Playing this game when I younger I always spent hours roaming with my digimon and would never get bored. All round a decent game
Graphics: 8/10- Compared to modern games the graphics are a little lack luster, however back in the PlayStation's hay day these graphics were reasonable and got the job done as far as capture the imaginations of the audience with digimon that looked close to those in the TV show
Sound: 9/10- All areas have their own unique music and are easily distinctive  from others. No two are alike
Addictiveness: 9/10- It is easy to spend ages in game training your digimon to a high level and getting the him to digivolve to your desired digimon as well as traveling to recruit and fight new digimon
Story: 7/10- Quite basic, just travel around recruiting digimon for no apparent reason. Although as a kid it did keep you hooked. 
Depth: 8/10- Offers 100 digimon to recruit with some require a great deal of work to be done in order to recruit them. Has a few post game activities as well.
Difficulty: 7/10- Can remember some digimon being tricky to recruit or it being hard to digivolve into certain digimon if requirements were not spot on

The story rating is wrong cause if you actually played the game you would know you are going around the island to save the island from disaster and to create a town where digimon can live in peace 

Ok. Not terrible for a first review. I think it needs a little bit of work though. You broke it up into categories, which is good, but you really only wrote one sentence for each category. Try to really express yourself and your feeling about the game in detail. Give the reader as much information as you can. Also, try to add some more opinion into it. It is ok to show bias in a review. This is not bad for a first review. I have seen much, much worse. You just need to expand on your points a little bit more.