Hey, good to see your review! You didn't repeat but once:
"Here are tons of reasons why and I will explain it!"
"Let's talk about another reason!"

That's all I could really find Anyways, good review man, it's good to see that my friends are very enthiousiastic about writing reviews, keep up the good work

As much of a fan as I am of Smash Bros, let me say this.

Brawl sucks. No offense, but bear with me here: The game is slow, the cutscenes of the SubSpace have been found to be the reason Wi-Fi sucks, and that Wi-Fi for the Wii and NDS had shut down roughly 2 exact months ago.

I need to really ask you this:

Why did you not talk about Wi-Fi in any way at all? It was good for taunt parties, but why did you not know earlier that Wi-Fi shutdown? I hated Brawl every day ever since the shutdown, because there's no variety for me outside of Wi-Fi, because what would you rather do? Either play against CPUs that taunt you and gang up in FFA, or play other games you like until Smash 4 comes out? I'm playing Melee and Sonic Heroes, including Sonic Mega Collection's Mean Bean Machine game.

Sorry about that. Nice review though.

Stevie 764 : I never tried WIFI for SSBB before, even before the shutdown. I was originally going to try it with some users in Vizzed but we failed :C. Sorry if it bother you when I didn't talk about Wi-fi. Without the Wi-Fi, I still play against CPU on the hardest difficulty

greenluigi : The bad side of playing against the AI, is that you develop tactics that only work on computers and not professionals like me, as a semi-pro wiimote player of Brawl. My jump button on the wiimote broke. It's up on the horizontal + pad that broke. The other d-pad buttons work. I can do techs that work on wiimotes, like boost grabs, Quick Attack Cancel, and even Squirtle's turnaround cancelled Up Smash. It was discovered in early March, not enough time for people online to see it in action, except for me. I did it a lot as Squirtle's in taunt parties in fighting crashes, and also in those special mock-up fights. Those times.

About the Wi-Fi, back in January, me and Matthew2321 did some daily friend battles. That is when I was introduced to its infamous button latency issues that anger millions of players. I would mostly lose to him because of said issue. Happens on all copies of Brawl. Also, we would try HRC, but because of my friend's random actions and the said problem, we couldn't get a good strat, except for him using Bowser's flamethrower and me as dark Falco using D-Smash to then have me swing. Got like maybe 3-4k feet. My HRC total offline is almost 82k feet. Exactly 81.7k feet.

This review is better than your first one! Again, one thing you shouldn't do is rate the game a 10 if you didn't rate every category a 10. Excluding that problem, this review is fine in my opinion.

greenluigi : the story should not have been a 9 in my opinion. It doesn't really have much of one. Besides "robot men destroy worlds, and nintendo bad guys team up to fight good guys until blue guy comes.  Then they beat him".

Only thing i found difficult about brawl is the intense mode boss rush... since tthey can kill you in a couple hits. Also i can take a team of level 9 CPUs fairly easily... And im not as good as stevie or faded warrior.
 
Besides that it was a great review though!
 
Stevie 764 : Reminded me of the fact that M2K only used to play against CPUs all the time so when he started competitive playing he wasn't that good... Wish we could have a few matches in brawl or melee. Would be fun to have a jigglypuff ditto match.

mourinhosgum : We could ditto in SSB4 when the Wii U version comes out. Brawl Wi-Fi is dead since 5/20, and it would be nice to play Melee without going to your house if my old computer could actually run dolphin with working graphics. The graphics are mostly 95% white, and the speed was 20 FPS. That was my bad computer. It couldn't run MUPEN the Nintendo 64 emulator at even 45 FPS with the TAS input plugin windows open.

Stevie 764 : Wat if they nerf jiggs even more? dolphin won't run on my computer either so... Are you getting both Sm4sh's?

mourinhosgum : If Jigglypuff gets nerfed one more time, I'm going to make some vizzed news that Jigglypuff got nerfed, if the case is her rest nerf. If that's the case, I'll be asking all Jigglypuff fans to not use Jiggly because of her rest nerf. Although, I'll hate to see her drop to low tier if she keeps her nerf. Although Sakurai said in the April direct, all the veteran characters will be buffed, like Lucario. So look on the bright side, she'll be on the top-mid tier soon enough once we figure how to combo to rest with her.

juuldude : Found you 
I lost 50 points for being too short, uh seen any good movies?

Nice job on the review, you were very detailed and also very passionate about what you said all throughout which only makes the review better in my opinion. As tornado said, I think it is great that you compared it to the other smash bros games so that it gives us something to judge and compare it by.  One thing I would suggest is that you put the categories above each section rather than in the same section because it makes it a bit more difficult to read, but it isn't an issue at all. 

Content wise, you went into a great amount of depth with everything and you also provided a good amount of reasoning with each score you gave to the categories, and as long as you do this with each and every review, I don't think anyone can ask any more of you when it comes to reviews. Keep up the good work and keep making more reviews like this. 

Green that is a good review buddy & Good Job & keep up the work