bed. She got on her knees and prayed for the girl to be alright. Just outside the halls, a doctor was walking in the halls. He thought he heard something in the room he had just passed, the room that the 2 girls were in. Then he went inside and saw nothing.

Honestly I don't understand fully what your saying in your story. I feel like you skipped around alot and left some things out. Just don't quite comprehend your post BreakDown???