Overall, an AMAZING game. But I can't seem to get past the part with the giant piranha plants.

Well you did a nice job with your review making sure to add everything inside your review. But I could be better if you do some things in your next review.

First you might wanna start out by making your beginning sound interesting like say for instance you were doing a review on Punch-Out on the NES, you could start out like this. *Opponent falls to the floor* 1,2,3.......8,9,10.. KO *Crowd Applauds* That's it's time to step into the ring and face off against the boxing legend from the 80's Mike Tyson. If you do something like that it will make your beginning sound interesting and will make people want to keep reading.

Second, when you talk about sound, addictiveness, and difficulty. For sound you might wanna talk about what your personal favorite songs were in the game, for addictiveness you might wanna talk about how you felt when you started playing it or when you finished the game and let the people reading know if you'd ever play it again, finally for difficulty you might wanna talk about how the difficulty was for you when you played the game like what bosses were hard for you to defeat.

Third, include yourself inside your review. Since it's your own review you can write what you feel should be in the review as long as it stays in line with the Posting Rules shown on the left side when you're making your review. If you feel it's a game you won't forget and you'll like for a long time you can include that in your review.

Lastly, when you're writing the ending for your review. Just like with the beginning you wanna make it sound interesting you use a quote from the game to end the review or explain something that makes some bosses easier like for Lava Piranha if you keep using Snowman dolls on him when he is on fire in his 2 form he will become alot easier. 

Now you don't have to listen to what I say you can write your reviews how you want, all I'm trying to do is help give you ideas for your future reviews. Still did a good job on the review though.

sonicthehedgehog57 : Thank you for telling me what you thought. I will be sure to use some of the tips you gave me.

No problem, I just wanted to help you out so people will really like your reviews and so you'll be able to earn more Viz for writing more about each option.

I was always a big fan of Paper Mario when I first got it, I must've played through it 10 times between obtaining the game and it's sequel's release. I loved the RPG elements, especially the battle system, but the classic Mario fashion of going through dungeons. The badges are what made the battle system deep and entertaining - most RPGs don't have anything like that. Admittedly, it has nothing on Thousand Year Door, and the puzzles can become stale if you get stuck on one area for too long. But overall, it;s a very fun game to play. Try the other games in the series too.

earthwarrior : aha a rewiev from paper mario ?

Great review . Paper Mario is my Third favorite Mario game.

That's a really great review but its not suprising since you wrote it

austipokedude : Thanks. It was the second review I ever wrote and I think I did as good job.

This was a really good review. Good job.