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My first poem to put on Vizzed

 

02-19-11 08:00 PM
Scarecrowcalls is Offline
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Scarecrowcalls
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night and day screams all day
you try to run
you cannot see
vanquishing in my mind
rattle together
birds of a feather
Screams in pleasure and in pain
now and forever not forgotten
cold breathe on yours
no escape
you are the one
for me to eviscerate

night has come and gone
nothing here to see
I come to you
find your grave
no eternity in light for you
night and day screams all day
you try to run
you cannot see
vanquishing in my mind
rattle together
birds of a feather
Screams in pleasure and in pain
now and forever not forgotten
cold breathe on yours
no escape
you are the one
for me to eviscerate

night has come and gone
nothing here to see
I come to you
find your grave
no eternity in light for you

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02-22-11 05:35 AM
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Thats pretty good for your first time man good job


Thats pretty good for your first time man good job

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02-22-11 06:35 AM
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Sounds pretty good...but what's it about? I'm kind of confused.
Sounds pretty good...but what's it about? I'm kind of confused.

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02-22-11 07:32 PM
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To: YourMajestyKen

It's kind of a poem for you to decide what you take from it.

To:M!cH@3l 001

Thanks friend, I'm glad you like it.

Feel free, the both of you to post as you like and say what you take from it.
To: YourMajestyKen

It's kind of a poem for you to decide what you take from it.

To:M!cH@3l 001

Thanks friend, I'm glad you like it.

Feel free, the both of you to post as you like and say what you take from it.

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03-13-11 03:26 PM
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Not bad. I enjoyed your advanced word choice you used in it. What's it called?





Not bad. I enjoyed your advanced word choice you used in it. What's it called?

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03-13-11 06:58 PM
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Why thank you Mattishere5555!

The poem really doesn't have much of a title, if any of you can come up with one, I'll gladly give you 100 viz
Why thank you Mattishere5555!

The poem really doesn't have much of a title, if any of you can come up with one, I'll gladly give you 100 viz

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03-13-11 08:22 PM
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I've got a good title. How about "No Escape"?





I've got a good title. How about "No Escape"?

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You give a fish a man, he'll eat for a year!

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03-23-11 06:40 PM
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this is a good first poem. sounds like its bout death too me.
this is a good first poem. sounds like its bout death too me.

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