~Pokémon Leaf Green~
Pokémon Leaf Green Is a fun amazing addicting game! With Professor Oaks men giving you items of how many Pokémon you have, from the tough rival and gym leaders. This remake of Blue is the best! I do have Leaf green, but I picked Squirtle on Vizzed Board I used Bulbasaur.Currently I'm on victory road with my unstoppable team. The Legendary on hear are just the same as blue, the only 
Legendary I have caught are Zapdos, Mewtwo, and Articuno. When I first played this game it was hard for me but sooner as I progested I was getting better and better. I do reconfigured this game to others. I hope you will enjoy this game.

Overall is a 10: The best remake other then blue was awesome also.

Graphics is a 6: Pokémon was a big issue to me. The Charizard in here had 4 teeth when its head was in the air it border me, of how it looked so ugly :l. Also the back side does not look awful just that Game Freak should had did a little more detail. The shading of the Pokémon was white and it was like sunny outside I guess? Because its like a reflect towards onto the Pokémon. But other graphics of the buildings and everything else is great.
 
Sound is a 7: Unlike the other Pokémon games this games sound was a bit bad. I didn't like most of it.

Addictiveness is a solid 10: This game made me come back after I toke a break from it. I couldn't hold back on leveling up my Pokémon and learn new moves, also meeting and beating new charticters in the game. Plus I could not just stop after I had my 6th gym badge

Story is a 8: Does not give more of a story that brings everything together like sort of a puzzle.

Depth is a 7: Just does not offer more in the game like the 3 islands. Just that the cities look long apart but turns out they are close together. On the 3 Islands they were very small for giving more of a adventure.

Difficulty is a 6: The gyms your rival and the eltle 4 was the hardest in the game. Trainers were mostly where you could train your Pokémon so you could beat the eltle 4. This game overall is an epic amazing adventure of a young boy setting off into a world he does not yet know of.
~SmobblePants

That was pretty good but I suggest that for your next review try to improve your grammar, and make a little more sense in your sentences, I'm not bashing you, I'm giving you suggestions to help you.
Gl for your next reviews
And good job on this one!

Thank you very much I will improve! I know I have some words in there that are not very great. I happily think I will do even bigger reviews to have people try out the game. Because mostly that is what reviews is right? For people who have not played it yet and to see how much of a game it is.  

Pretty decent review. I like that you at least went through the effort of breaking it down into the different categories you were rating such as graphics, sound, addictiveness etc. Most people don't even try to make it easier to read. On the whole a pretty good review. It does show a bit of bias towards the series so just for future reference, so you can become better at reviewing, try to go into a bit more detail what you like and don't like and use a little bit better reasoning. For example when you were talking about it being the best remake of blue. Its always nice when reading a review to explain your opinion a bit more.

But other than that it was pretty good. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing it