To Note: 1: not for complete strangers to Pokémon. 2: This is my 1st review so don't be surprised if this isn't the best review ever.     Pokémon Fire Red Omega is overall an amazing game for a ton of reasons.
The reason why I rated the graphics a 10 is not for overworld sprites, but for the battle animations. Lately I'd been playing Pokémon White and the battle sprites on here were less pixelated than on White and this was a game made eight years ago.
As for sound, I gave it a 9 because compared to the trumpet heavy music of Emerald, this game's music was wonderful. All things considered, there were a few spots where the music became way too repetitive and I'd just shut the volume off.
Addictiveness I gave a 10. I thought this fit because there are so many different Pokémon before you even reach the first gym that you could build teams out of and I found myself playing this for blocks of 3 or 4 hours at a time. I enjoyed the fact that you could get some of the most overpowered Pokémon without even having to look very hard in any area. A great example being Bagon and Larvitar in Mt. Moon.
For story I rated it an 8. Considering this game has no changes to the story at all and this is the same old "10 year old kid wants to become a Pokémon master but has to fight an evil team and his/her rival along the way." story set up I really couldn't give it a better rating than an 8.
Depth got a 10 from me. This is because like I said earlier, there is such a massive group of Pokémon offered to you there are countless teams you could make even very early on in the game. Plus there is at least 12 hours of gameplay without really "Catching them all" or closer to 17 or 18 if you spend time searching every corner of the Kanto region for anything there could be.
Difficulty only got a 6. This is because it is harder than the regular Fire Red, but with some time spent grinding your team you can get through this game with few difficulties.
Overall I think this game deserves a 10 because it is a massive improvement on the original Fire Red and is a truly new experience for any Pokémon battler.

Very good first review. If you can get over the 500 word mark, then you will get a lot more Viz. Try to get over 500 words next time. Still a very solid review. Keep it up.

Not bad but I will tell you it gets hard trying to read this review because it seems like you have a giant paragraph for a review. So what I'm trying to say is that next time when your making a review space out the paragraphs when making one. You did good with the details and you did good getting at least over 400 words which makes it a decent review. So keep up the good work when making a review!

Not bad, but i agree, be sure to space your words, and make it a bit longer, but other than that, a good review. nice job, man.

Not too bad, but it is a little hard to read. To become a great reviewer, take a look at this.
https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=58382

edm322 : Not a bad review for your first review! You could space it out more, but it is still okay! That looks pretty good, I may try out the game, jusging by your review!

Thanks everyone for all of the input. I'll put it to good use when I find another game that I want to review. I gotta say, it's nice to see that other than spacing issues that my review was for the most part good.

The review was very well done.
However, I think you could have gone into more detail about the Pokemon, and the various other changes made from Pokemon Fire Red to Pokemon Fire Red Omega.