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The battle on S.S Anne - The raticate incident

 

06-27-13 06:38 AM
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Almost everyone has heard of Gary Oak's raticate.
I'll tell you how it happened in Gary Oak's perspective.

Gary :
As I walked into S.S Anne, hearing about Red coming here I decided I wanted to battle him.
Showing my S.S Anne ticket to the coast guard he led me in the ship.
This is when the incident happened.

Red was walking down the ship after beating several trainers in their rooms.
A mankey and a Charmeleon was walking with him.

"Hey Red! Nice seeing you here!" I said.
"I saw 40 Pokémon already! They are in my pokedex!"
"Well done..." Said Red impatiently
Then the battle started.

I sent out my pidgeotto and he sent out his Charmeleon.
"Use gust!" I shouted.
It sended Charmeleon onto the wall but he was still up!
"Use ember!" Red commanded to his Charmeleon.
It sent pidgeotto back and 1 hit Ko-ed him!
"Aww, man." I said.
I sent out wartortle, as it is super effective against Red Charmeleon.
"Use water gun!" I commanded wartortle.
This ko-ed Charmeleon, his starter was beaten.
He sent out a vileplume, and this was bad.
Vileplume used mega drain on my Wartortle! I needed to do something. But it ko-ed Wartortle. It was one of my best Pokémon!
I sent out Kadabra as he was my second best Pokémon.
"Use Confusion!"
This heavily damaged vileplume but it was still standing.
Kadabra had a low HP stat, so I had to be careful.
Vileplume used razor leaf, leaving Kadabra with 21 HP left!
"USE CONFUSION ONE LAST TIME!" This hit Vileplume and Ko-ed it!
Red still had his mankey.
He sent out his mankey and told him to use "Ice punch!"
This sent Kadabra on the floor Ko-ed!
"My last Pokémon... Raticate! I choose you!"
Red was surprised as he thought it was a weak Pokémon.
But I believed in it.

"Raticate use quick attack!" I commanded!
"Use low kick!" Red told mankey.
Then bam!
A white line zipped through both of them!
Suddenly, a foot mark was on Raticates face and leg.
He could not move!
Then he dropped to the ground and he... died.
No pulse or nothing.
"I hate you Red! Look what have you done!"
I ran away in anger.
And I swore my revenge, I will do the same to him...
Then I got a Growlithe, a successor and replacement for Raticate.
He will get the revenge on red.
Now, it was time I buried my Raticate at Lavender town.
All of this, just for one HM Cut.
Why Red!

This is my story.
I hope you enjoyed it.
Almost everyone has heard of Gary Oak's raticate.
I'll tell you how it happened in Gary Oak's perspective.

Gary :
As I walked into S.S Anne, hearing about Red coming here I decided I wanted to battle him.
Showing my S.S Anne ticket to the coast guard he led me in the ship.
This is when the incident happened.

Red was walking down the ship after beating several trainers in their rooms.
A mankey and a Charmeleon was walking with him.

"Hey Red! Nice seeing you here!" I said.
"I saw 40 Pokémon already! They are in my pokedex!"
"Well done..." Said Red impatiently
Then the battle started.

I sent out my pidgeotto and he sent out his Charmeleon.
"Use gust!" I shouted.
It sended Charmeleon onto the wall but he was still up!
"Use ember!" Red commanded to his Charmeleon.
It sent pidgeotto back and 1 hit Ko-ed him!
"Aww, man." I said.
I sent out wartortle, as it is super effective against Red Charmeleon.
"Use water gun!" I commanded wartortle.
This ko-ed Charmeleon, his starter was beaten.
He sent out a vileplume, and this was bad.
Vileplume used mega drain on my Wartortle! I needed to do something. But it ko-ed Wartortle. It was one of my best Pokémon!
I sent out Kadabra as he was my second best Pokémon.
"Use Confusion!"
This heavily damaged vileplume but it was still standing.
Kadabra had a low HP stat, so I had to be careful.
Vileplume used razor leaf, leaving Kadabra with 21 HP left!
"USE CONFUSION ONE LAST TIME!" This hit Vileplume and Ko-ed it!
Red still had his mankey.
He sent out his mankey and told him to use "Ice punch!"
This sent Kadabra on the floor Ko-ed!
"My last Pokémon... Raticate! I choose you!"
Red was surprised as he thought it was a weak Pokémon.
But I believed in it.

"Raticate use quick attack!" I commanded!
"Use low kick!" Red told mankey.
Then bam!
A white line zipped through both of them!
Suddenly, a foot mark was on Raticates face and leg.
He could not move!
Then he dropped to the ground and he... died.
No pulse or nothing.
"I hate you Red! Look what have you done!"
I ran away in anger.
And I swore my revenge, I will do the same to him...
Then I got a Growlithe, a successor and replacement for Raticate.
He will get the revenge on red.
Now, it was time I buried my Raticate at Lavender town.
All of this, just for one HM Cut.
Why Red!

This is my story.
I hope you enjoyed it.
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(edited by GamingMonkey on 06-30-13 05:25 AM)    

06-30-13 01:02 AM
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I always enjoy a short story, so yeah, it kept my attention. Good work.

However, I would like to ask you to edit your post. You swore a few times, and swearing isn't really permitted in the forums. So, if you could remove those three words, that would be great.
Thanks, and enjoy your time in the forums!
I always enjoy a short story, so yeah, it kept my attention. Good work.

However, I would like to ask you to edit your post. You swore a few times, and swearing isn't really permitted in the forums. So, if you could remove those three words, that would be great.
Thanks, and enjoy your time in the forums!
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I really liked the story, and it would have been so much better for me to read if not for the grammatical errors. Edit it and run it through a spell check, would you? That way it will look a lot better.
I really liked the story, and it would have been so much better for me to read if not for the grammatical errors. Edit it and run it through a spell check, would you? That way it will look a lot better.
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06-30-13 05:26 AM
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Eirinn : I removed the swearing.
Thanks for the feedback though!
epic-san : Corrected everything.
Eirinn : I removed the swearing.
Thanks for the feedback though!
epic-san : Corrected everything.
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Thanks. I hope you write some more. I'd like to read it if you do.
Thanks. I hope you write some more. I'd like to read it if you do.
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I like the story, but it doesn't make much sense. I mean, in the battle with Blue on the S.S.Anne, the Raticate is already gone from his team. So how could Red have killed it?
I like the story, but it doesn't make much sense. I mean, in the battle with Blue on the S.S.Anne, the Raticate is already gone from his team. So how could Red have killed it?
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zelda2 :
Actually, according to bulbapedia and my experience.
He did have his raticate with him.
That was just on yellow he did not have one.
zelda2 :
Actually, according to bulbapedia and my experience.
He did have his raticate with him.
That was just on yellow he did not have one.
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Its a good story maybe you should make more 
Its a good story maybe you should make more 
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B619ook :
Maybe I need to find a Pokémon myth.
And write about it like I did about this.
Yeah, I will make more sooner or later.
B619ook :
Maybe I need to find a Pokémon myth.
And write about it like I did about this.
Yeah, I will make more sooner or later.
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