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05-11-14 08:55 PM
| ID: 1019456 | 205 Words

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Just to let everyone know, I will be putting a certain amount of the profit (anywhere from 20% to 50%, probably 30% percent or 40%, since I do want to make a profit.) I make, into the prize, so it is fair, to pay 100Viz. As more people guess, the higher the chances and the higher the prize, this is to encourage more people to guess. I also can not lower the range of numbers, to any where around 100 to 500, because I would be gutanteed to lose money, since the number would be guessed after 50 or 40 guesses(1-250) or even 18 guesses (1-100). I just did the math in my head.. READ THE FIRST POST CAREFULLY! It states that I add to the pot, for every amount of profit I make. And to let everyone know, I did remove the deadline
Also, once I make enough money to be sure that I won't be left in debt, I will add even more money to the pot. If anyone wants to donate money to add to the pot, they can
I will also not have prizes of variating sizes, I will like for the prize to start at 10000 whenever possible.
Just to let everyone know, I will be putting a certain amount of the profit (anywhere from 20% to 50%, probably 30% percent or 40%, since I do want to make a profit.) I make, into the prize, so it is fair, to pay 100Viz. As more people guess, the higher the chances and the higher the prize, this is to encourage more people to guess. I also can not lower the range of numbers, to any where around 100 to 500, because I would be gutanteed to lose money, since the number would be guessed after 50 or 40 guesses(1-250) or even 18 guesses (1-100). I just did the math in my head.. READ THE FIRST POST CAREFULLY! It states that I add to the pot, for every amount of profit I make. And to let everyone know, I did remove the deadline
Also, once I make enough money to be sure that I won't be left in debt, I will add even more money to the pot. If anyone wants to donate money to add to the pot, they can
I will also not have prizes of variating sizes, I will like for the prize to start at 10000 whenever possible.


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05-07-14 07:58 PM
| ID: 1017925 | 328 Words

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Would you like to get 11421 viz? If so, try your luck here! Take a guess at my number for the chance to win, the grand prize of?11421?viz!!!





Here's how this works:





I have randomly selected a number in between 1 and 2000. Your objective is to guess what number. If you guess correctly, you win! It's only 100 Viz per guess, so don't worry about wasting money! As the amount of money I get increases, the prize increases too and so does your chances! If you guess and don't pay, I'll simply ignore you like you don't exist! Do that enough times though, I'll ban you from guessing. Forever. Also try to read my first 2 posts, and don't complain about how your possibilities and the prize. If you want to increase your chances keep guessing and ask others to guess to. If you want to have a bigger prize, keep guessing.

Clues: at least one digit is divisible by two

So what are you waiting for? Get guessing! The more guessers the better!
Guessed numbers:

1024, 666 , 777 , 873 , 1 , 2000 , 173 , 187 , 845 , 911 , 655, 46, 526.

Ban list:














No one












Note: Read my second post!
Note: Please don't post off topic!
Your chances are higher than 0.005%, because the chances are increasing with each guess, the point of this is to encourage more people to guess. Imagine if every poster on vizzed tried their luck! Then the prize would be increased well above 10000 (since I add to the pot), and your chances would also increase! If you compare this to the lottery, you have a much higher chance of winning so your chances are actually pretty good.(not great, but not bad either).
13 guesses so far! I'll add more money to the pot at 20 guesses
This is too hard
I'll give everyone another clue at 25 guesses. Good Luck!
Would you like to get 11421 viz? If so, try your luck here! Take a guess at my number for the chance to win, the grand prize of?11421?viz!!!





Here's how this works:





I have randomly selected a number in between 1 and 2000. Your objective is to guess what number. If you guess correctly, you win! It's only 100 Viz per guess, so don't worry about wasting money! As the amount of money I get increases, the prize increases too and so does your chances! If you guess and don't pay, I'll simply ignore you like you don't exist! Do that enough times though, I'll ban you from guessing. Forever. Also try to read my first 2 posts, and don't complain about how your possibilities and the prize. If you want to increase your chances keep guessing and ask others to guess to. If you want to have a bigger prize, keep guessing.

Clues: at least one digit is divisible by two

So what are you waiting for? Get guessing! The more guessers the better!
Guessed numbers:

1024, 666 , 777 , 873 , 1 , 2000 , 173 , 187 , 845 , 911 , 655, 46, 526.

Ban list:














No one












Note: Read my second post!
Note: Please don't post off topic!
Your chances are higher than 0.005%, because the chances are increasing with each guess, the point of this is to encourage more people to guess. Imagine if every poster on vizzed tried their luck! Then the prize would be increased well above 10000 (since I add to the pot), and your chances would also increase! If you compare this to the lottery, you have a much higher chance of winning so your chances are actually pretty good.(not great, but not bad either).
13 guesses so far! I'll add more money to the pot at 20 guesses
This is too hard
I'll give everyone another clue at 25 guesses. Good Luck!


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04-17-14 08:20 PM
| ID: 1008978 | 327 Words

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To remind everyone, what first post says, is not that we demolish the Government but the categories in which we divide. The government would still be there, but there wouldn't be Republicans and Democrats, or any other parties, (the politicians would still be there, but they would not be divided by a category, or a group). In my opinion, this would let the government work together, as one big party, unified by improving our nation, and increase the diversity of ideas, and get rid of a sense of division, made by labeling. Also, as Zurenriri said, it would also take away votes that were only there because of the party. It would ensure better leaders running our country. And while it may seem like it would take away the division between parties, in the long run it actually would. As years go by, politicians would start forget about the labels that define them, and start thinking more about unique individual ideas. Politicians that were once from a smaller party, and were kept quiet by the 2 main parties, would have a chance to speak and introduce new ideas. Eventually, ideas would blend, and smaller un-official groups would occur, but the diversity of thoughts would be greatly increased. This something that may take 30 years or more (or less)  to take obvious effect, but it would be worth the wait. And one last thing to point out, government parties are not essential to the government, but simply a way to categorize. The government would function just as well, or even better without them. Since when was the last government parties helped democrats and republicans agree on something? Parties just drove them apart. Plus, the government is already in a horrible position, and things can't get much worse, with few risks and a lot of possible benefits, wouldn't it be worth the risk to try out this new idea? Oh yeah, don't forget vote on the above poll. 
~Mangepic
I WAS THE FIRST
To remind everyone, what first post says, is not that we demolish the Government but the categories in which we divide. The government would still be there, but there wouldn't be Republicans and Democrats, or any other parties, (the politicians would still be there, but they would not be divided by a category, or a group). In my opinion, this would let the government work together, as one big party, unified by improving our nation, and increase the diversity of ideas, and get rid of a sense of division, made by labeling. Also, as Zurenriri said, it would also take away votes that were only there because of the party. It would ensure better leaders running our country. And while it may seem like it would take away the division between parties, in the long run it actually would. As years go by, politicians would start forget about the labels that define them, and start thinking more about unique individual ideas. Politicians that were once from a smaller party, and were kept quiet by the 2 main parties, would have a chance to speak and introduce new ideas. Eventually, ideas would blend, and smaller un-official groups would occur, but the diversity of thoughts would be greatly increased. This something that may take 30 years or more (or less)  to take obvious effect, but it would be worth the wait. And one last thing to point out, government parties are not essential to the government, but simply a way to categorize. The government would function just as well, or even better without them. Since when was the last government parties helped democrats and republicans agree on something? Parties just drove them apart. Plus, the government is already in a horrible position, and things can't get much worse, with few risks and a lot of possible benefits, wouldn't it be worth the risk to try out this new idea? Oh yeah, don't forget vote on the above poll. 
~Mangepic


THE BEGINNING OF THEM ALL
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04-12-14 11:47 PM
| ID: 1006749 | 41 Words

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My favorite author is Anthony Horowitz. The way he writes is amazing, and the stories are fantastic. He wrote the Alex Rider series, which I love, and the gate keepers series (first book being Raven gate). He is an amazing author!
I WAS THE FIRST
My favorite author is Anthony Horowitz. The way he writes is amazing, and the stories are fantastic. He wrote the Alex Rider series, which I love, and the gate keepers series (first book being Raven gate). He is an amazing author!


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04-12-14 11:37 PM
| ID: 1006744 | 66 Words

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It occurred to me that a large part of why democrats won't work with republicans (and vice versa) is because for the fact that they are democrats, they may feel like they have to. So I was thinking what if we abolished government parties? Would that remove a sense of division or just cause chaos? So would you abolish parties? What do you think about this?
I WAS THE FIRST
It occurred to me that a large part of why democrats won't work with republicans (and vice versa) is because for the fact that they are democrats, they may feel like they have to. So I was thinking what if we abolished government parties? Would that remove a sense of division or just cause chaos? So would you abolish parties? What do you think about this?


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04-12-14 11:15 PM
| ID: 1006728 | 14 Words

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I have a new favorite pokemon, rhydon, tying with victini and shaymin. Go rhydon!!!
I WAS THE FIRST
I have a new favorite pokemon, rhydon, tying with victini and shaymin. Go rhydon!!!


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04-12-14 11:01 PM
| ID: 1006722 | 40 Words

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TESTING NEW LAYOUT

yes, I used the basic layout maker... I wish I could use the advanced one...

Testing Text Color


Testing Font ( I wish there was a cursive like font..)

Test

Test

TEST

Comment and help welcome!
I WAS THE FIRST
TESTING NEW LAYOUT

yes, I used the basic layout maker... I wish I could use the advanced one...

Testing Text Color


Testing Font ( I wish there was a cursive like font..)

Test

Test

TEST

Comment and help welcome!



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04-08-14 11:54 PM
| ID: 1004589 | 11 Words

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You could always try asking on the vizzed generosity thread. https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=64716
You could always try asking on the vizzed generosity thread. https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=64716


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03-23-14 07:36 PM
| ID: 993876 | 24 Words

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awesomeguy279 : You trip and fall, breaking your neck. You get rushed to the hospital, but you end up dying. 
I am doing my homework. 
awesomeguy279 : You trip and fall, breaking your neck. You get rushed to the hospital, but you end up dying. 
I am doing my homework. 


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03-23-14 01:53 PM
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As a project for language arts I have to write a fictional story. I decided to post it here, so that hopefully I can get some suggestions, and stuff like that. This is all I have written so far, I might add more. Please do not copy, or use this anywhere else without my consent. Suggestions are always welcome!

Chapter 1:
The road was icy, coated in thick layer of ice cold ice. A puff of smoke escaped
from the lips of William Vindich, Will for short, as he waited for the blue, 12:00
bus. It was 12:15, the bus always late. William, a government official in
charge of deportations and executions, decided to have a “little talk” with the
driver sometime later.
The bus came screeching to a stop.
The doors open with a rusty squeak, like they hadn't been oiled in decades
(they actually hadn't been oiled for about 11 years). Nothing these days was
maintained, too expensive. It was a miracle that there were even buses anymore,
must have been salvaged from China, because of the words. Will put out the cigarette, then flicked it
casually to the ground. As Will walked into the bus, he gave the driver a kick.
That should teach the driver something, thought Will. The bus was full, so he
shoved a person onto the ground. The person shouldn’t even be sitting on a
seat. He was trash. Lower than him. You could tell from the branding on his
neck. Everyone had a brand on their neck, burned into your flesh since the day
after birth, with your ranking. He was at the bottom of the food chain, a 2,
while Will was an 8. He sometimes questioned why he even rode a stinking bus
filled with lower life forms.
The bus moved forward. And then it happened. The tires slid. People screamed. Crash.
Scream. Shout. Blood. Will’s vision was blurred as he started moving. **** that
ice. **** that ice. Those were the only words he could think. Over and over
again; **** that ice,**** that ice, **** that ice. Then everything was red,
orange and yellow. A wave of heat moved over his face.Then he blacked out.
Chapter 2:
He woke up feeling sore. The pain, very much still there, he could feel a sharp searing
pain, like a lit fuse traveling up his feeble and week spine, till his brain
blew up, like it couldn’t stand the pain. And there was no pain, his nerves
going numb. He heard sirens. A constant alarm, bringing him back to the world,
each time he dare to sink into a darkness, reside to death, give up. I am
alive, he thought. I will stay alive, he hoped. Stars danced before his blurry
eyes.
“You’re going to be alright. Just stay with me. Come one,
you can do this; we’re on the way to the E.R.,” said a voice besides him. It
was a girl, he could tell from the voice. She was trying to calm him to no avail.
His heart was thumping like a drum.
Thump.
Thump.
Thump.
Sirens wailing.
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Then he drifted, ever so slowly,
back to a death like trance. Perhaps sleep, or the moment before death, or a
permanent coma from which he will never awaken from.
Chapter 3:
On the opposite side of Antarctica, the world as we know of, Andap cradled his
knife. In the same city as Will, a scared little girl witnesses the death of her parents, an image that no one
should ever see, or live through. Especially in the way Prisoner-4279, the
little girl, parents had died. At the moment of death, there was ocean of glistening
blood, pooling around Prisoner-4279. Forced to watch her parents scared,
pleading, eyes being gouged out of their sockets, leaving nothing but two
gaping holes, surrounded by red. Their eyes were volcanoes oozing red liquid.
This was to serve as an example of what torture the American Oceanic council
could do, without harming a single hair on your body. The American Oceanic
council made up half of the government in Antarctica, representing the Americas
and the oceanic region, ever since the incident, every country moved to
Antarctica. In order to maintain a government in Antarctica, the previous ones
must be annihilated. The governments combined to form the Antarctican government.
Though only one government exists, there is a large division between councils;
the Eurasian council is in rivalry with the American Oceanic council. The
United Lesser countries council is allied with the American Oceanic council. The
African council was the most neutral of them all, yet not to be underestimated.
The American Oceanic council was by far the most powerful, but even it might
not be able to stand to the might of the combined strengths of the United
Lesser countries council and the Eurasian council.
The Prime Ruler, Zachariah Hairahcaz, from the African Council was sitting
leisurely in his 1 million dollar office, oblivious to the wrong doings of the
American Oceanic council (not that all American Oceanic council members were
bad, it was just that the good ones were killed off, or had an “accident” of
some sort. Poor Max Xavian had a particularly nasty accident while inspecting a
local meat factory. I would recommend not eating any hamburgers from McDonalds,
if you dislike cannibalism).
Zachariah walked out of his 1 million dollar office and into his son’s room to check up
on him. Andap Padna, a victim of schizophrenia, born into the new generation,
there has not been the medical supplies or technology to cure him; everything
was destroyed in the incident.
Now you may be wondering, what is “the incident” Well to explain it in short, the
incident started when the USA economy crashed into an irrecoverable pit of
debt. Shortly after, chaos and confusion fell onto the US. The panic spread to
other countries, as what was known as one of the largest countries in the world
collapsed. The United States were in ruins, with animalistic people pillaging
and raiding stores, and homes. It was estimated that only one fourth of the USA
survived. Next was China. Then Russia.
Shortly after a nuclear war broke out, other countries tried in a unified
attempt to stop the “War of the fallen”. They success fully negotiated peace,
and mankind fled to Antarctica, the rest of the world ruined by war, climate
change, and pollution. No one really knows the exact start of the war.
But some think the war was planned.
Chapter 4:
“You are weak and pitiful. You can barely lift
2 pounds, much less 50…” a voice whispered in the head of Andap.
“You are dumb. Stupid. An idiot. You
don’t deserve to hear my voice inside your head. I am stronger. I will control
you.”
“No! No, no, no, no, no, no…
GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!”
“I am stronger, I am stronger… not you… AHHH!!!”
“I can’t stand this!!!!”
“A pitiful attempt to get rid of me. I
will always be here. Because I am stronger. And you are weaker.”
“You are weaker… I am stronger… You
are weaker… I am stronger… Yes, lift the knife. Prove to me you are stronger.
Use the knife. Move the knife. Prove to me you are stronger and kill me. There
is only one way. This is how it must go. The only way to get rid of me. To beat
me. To be stronger. “
“You must kill yourself”
The knife moved.
The knife cut.
The knife stabbed.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________
“Andap!
Oh god… Oh god…” President Zachariah murmured, cradling Andap’s head in his
lap. He rushed to the phone, calling his emergency staff.
People rushed to Andap’s room. Sirens wailed as he was rushed to the emergency room.
“Good job… But it’s not enough. You must die.
I will make sure of it.”


Thanks for reading!
Don't forget to visit my poll to vote on who gets to die
Note: Different font is the voice inside Andap's head. He is schizophrenic.
https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=74037
2014©
Also looking for help choosing a title for this story. PM title ideas.
Don't forget to comment!
As a project for language arts I have to write a fictional story. I decided to post it here, so that hopefully I can get some suggestions, and stuff like that. This is all I have written so far, I might add more. Please do not copy, or use this anywhere else without my consent. Suggestions are always welcome!

Chapter 1:
The road was icy, coated in thick layer of ice cold ice. A puff of smoke escaped
from the lips of William Vindich, Will for short, as he waited for the blue, 12:00
bus. It was 12:15, the bus always late. William, a government official in
charge of deportations and executions, decided to have a “little talk” with the
driver sometime later.
The bus came screeching to a stop.
The doors open with a rusty squeak, like they hadn't been oiled in decades
(they actually hadn't been oiled for about 11 years). Nothing these days was
maintained, too expensive. It was a miracle that there were even buses anymore,
must have been salvaged from China, because of the words. Will put out the cigarette, then flicked it
casually to the ground. As Will walked into the bus, he gave the driver a kick.
That should teach the driver something, thought Will. The bus was full, so he
shoved a person onto the ground. The person shouldn’t even be sitting on a
seat. He was trash. Lower than him. You could tell from the branding on his
neck. Everyone had a brand on their neck, burned into your flesh since the day
after birth, with your ranking. He was at the bottom of the food chain, a 2,
while Will was an 8. He sometimes questioned why he even rode a stinking bus
filled with lower life forms.
The bus moved forward. And then it happened. The tires slid. People screamed. Crash.
Scream. Shout. Blood. Will’s vision was blurred as he started moving. **** that
ice. **** that ice. Those were the only words he could think. Over and over
again; **** that ice,**** that ice, **** that ice. Then everything was red,
orange and yellow. A wave of heat moved over his face.Then he blacked out.
Chapter 2:
He woke up feeling sore. The pain, very much still there, he could feel a sharp searing
pain, like a lit fuse traveling up his feeble and week spine, till his brain
blew up, like it couldn’t stand the pain. And there was no pain, his nerves
going numb. He heard sirens. A constant alarm, bringing him back to the world,
each time he dare to sink into a darkness, reside to death, give up. I am
alive, he thought. I will stay alive, he hoped. Stars danced before his blurry
eyes.
“You’re going to be alright. Just stay with me. Come one,
you can do this; we’re on the way to the E.R.,” said a voice besides him. It
was a girl, he could tell from the voice. She was trying to calm him to no avail.
His heart was thumping like a drum.
Thump.
Thump.
Thump.
Sirens wailing.
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Then he drifted, ever so slowly,
back to a death like trance. Perhaps sleep, or the moment before death, or a
permanent coma from which he will never awaken from.
Chapter 3:
On the opposite side of Antarctica, the world as we know of, Andap cradled his
knife. In the same city as Will, a scared little girl witnesses the death of her parents, an image that no one
should ever see, or live through. Especially in the way Prisoner-4279, the
little girl, parents had died. At the moment of death, there was ocean of glistening
blood, pooling around Prisoner-4279. Forced to watch her parents scared,
pleading, eyes being gouged out of their sockets, leaving nothing but two
gaping holes, surrounded by red. Their eyes were volcanoes oozing red liquid.
This was to serve as an example of what torture the American Oceanic council
could do, without harming a single hair on your body. The American Oceanic
council made up half of the government in Antarctica, representing the Americas
and the oceanic region, ever since the incident, every country moved to
Antarctica. In order to maintain a government in Antarctica, the previous ones
must be annihilated. The governments combined to form the Antarctican government.
Though only one government exists, there is a large division between councils;
the Eurasian council is in rivalry with the American Oceanic council. The
United Lesser countries council is allied with the American Oceanic council. The
African council was the most neutral of them all, yet not to be underestimated.
The American Oceanic council was by far the most powerful, but even it might
not be able to stand to the might of the combined strengths of the United
Lesser countries council and the Eurasian council.
The Prime Ruler, Zachariah Hairahcaz, from the African Council was sitting
leisurely in his 1 million dollar office, oblivious to the wrong doings of the
American Oceanic council (not that all American Oceanic council members were
bad, it was just that the good ones were killed off, or had an “accident” of
some sort. Poor Max Xavian had a particularly nasty accident while inspecting a
local meat factory. I would recommend not eating any hamburgers from McDonalds,
if you dislike cannibalism).
Zachariah walked out of his 1 million dollar office and into his son’s room to check up
on him. Andap Padna, a victim of schizophrenia, born into the new generation,
there has not been the medical supplies or technology to cure him; everything
was destroyed in the incident.
Now you may be wondering, what is “the incident” Well to explain it in short, the
incident started when the USA economy crashed into an irrecoverable pit of
debt. Shortly after, chaos and confusion fell onto the US. The panic spread to
other countries, as what was known as one of the largest countries in the world
collapsed. The United States were in ruins, with animalistic people pillaging
and raiding stores, and homes. It was estimated that only one fourth of the USA
survived. Next was China. Then Russia.
Shortly after a nuclear war broke out, other countries tried in a unified
attempt to stop the “War of the fallen”. They success fully negotiated peace,
and mankind fled to Antarctica, the rest of the world ruined by war, climate
change, and pollution. No one really knows the exact start of the war.
But some think the war was planned.
Chapter 4:
“You are weak and pitiful. You can barely lift
2 pounds, much less 50…” a voice whispered in the head of Andap.
“You are dumb. Stupid. An idiot. You
don’t deserve to hear my voice inside your head. I am stronger. I will control
you.”
“No! No, no, no, no, no, no…
GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!”
“I am stronger, I am stronger… not you… AHHH!!!”
“I can’t stand this!!!!”
“A pitiful attempt to get rid of me. I
will always be here. Because I am stronger. And you are weaker.”
“You are weaker… I am stronger… You
are weaker… I am stronger… Yes, lift the knife. Prove to me you are stronger.
Use the knife. Move the knife. Prove to me you are stronger and kill me. There
is only one way. This is how it must go. The only way to get rid of me. To beat
me. To be stronger. “
“You must kill yourself”
The knife moved.
The knife cut.
The knife stabbed.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________
“Andap!
Oh god… Oh god…” President Zachariah murmured, cradling Andap’s head in his
lap. He rushed to the phone, calling his emergency staff.
People rushed to Andap’s room. Sirens wailed as he was rushed to the emergency room.
“Good job… But it’s not enough. You must die.
I will make sure of it.”


Thanks for reading!
Don't forget to visit my poll to vote on who gets to die
Note: Different font is the voice inside Andap's head. He is schizophrenic.
https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=74037
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I've just recently read Navigating Early, by Clare Vanderpool and it was absolutely amazing! The way the author intertwines the story of Jack, Fisher and Pi was awe inspiring. I would Highly recommend this book.
I've just recently read Navigating Early, by Clare Vanderpool and it was absolutely amazing! The way the author intertwines the story of Jack, Fisher and Pi was awe inspiring. I would Highly recommend this book.


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I'm writing a story for language arts, and I want to kill one of the main characters in the book, but I'm having a tough choice on who. So that's why I'm asking the Vizzed community!!!
So who should i kill:
Will: A lazy, drunk, rude, mean, evil, government official that smokes, and then turns into a good guy, and quits smoking (but not drinking).
OR
Prisoner-4279: A extremely smart little girl, very shy, and scared. Has Post traumatic stress disorder after seeing her parents eyes being gouged out and then dying.
OR
Andap: A young boy, son of the President of Antarctica. Has schizophrenia, not smart, but extremely brave. He is also in love with his platinum knife.
Suggestions welcome!
To help with voting::
Quote from book for prisoner-4279:? In the same city as Will, a scared little
girl witnesses the death of her parents, an image that no one should ever see,
or live through. Especially in the way Prisoner-4279, the little girl, parents
had died. At the moment of death, there was ocean of glistening blood, pooling
around Prisoner-4279. Forced to watch her parents scared, pleading, eyes being
gouged out of their sockets, leaving nothing but two gaping holes, surrounded
by red. Their eyes were volcanoes oozing red liquid.
Quote for Andap (he lives through this every day:
???“You are weak and pitiful. You can barely lift 2 pounds, much less 50…” a voice whispered in the
head of Andap.
???“You are dumb. Stupid. An idiot. You
don’t deserve to hear my voice inside your head. I am stronger. I will control
you.”
Quote for Will : The bus moved forward. And then it happened. The tires slid. People screamed.
Crash. Scream. Shout. Blood. Will’s vision was blurred as he started moving.
**** that ice. **** that ice. Those were the only words he could think. Over
and over again; **** that ice, **** that ice,**** that ice. Then everything turned red, orange and yellow. A wave of heat moved over his
face. Then he blacked out.

See here for the full story (or at least what I have typed ) :   https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=74116
I'm writing a story for language arts, and I want to kill one of the main characters in the book, but I'm having a tough choice on who. So that's why I'm asking the Vizzed community!!!
So who should i kill:
Will: A lazy, drunk, rude, mean, evil, government official that smokes, and then turns into a good guy, and quits smoking (but not drinking).
OR
Prisoner-4279: A extremely smart little girl, very shy, and scared. Has Post traumatic stress disorder after seeing her parents eyes being gouged out and then dying.
OR
Andap: A young boy, son of the President of Antarctica. Has schizophrenia, not smart, but extremely brave. He is also in love with his platinum knife.
Suggestions welcome!
To help with voting::
Quote from book for prisoner-4279:? In the same city as Will, a scared little
girl witnesses the death of her parents, an image that no one should ever see,
or live through. Especially in the way Prisoner-4279, the little girl, parents
had died. At the moment of death, there was ocean of glistening blood, pooling
around Prisoner-4279. Forced to watch her parents scared, pleading, eyes being
gouged out of their sockets, leaving nothing but two gaping holes, surrounded
by red. Their eyes were volcanoes oozing red liquid.
Quote for Andap (he lives through this every day:
???“You are weak and pitiful. You can barely lift 2 pounds, much less 50…” a voice whispered in the
head of Andap.
???“You are dumb. Stupid. An idiot. You
don’t deserve to hear my voice inside your head. I am stronger. I will control
you.”
Quote for Will : The bus moved forward. And then it happened. The tires slid. People screamed.
Crash. Scream. Shout. Blood. Will’s vision was blurred as he started moving.
**** that ice. **** that ice. Those were the only words he could think. Over
and over again; **** that ice, **** that ice,**** that ice. Then everything turned red, orange and yellow. A wave of heat moved over his
face. Then he blacked out.

See here for the full story (or at least what I have typed ) :   https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=74116


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I would like to enter the drawing, if available. Thank you. 
I would like to enter the drawing, if available. Thank you. 


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I LOVE crushing ice. I always crush ice when there is any. There something satisfying hearing a crackling and crunching of feet under your feet. Sliding on ice is fun too.
I LOVE crushing ice. I always crush ice when there is any. There something satisfying hearing a crackling and crunching of feet under your feet. Sliding on ice is fun too.


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I think of a large object imploding on itself causing mass destruction.
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I think of a large object imploding on itself causing mass destruction.


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Fightorace and twiddlebros win the viz! I will send the Viz soon.
This thread can be closed.
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Fightorace and twiddlebros win the viz! I will send the Viz soon.
This thread can be closed.


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First two people to post here gets 1000 viz!!!!
I've decided that I don't have much use for Viz so I'm giving away some!
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I've decided that I don't have much use for Viz so I'm giving away some!


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I would find my family and friends, raid a store for suplies, and get a boat and go to Alaska. Boats are probably the safest way to travel since zombies can't swim. I would then find some people a try to form some sort of walled of city where zombies can't get in and then start to go find and kill zombies.
I would find my family and friends, raid a store for suplies, and get a boat and go to Alaska. Boats are probably the safest way to travel since zombies can't swim. I would then find some people a try to form some sort of walled of city where zombies can't get in and then start to go find and kill zombies.


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I almost forgot about this thread! I don't think that I'm going to continue this thread since I might be kind of busy. So this thread can be closed.
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I almost forgot about this thread! I don't think that I'm going to continue this thread since I might be kind of busy. So this thread can be closed.


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Testing layout. Comments would be appreciated!
that's a lot of vulpix
Testing layout. Comments would be appreciated!



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