Once again, you have produced a review that is too short. Your observations on the game are too general to know what it is about. What makes it so forgettable? Are the graphics dull? Is the music ear-destroying? Don't be shy to speak you mind

As Janus stated, I would highly recommend you go into greater detail in discussing the good/bad aspects of this game. What makes it so memorable or addicting? Why does it stand out from other games of its kind? You seem to have a pretty solid viewpoint on how you feel about that game, but you need to take it a step further and cover how all the parts of the game contribute to the wow factor of the game as a whole. 

So far, I would consider this to be an introduction to your review. From here, you should score and examine each category of the game. Make sure that the reader understands your thoughts/feelings on this game through what you write about it in each of the categories. As far as organizing your review goes, just take it section by section. I would recommend you break your review down into paragraphs, but the style you choose is totally up to you. Just keep in mind that other people will be reading your review, so avoid putting everything into one massive block of text. 

This isn't meant to act as a means of discouraging you from reviewing. In fact, I want you to use this to your advantage to help improve your future reviews. Keep at it, and I'm sure you will see improvement in your work in no time. 

As everyone else here has stated, in the future, you should try to add more detail to your reviews. The longer and more detailed your review is, the more Viz and cp you'll earn from it. Also, you should be sure to separate your review into categories such as

Graphics: 10/10 *then explain why you think the graphics deserve that story here*

If you do that with each category, your reviews will look a lot more organized.