andy1234 : Hello there.
How are you?
I'm great.
This was a very detailed descr
iption and explanation of the features within the game, which was very good. You took into account the Graphics, the sound, the replay value, the difficulty, overall etc. Very excellent.
However, having said that, you didn't really develop your points as much and you lines were at times, very basic. Also, there were a few grammatical errors, nothing to get too annoyed about, but just something to work on. For example:
'I saw playthroughs of this game on youtube and the game looked fun and easy enough but when I played it I kept dying and getting game overs a lot that I quit.'
You could have really developed on this and turned this into a more advanced sentence.
'I have seen playthroughs of this game on the website 'Youtube' and the game appeared to be really exciting and exhilarating, and also very simplistic. However, when I attempted to play this game it wasn't as paltry as I initially thought. Let's just say, my death ratio was obscenely higher than I intended it to be'
A sentence like that would blow my mind, I would be extremely impressed if I seen in a review. That's just something to work. Better words and structure can greatly impact on a person's perception of a review.
Also, you should have broken down your review. Structuring your review is a key element when writing a review, it separates 'good' reviews from 'great' reviews. Perhaps, you could break down the sections - game-play, grammar, sound, difficulty etc.
Overall, this was a very good review and it really deserves credit, so well done. If you work on what I have said your reviews will become brilliant and you'll certainly attract plenty of attention!
Thanks for writing this review.