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07-17-10 03:38 PM
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Title: Love It
Writer: LunaRoseAngel
Category: Romantic
Note: This is a romantic poem that was made when I was in love with a certain guy I knew but never told him that I loved him I should of I guess we all make mistakes he was a sweet guy i'll never forget him.
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I feel your hands in my hair.
I feel your breath on my neck.
I feel your body pressed so close to mine.
I feel your lips on my throat.
I feel your hands move to my back and your lips work their way up to mine.
I feel you and I love it.

I hear you say you love me.
I hear you whisper my name.
I hear you tell me I'm the only one for you.
I hear your breath in my ear.
I hear your soft snores as I fall asleep.
I hear you and I love it.

I see you as I run into your arms.
I see your face break through my world of darkness.
I see you fight away my fears.
I see you wipe away my tears.
I see you're in love with me.
I see you and I love it.

I taste your lips.
I taste your tongue.
I taste your throat as I kiss it.
I taste your love.
I taste your passion.
I taste you and I love it.

I smell your colone as I hold you.
I smell your shampoo as I hug you.
I smell your toothpaste as I kiss you.
I smell your excitement as you cuddle me.
I smell the smell I've been waiting so long to smell.
I smell you and I love it.

I feel you.
I hear you.
I see you.
I taste you.
I smell you.
I do all these things and I love it.

I'm finally with you.
You're finally here.
I love it.
I love you.
Title: Love It
Writer: LunaRoseAngel
Category: Romantic
Note: This is a romantic poem that was made when I was in love with a certain guy I knew but never told him that I loved him I should of I guess we all make mistakes he was a sweet guy i'll never forget him.
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I feel your hands in my hair.
I feel your breath on my neck.
I feel your body pressed so close to mine.
I feel your lips on my throat.
I feel your hands move to my back and your lips work their way up to mine.
I feel you and I love it.

I hear you say you love me.
I hear you whisper my name.
I hear you tell me I'm the only one for you.
I hear your breath in my ear.
I hear your soft snores as I fall asleep.
I hear you and I love it.

I see you as I run into your arms.
I see your face break through my world of darkness.
I see you fight away my fears.
I see you wipe away my tears.
I see you're in love with me.
I see you and I love it.

I taste your lips.
I taste your tongue.
I taste your throat as I kiss it.
I taste your love.
I taste your passion.
I taste you and I love it.

I smell your colone as I hold you.
I smell your shampoo as I hug you.
I smell your toothpaste as I kiss you.
I smell your excitement as you cuddle me.
I smell the smell I've been waiting so long to smell.
I smell you and I love it.

I feel you.
I hear you.
I see you.
I taste you.
I smell you.
I do all these things and I love it.

I'm finally with you.
You're finally here.
I love it.
I love you.
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(edited by LunaRoseAngel on 07-17-10 03:40 PM)    

07-17-10 04:46 PM
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That was too romantic for me,lol
I'm just kidding
Honestly, it was really good !
You must be really in love with that guy
That was too romantic for me,lol
I'm just kidding
Honestly, it was really good !
You must be really in love with that guy
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07-19-10 10:32 AM
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Yes I did love him by making mistakes they say you learn from them and for me I have to bad he moved away so I have not been able to keep in contact with him hopefully he knew deep inside that I loved him.
Yes I did love him by making mistakes they say you learn from them and for me I have to bad he moved away so I have not been able to keep in contact with him hopefully he knew deep inside that I loved him.
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07-19-10 10:42 AM
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Oh, that's so sad...
Maybe one day you'll meet each other again
Oh, that's so sad...
Maybe one day you'll meet each other again
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07-19-10 10:47 AM
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Here's another poem that was written by me that was another take on how I felt I have alot of other romantic poems that I have written in the past people been telling me you should make a career out of being a poet you have alot of talent.

~ Purest Feeling ~ By LunaRoseAngel

Eyes, resting on my face
It makes me feel
What my empty, ragged heart is surprised at
So surprised, oh, so surprised
The feelings that tap on the heart's door

We always wanted to feel like this
Dreamt of it, a far-off fantasy
A beautiful, soaring thing,
Delicate like a dried flower, or
A dragonfly's wing

Pure like a wisp of a rose fragrance
Breathe it in, so sweet, so full, so close
So natural and easy
Like nothing else
Like nothing that can be seen or touched

The pain that can be felt
Like streaks of anger and rejection on the fragile spirit
Is dulled
Dulled, oh, so dulled
By just the sound of your words.
Here's another poem that was written by me that was another take on how I felt I have alot of other romantic poems that I have written in the past people been telling me you should make a career out of being a poet you have alot of talent.

~ Purest Feeling ~ By LunaRoseAngel

Eyes, resting on my face
It makes me feel
What my empty, ragged heart is surprised at
So surprised, oh, so surprised
The feelings that tap on the heart's door

We always wanted to feel like this
Dreamt of it, a far-off fantasy
A beautiful, soaring thing,
Delicate like a dried flower, or
A dragonfly's wing

Pure like a wisp of a rose fragrance
Breathe it in, so sweet, so full, so close
So natural and easy
Like nothing else
Like nothing that can be seen or touched

The pain that can be felt
Like streaks of anger and rejection on the fragile spirit
Is dulled
Dulled, oh, so dulled
By just the sound of your words.
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07-19-10 10:54 AM
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That's good too, but, to be honest, I prefer the first one. Because it's more full of passion!
It seems that you're really good at love poems
That's good too, but, to be honest, I prefer the first one. Because it's more full of passion!
It seems that you're really good at love poems
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07-19-10 11:03 AM
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~ To My Future Love ~ By LunaRoseAngel

Hey Future Love,

I didn’t know how to start this letter
Dear, or hello, couldn’t decide which sound better.
I went for the informal because I’m not trying to impress
Try to make it laid back so there’s no need to stress.
I know I don’t know your name—but someday I hope
We’ll meet on the street and no longer be alone.
Sometimes I gaze up at the stars and imagine how it will be—
Where will it happen? Will you just turn and look at me?
Will we discover the meaning of “love at first sight?”
Perhaps it will take one or two nights—
Laying out under the stars and discovering the mysteries
Asking questions that have eluded the minds of many for centuries.
Maybe it will be our laughter that floats in the air—
That makes us turn in the right direction, at that moment, right there.
Our eyes will meet, and it will be just like in a movie
We’ll smile at each other, and you’ll ask me out for a cup of coffee.
Oh the possibilities, they haunt me in my sleep
All the secrets I want to share but for now I keep.
Each poem I write makes me somehow feel closer to you
Based on emotions that I know to be true.
When life gets me down, I look up at the night sky
For a long moment, I’m silent but eventually I’ll sigh—
Someday we’ll meet, and it’ll be like we had never been apart
Because you know when you’ve found the one
That completes your heart.

I look at the letter, tears roll down my cheeks
I rest my head on my pillow, and try to sleep.
Slowly the letter slips from my hands—
Tumbles to the ground, but the wind has other plans.
Out the window, it soars through the night
Travels the world in its magnificent flight—
And gets caught in a branch, outside his room;
Where inside he is dreaming of the love to come soon.
~ To My Future Love ~ By LunaRoseAngel

Hey Future Love,

I didn’t know how to start this letter
Dear, or hello, couldn’t decide which sound better.
I went for the informal because I’m not trying to impress
Try to make it laid back so there’s no need to stress.
I know I don’t know your name—but someday I hope
We’ll meet on the street and no longer be alone.
Sometimes I gaze up at the stars and imagine how it will be—
Where will it happen? Will you just turn and look at me?
Will we discover the meaning of “love at first sight?”
Perhaps it will take one or two nights—
Laying out under the stars and discovering the mysteries
Asking questions that have eluded the minds of many for centuries.
Maybe it will be our laughter that floats in the air—
That makes us turn in the right direction, at that moment, right there.
Our eyes will meet, and it will be just like in a movie
We’ll smile at each other, and you’ll ask me out for a cup of coffee.
Oh the possibilities, they haunt me in my sleep
All the secrets I want to share but for now I keep.
Each poem I write makes me somehow feel closer to you
Based on emotions that I know to be true.
When life gets me down, I look up at the night sky
For a long moment, I’m silent but eventually I’ll sigh—
Someday we’ll meet, and it’ll be like we had never been apart
Because you know when you’ve found the one
That completes your heart.

I look at the letter, tears roll down my cheeks
I rest my head on my pillow, and try to sleep.
Slowly the letter slips from my hands—
Tumbles to the ground, but the wind has other plans.
Out the window, it soars through the night
Travels the world in its magnificent flight—
And gets caught in a branch, outside his room;
Where inside he is dreaming of the love to come soon.
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(edited by LunaRoseAngel on 07-19-10 11:04 AM)    

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