I'm here to review All Grown Up:Express Yourself.
Okay we all know the Rugrats,but do you do guys remember the show when they turned 10 11 12 and 13?I watch it almost everyday!

Graphics-6
The graphics were.....Okay at best.I've seen better for the GBA.Now,don't get me wrong!There not terrible!There just not the best graphics in the world.

Sound-8
The music and sounds are great!I really like the music when your playing Volleyball with someone in the game!And the sound in the main menu,when your walking through the mall area,the town area,and school area is great!And memorable!You even can set the music you want playing in the main menu!

Addictiveness-7
This is a game you'll find yourself coming back to if your a Rugrats or an All Grown Up Fan,But if your just giving this game a shot to see how it is,you might not come back to it all that often.

Story-5
This story is Mediocore.You Play as Angelica Pickles,A bossy,mean,13 year old Girl who is the school reporter and get stories from the other pre-teens of the show.(Tommy,Lil,Kimi,Dil,etc.)She get's the stories,and her friend,Harold(Who has a major crush on her)writes them.
So yeah,Basically,I'd rather have a better story in game like this.

Depth-8
This game is a little long,but if you don't know what your doing,it can take a while.There are 8 missions in whole in which you need to go around the mall,school,or the town talking to the other Rugrats.And even when you beat the game,there's still a lot to do!You can customize some of the people in the menu,and you can choose your background,and the rugrat you want standing near the menu,And it has some replay value!During the story people make you do mini-games!You can replay those mini-games in the menu and you can unlock many different pic of the Rugrats to put next to the menu!

Difficulty-4
This game is not that hard,the only thing that was kinda hard was The Volleyball mini-game at times.

Overall-7.5
This game is pretty good,but I'm gonna warn you,before you play you must be into the Rugrats and or All Grown Up to fully understand the concept.Thanks for reading,and I hope you have a good time playing this game.

Hey, this isn't a bad review. You did a good job categorizing it so neatly. The main issue here though, is that you didn't put a space between the punctuation marks and the next word after them.

Keep on writing, though. You're doing good.

WaysideFan2002 :  Hello There! .. How are you? I'm great ..

This was not a bad review! I like how you started with a really small introduction, highlighting what game you are going to be reviewing. It wasn't too long, so it really was beneficial to put it there.

I would have to agree with Eirinn, you didn't leave a space between your punctuation and the next sentence. This is crucial, as it allows the reader to take a break and think about what they just read. Without spaces, the sentence just runs into the next, no time for breaks or to take anything in.

Your grammar needs a bit of tweaking. You need to know the differences between 'there' and 'they're'. 

There was a fair amount of detail in this review, and with a little bit more effort, you can improve! More detail = more compliments.

Good luck in your next review!