Pokémon Emerald 386 is awesome but addicting. It can be challenging but it is really fun once you try to collect every single Pokémon and beat the game. Battles can be difficult but you have to go back and try again. You may loose your money but once you level up enough, you can get the challenges done. The story is still the same but over all I really enjoyed Pokémon Emerald 386.

The game takes place in the Honen Region and you travel through each town and collect Pokémon through the adventure of your character. Whether you are a boy or girl, the story doesn't matter what you are. Each town has a group of Pokémon you have to catch so you can get each 386, some are harder to get than others. As you travel and collect, the story progresses until you challenge the gyms and Pokémon league. Once done you can go to the difficult battle frontier to collect the symbols.

During the final part of the story, you should try collecting all and every single Pokémon because some don't come back at the end though. So be sure to collect as you travel.

It seems that you could have added a little more details yet you did do an O.K job on making this so i'm guessing this is your'e first first (i'm guessing) anyway good job.

Hello!

I'm gonna review your review. 

I thought addicting was a good thing. The way you said it made it look like it was a negative comment. Fair enough, addiction can be a bad thing. But, why was it addicting? What made it so awesome? I love how you started with that. You jumped straight into the review. Still, you need to develop your points more; this will definitely improve your writing abilities and you will therefore be able to write better reviews. 

Why was it challenging? What made the game challenging? What made it so fun? See, developing your points can increase the amount of detail in your review. If I was writing this review I would have said:

This game was very challenging. There were so many puzzles and quests in the game, and that made it very difficult. "GYM NAME" was very difficult because the leader's Pokémon were very high-leveled. My Pokémon weren't as effective as they were previously.

I changed a 4 word sentence into two full sentences. Development is key in reviews.

Having said that, your grammar was very impressive and so was your spelling. There were a few flaws here and there, but overall, this was a good review. Keep up the good work, and keep writing reviews!