Just like the manga

04-18-14 09:35 AM

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first Review awesome! Anyways so speaking about the game, I love it it's still beta so I get how it's going get a lot longer! Overall the games was a 9.8 for me I love how it's just like the manga , you start off with a non-starter it's amazing the story was perfect because O certainly loved the manga, and the creator even said he might make the other games from Jhoto and Hoenn which is something I'm looking for. There were a couple of glitches in the game since it's not yet finished, of course it's gonna have crappy fire red graphics the Addictiveness was a 10 out of 10 because well i wanted to finish it to see how far it got through the manga, and i can't wait till beta 8 but I am gonna be dissapointed because all of my data is gonna be gone, so David07 if you see this review please make a way i can get all of my data back

thnx for uploading a ton games David07 -titanior

first Review awesome! Anyways so speaking about the game, I love it it's still beta so I get how it's going get a lot longer! Overall the games was a 9.8 for me I love how it's just like the manga , you start off with a non-starter it's amazing the story was perfect because O certainly loved the manga, and the creator even said he might make the other games from Jhoto and Hoenn which is something I'm looking for. There were a couple of glitches in the game since it's not yet finished, of course it's gonna have crappy fire red graphics the Addictiveness was a 10 out of 10 because well i wanted to finish it to see how far it got through the manga, and i can't wait till beta 8 but I am gonna be dissapointed because all of my data is gonna be gone, so David07 if you see this review please make a way i can get all of my data back

thnx for uploading a ton games David07 -titanior

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04-18-14 02:17 PM

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Well decent review but it seems as if there was not enough actual detail. It seemed as if you did not use enough periods too. Kind of like one long run on sentence. Maybe you should try to improve on those and putting the subjects in to organized form. Like instead of doing this

The sound was just awesome and so was the graphics. (example do not really make it so short in each column.)

do this

graphics:
The graphics were really good. (again just an example).

I hope this advice helped you for your next review.

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04-18-14 03:48 PM

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As awesomeguy said, you should try setting out your reviews with paragraphs and examining each individual part in careful detail.
However, to be a good reviewer you've mainly got to focus on the negatives. Games should always have positives (if they don't, burn them) so you should take a look at the negatives instead of praising the game for the good things. Sometimes you may notice your favourite game was actually a bad game if you review the bad points.

But anyway, it's a decent review, but you can still improve. Good job.

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