Hi everybody!
Today I'm here to show you a legendary game:Fire emblem:monshou no Nazo.(A.K.A:Fire emblem 3)
Fire emblem 3 has an awesome start because you have 2 books:a remake of the original fire emblem and fire emblem 3.
I will try to talk about that in general:AWESOME!!
First because the story is really deep with a big world and big kingdoms.
The music are battles music because (if you didn't already know) the game is based on the battle.
Simple:two teams:good guys and bad guys (DUH!).You are controlling the good guys (DUH!) and you have special things to do like killing a special boss or seizing a special place.
The game is really hard because you have an army but they are not that powerful (in the other fire emblem game you have one guy who can kill 16 guys (really!) alone)
In this game you have special characters that MUST SURVIVE!!Because the other characters are not that important.....and this is the special thing that this game has. If someone in your team die.........well......is dead. (DUH!) But really dead and he won't be able to help you anymore and THAT makes the game insanely difficult. You can also change the graphics to normal or real (no really real but......better), and this game is ADDICTIVE!! If you start it you will be like me: writing a bad review on this awesome game just to tell how awesome he is!!!!
Well there's nothing else to say.Try this game......it's so awesome.

This review is pretty messy.
Try dividing it up into sections, like:
Graphics: Text here.

But it's decent for a first post.
Speaking of first post, welcome to Vizzed!

Thank you,now I'll do it better.

I have to agree with Boxia on what you should do and I would also recommend not putting (DUH) after everything. It is not very professional and it is annoying to see that after everything.